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Wicked Manticore

Posted: Sun Sep 15, 2013 7:51 am
by Amanomiya
My second attempt at a fic. The story is the tale of a young knight on his first command running afoul of a manticore. Thought I'd cross post it, see if anyone likes it, hopefully you enjoy. Oh, and feel free to leave any constructive criticism.

Wicked Manticore
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Re: Wicked Manticore

Posted: Sun Sep 15, 2013 8:22 am
by Kmon13
Wow the Order Knight never stood a chance ....

I have to wonder what other stories you have planned in the works. :perv:

I'm going to keep an eye out for more of your works Amanomiya....

Re: Wicked Manticore

Posted: Sun Sep 15, 2013 9:38 am
by Amanomiya
I'm thinking of a Gazer one-shot next, but I want to get some more Titanomachy stuff out of the way first.

Re: Wicked Manticore

Posted: Sun Sep 15, 2013 8:12 pm
by Hood
Sweeeet! I knew the manticore was into hardcore stuff, but wow! You really succeeded in portraying her as a vicious femdominist. Love the prowling scenes, It really felt like if some sort of predator was chasing its prey. Also, I'm still thinking that Aiden stung himself on purpose in the last paragraph. :twisted:

Re: Wicked Manticore

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2014 11:07 am
by Zadocfish

Re: Wicked Manticore

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2014 2:40 pm
by Feathers
Wut.

Uh..interesting video there sir.

Re: Wicked Manticore

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2014 8:10 pm
by Zadocfish
NSP has videos for every wildly inappropriate thing you could want.