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Hollow Woman

Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:51 am
by Pierce
Warning: Contains straight shota.
Note: Yes, this' inspired by a particular deleted scene with Rhona Mitra from Hollow Man.
Spoiler: show
Somewhere in the demon realm...

Alvin was a spiritual teenager. He's usually an outgoing person and works out regularly, helping others in need by running errands for the disabled and needy folk. Most women, or well... succubi took a fancy to his youthful visage, giving cute winks, glances and awes. However all of them usually stayed loyal and kept to their husbands before moving on... well, almost all. One took a liking of conviction to his appearance, but was too afraid to act out her desires out of shyness.

Meet Mayford Brown, otherwise known as May to her small community. Being the only succubus who hasn't gotten a partner yet. Despite being 23, having long red hair that stopped at her waistline, peach light skin, firm bust and curvy bee-tight hips to compliment her dress. She would avoid Alvin whenever he approaches. Much to his unawareness.

One night, she felt frustrated after going by day after day around many couples, which only served to heighten her envy of being single. May decided to enter a bar, seeing a Dullahan knight guarding the front entrance while a partying group of succubi and men drank to their heart's content, as they were singing wildly and cheering about while May ignored them and sat down on a stool, expressing a depressed sigh before a bartender approached her. He was a stocky fella with a receding hairline, clean shaven and sporting an apron.

"Hey Otis." May greeted with a low tone, before leaning her elbow on the counter and pressing her fingers between her forehead in disappointment.

"Still haven't gotten lucky yet huh?" Otis said, polishing up a glass cup before settling it down in front of May.

"You sure know me too well huh? I take it you can guess what I'll be havin'." May smiled a bit before her long face returned even more droopier than normal.

"Of course, the usual scotch." Otis then grabbed a bottle of scotch, popped open the cork and poured down the alcoholic beverage into her cup as she took a fair sip from it, giving off an embittered expression from the aftertaste. "I've seen that expression before in some ladies like yourself... Fancy a guy lately?"

Hearing that, May quickly gulped down her drink and slid the cup back to Otis, which lightly bounced off his belly as he chuckled.
"Yeah? So what's it to you?" She coldly asked.

"Tell me about this person, perhaps I could help you out with that sort of problem." he offered, pouring another cup before pushing it back to May again, as she took a small sip from it.

"Tall guy, hunky lookin' fella, pretty face, yet everytime I get near him I clam up and hide."

"What is it you fear about him?" Otis asked, grabbing a nearby cup from a customer who left it behind and started to wash it in a small sink.

"I just want to squeeze myself on top of him, ride him like no tomorrow, but I don't want him to know it being me... and how exactly could you help me with that?" May asked as she finished her cup and slid it back to Otis.

"Take a look behind you." he gestured with a finger point as May turned around to see a man who appeared to be floating in midair trying to fly, only to discover a minute later that there was a succubus and another man holding him from below as the brunt of his weight came crashing down on the pair as the group laughed while May raised an eyebrow. "That my dear is my special concoction, the hollow drink, makes the drinker invisible for a certain period of time."

"That's quite an interesting concoction you have, how long exactly does the effect last?"

"Hmm, it varies between people, some lasted only mere minutes while a few lasted a good 3 hours before the effects wore off. Given your outward weight and height, I'd probably guess about an hour or so."

"Sounds interesting, I'd like to try a bottle of that." May firmed requested.

"You sure? You only need to drink about two shots to get the effects kicking in." Otis reluctantly reached back for a clear white bottle and placing it on the counter, but not sliding it forward without hearing May's response.

"I'm certain, I could have some fun with this. How much for the drink?" May fished out a few gold coins and slammed it down on the counter, but Otis picked up the coins and handed them back to May.

"It's on me, let's just call it even for a favour one of your friends did."

"Oh really?" May smirked a bit before giving him a fistbump. "Well wish me luck." As she walked out of the bar holding the bottle on hand.

"Good luck." Otis replied as he turned back to polishing his cups while May walked towards home, entering inside and sitting down in her one-bedroom house. She dropped down onto her small bed and took a deep sigh, looking at the bottle still on hand before placing it on her small dresser beside her bed. May then turned her head facing towards the window, seeing a carriage pass by as she groaned again, looking up at the purple skies that glowed above.

"Alright.... here goes." May sat up and looked at the bottle once more, twisting the cork until a *pop* went off. She then tipped the bottle upwards and proceeded to take a light swig until a few gulps was achieved. She then placed back the bottle and dropped back down onto her bed after placing the cork in. Getting up moments later, May stood up and approached a vertical mirror on the wall, still appearing visible.

"Why isn't it working?" She mused, just moments after saying that, she could see her visage become translucent, before looking down at her hands to see her whole body fading slowly until she looked back at the mirror to discover... nothing.

"I-I can't see myself." May delighted, jumping blissfully a few times before exiting her house. Closing the door behind her and walking out in the open, with no one noticing her presence at all. 'It really worked just like he said!' she thought happily, then freezing suddenly at Alvin walking passed her, not noticing her presence like everyone else as she sighed in relief and studied his looks closeup that she couldn't before.

'Aww, he's just so cute~!' May thought and squealed to herself as her former shyness appeared completely absent as she gazed at his youthful body more, her legs lightly trembled at the thoughts running through her head as Alvin walked down the street, stopping at a small house not far from her own home.

"Now where did I put those keys?" Alvin dug into his pockets to search for his keys until he fumbled them out and accidentally dropped them on the ground. He gently leaned forward to pick up his keys as May watched his backside, showing a tented bulge concealed underneath as he eventually stood up and unlocked the front door. The single glimpse of that was enough for May to feel her temperature rise, her inhibitions coming close to breaking as she quickly slipped into his home moments before Alvin closed it shut. May simply looked around his room to discover lots of old artifacts strewn about.

'So I live in a pigsty while he lives like a pack rat? I think we'll get along fine~' May smiled as Alvin walked towards the bathroom and proceeded to undress himself. May's sights remained glued to his body while he slipped off his shirt and cast it aside, inadvertantly hitting May as she caught it in midair and gave it a deep whiff, smelling his hard working fragrance as she quickly dropped the shirt when she brought her eyes back to Alvin unbuckling and slipping off his pants, this time she could she could see he had been walking around with a throbbing erection hidden as the mere sight of it twitching caused her legs to get wet as she dropped her fingers below to her nether regions, gently rubbing her clit softly as she watched Alvin step inside the shower room and douse himself in steaming hot water. The sight aroused her more as she spread out her lips a bit and proceeded to thrust her finger slowly inside as she lightly moaned, low enough as to not raise suspicion.

'I think I'm going crazier~" May moaned lustfully, biting her lip to muffle her own pleasure as Alvin eventually finished his shower, he then slipped on his bath robe as he plopped down on his bed, his hair still soaking wet and his erection still tented in his robe as it slipped out on it's own. May clenched her teeth staring at the throbbing cock twitching lightly as she saw Alvin muttering in frustration.

"Damn rod, blasted wizard putting a spell on me to have it up all the time until someone relieves it twice." He mused before his head lay crooked to the side and falling asleep moments later. May gulped a bit from the urging sensation as she quietly walked up to Alvin and leaned forward with her face facing his cock, staring at it with curiosity. Alvin's slumber turned to heavy snoring as he was fast asleep.

"I've never seen anything like this before..." May blushed harder, sweat rolling down her face as she touched the tip with her index finger, then jerking back in caution, but Alvin remained unaware of her advances. She then moved forward again and slowly wrapped her fingers around his shaft and proceeded to lightly moved her hand up and down, as she brought down her other hand to her nether regions and started to rub her folds, already starting to drivel between her legs as she moved her hand faster against his hard shaft, Alvin starting to moan despite May's carelessness as he spoke.

"Ah~..." he moaned, May noticing he was enjoying it while he didn't open his eyes. Her confidence rising as she took away her hand and sticked out her tongue to lick the precum trailing for the tip.

'Mmm, I'm losing my mind...' May's self-control was losing hold as she grabbed her top and pulled off her cleavage, feeling her breasts exposed in the air as she gently pressed them between his shaft while fellating him at the same time. Alvin moaning much more quietly and softly in response as his legs spread out more widely, giving May easier access as she sucked and licked up as much as she could from his twitching cock. She pumped her breasts tightly in conjunction with her fellating as she looked up to see Alvin moaning louder, moments away from reaching orgasm as May's instincts overrided any thoughts of stopping as she pumped him faster and faster before he eventually moaned out and released his semen deep into May's mouth, as her eyes opened wide suddenly from the sudden output of his seed filling up her mouth while she simply slurped and swallowed whatever she could from his release before taking her mouth out of his still-hard shaft and licking off any leftovers remaining.

"So delicious~" May delighted, but spoke out rather too loudly, enough for Alvin to hear her voice. He quickly bolted upwards and knocking May back a bit, scanning his surroundings. "Who's there?" He demanded as his eyes saw nothing but his antiques lying around. He then noticed his cock having been moistened mysteriously and saw semen floating in midair, May realizing he saw some of his semen still leftover on her mouth as she panicked quietly. Alvin then tried to reach for a nearby sword but only felt both of his arms pinned on the bed. His mind suddenly raced and panicked as he felt someone on top of him, but not being able to see his assailant as he tried to call for help, but suddenly felt something warm, bitter and alcoholic taste running down his mouth as he closed his eyes and tried to resist, struggling to get his feet under the middle in an attempt to kick and push off his attacker, only to feel his legs being spread apart under the unknown weight and feeling his hard cock rubbing against something fabric.

Alvin tried to muffle harder against the wet sensation in his mouth and squirmed under the unknown presence pinning him down, next he felt the fabric turn to a wet dripping meaty sensation rubbing against his hard shaft before feeling the tip being squeezed tightly all around, not being able to stuggle freely against all his might as tears rolled down his eyes.

'No... too soon...' He thought before feeling his entire cock being constricted whole by a tight but wet pleasure as he grew less resistant, feeling the hips being slammed onto as if something was violating him. All that he could see moving his head below was a trail of blood soaked around his tightened member as his head was moved straight up again, feeling a warm tongue thrust into his mouth once more as he released the grip from his sword and dropped it under the bed as he no longer resisted the sensation. He felt his mouth no longer being invaded as he heard a feminine voice moan out instead while he moaned in sync with the voice, he could feel his wrists being released gently and feeling it hold his hands instead, taking in the pleasure without resistance as he moved his hips instinctively against his will and heard a louder moan echo in front of him, feeling the urge to cum approaching.

"I can't hold it much longer~" Alvin tried to hold back his orgasm as he only felt his hips move faster on it's own while feeling the constriction tighten around his bloodied cock being washed away with a clear sticky substance before he felt his mouth invaded once more with the same tongue sensation running through his mouth as his moans remained barely muffled in sync with hers as he pushed up his hips upwards as he could go and felt his cock spurt deeply into whatever was violating him while he arched his back in pleasure, before his back dropped down and starting to pass out, feeling something heavy plop down on his body whole without care due to exhaustion, hearing a light whisper.

"That was my first time..." Was all Alvin could faintly hear before finally going into a long slumber.

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Hours had passed as Alvin woke up a bit, sitting up and looking at himself before looking towards the sunlight beaming through his window blinds. He felt nothing on top of him unlike last night as he scratched the back of his head.

'Was that all a dream?' He thought before he turned his body and placed his foot on the ground, but felt a soft unusual sensation instead of the carpet floor as he jerked his feet back and looked where he was stepping on: A partially dressed woman with red long hair and her breasts exposed, drooling in her sleep, he then quickly looked under his bath robes to see his flaccidness lightly blood stained as his face grew flustered.

"T-This wasn't a dream?!" He yelled out as May woke up slowly...

(The End)

(Going to depict a few scenes soon)