Alright, during my free time at work when I can't go online on TMM, I write on my book to pass the time. And so I have scanned all 13 pages of what I wrote (Took me half an hour just to scan )
But here they are
Note: I write...eh really...really tiny
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"Humans are the very reason our existence is relevant. Without them, gods have no meaning. We have no right to tell them what's right and wrong, for only they're their own masters..."
I see you haven't made some of the corrections on paper. I hope you plan on fixing those when typing it. (like the one part where you put the female character's name as "Jasmine" instead of Jaz)