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Proper Etiquette.

Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2012 7:30 pm
by ShadowKnux372
(Well, here's another new one from me, and it's something different than my usual fare, so we'll see how it goes. And don't worry, for those wondering; it doesn't share the same subject matter as the last one, which surprised and shocked some people a bit too much. :lol: )

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(Also, apologies if I ended up getting the German parts wrong in some way. I tried to look things up and get them as right as possible, but I'm not perfect, as this story probably attests to. :lol: )

Re: Proper Etiquette.

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 3:06 am
by ShadowTengu
Absolutely beautiful man! This, in my opinion, perfectly describes what the Dhampir strives to accomplish. She turned the prudish Vamp into a loving wife in a believable way(Personally was struggling to imagine just how a Dhampir makes a Vamp fear for their relationship, now I'm not :XD: ) Plus the, almost literal, day and night difference in the Vampire's disposition is astounding. In short I like it a lot! :haha:

And you shouldn't worry about shocking people with your work. Sure your last story sparked a debate but I thought it was relatively harmless, given the source material of course...

Anyway, keep up the touching reads man! I always enjoy em! :^^v:

Re: Proper Etiquette.

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 6:50 pm
by Hood
Damn, Shadow, for a moment I seriously thought you had fallen to the dark, bottomless pit of NTR. Thanks Deruella, it was not the case.
I mean, she weakened, tied her and screw her husband in front of her...It really impressed me when she begged

"Not his blood! I'll do anything, but leave his blood alone! It's mine!" Elmira finally shouted, tears forming at the edge of her eyes"

I mean, Elmira is vampire, and she begged like that,...fortunately, Damiana´s goal was a righteous one.
Go, Damiana, Go!!!

Re: Proper Etiquette.

Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 6:55 pm
by Kmon13
One word came to mind when I read this....

Dhampir's demon realm marriage counsellors to the vampires race. :haha:

Still it had me going for a moment before reading the end.... :happyness:

Re: Proper Etiquette.

Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2012 9:32 am
by Vendettadabeast
This was very steamy, makes me wish i had a threesome with a Vampire and Dhampir.