Succubus Nation - Part 34

A mote of man drifting through the Kingdom of Heaven and Hell.

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Succubus Nation - Part 34

Post by SIERRA-116 »

Cross-posting this from MGU since I'm sure you would appreciate a nice (in my opinion) erotica.

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Snared
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The Business of Depravity
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Servitude
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Mutual Desire
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Being Informed
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Bloodletting
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Acquaintances
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Blood Communion
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Things Happen
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The Witchdoctor, Part 1
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The Witchdoctor, Part 2
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Intimate Friendship
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In the Serpent's Grasp, Part 1
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In the Serpent's Grasp, Part 2
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Daggersford Ambush
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A Succubus' Feast
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The Cat's Retribution
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Nature's Embrace, Part 1
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Nature's Embrace, Part 2
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Designated Meal
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Journey to the Succubus Nation
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The Under Realm City
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Devious Streets
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A Slimy Encounter, Part 1
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A Slimy Encounter, Part 2
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The Bar Maiden's Plaything - Part 1
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The Bar Maiden's Plaything - Part 2
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The Noble Succubus, Part 1
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The Noble Succubus, Part 2
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The Silken Parlour, Part 1
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The Silken Parlour, Part 2
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Back to Work
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Aquatic Acquaintance
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Meal for Two
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And now to introduce Side Stories! Whenever I want to take a break from Brack's experiences, I'll probably write up a quick little, separate story to do with Succubi, spanning many eras, depending on what I'm feeling like. The first is about Brack, and has influence on the main story, just not right now.

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Side Story One - The Purge
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Side Story 3 - Adventurer Party Ambush
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Side Story 4 - Stumbling upon Lust
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Side Story 5 - The Farmer's Wife
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Side Story 6 - Alleyway Oral
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To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

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And I'll cross-post my review, since this is a site I frequent. :D

Aside from the deadly ending this sex scene has got to be one of my favorite descriptions of monster girl sex, you didn't skimp at all on the exotic nature of it, how she used every part of herself (lips, tongue, tail, wings, hands) to enhance the experience, how her vagina functioned like a mouth etc. So I hold on to hope based on your "not what it seems" note at the end (the note is on the version posted on MGU).

One thing that would make it easier to read though is to put spaces between the paragraphs.
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

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It'd be nicer though if other people commented. Nothing against you, just something different is always appreciated.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

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SIERRA-116 wrote:It'd be nicer though if other people commented. Nothing against you, just something different is always appreciated.
Yup, unfortunately even on the best stories only a small minority of readers will comment.
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

Post by SIERRA-116 »

It seems to me that my lesser stories received more attention back on MGU when I was naive, an amateur, and a little stupid.

I mean, I cringe a little reading my earlier stories. And now, when I believe I've improved substantially, there's fewer viewers.

Maybe it's dropped off a little over time because of what happened with KC.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

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Well admittedly its not a full story right now so much as a short establishing chase and single sex scene (well done as the sex scene is). It feels more like a prologue than a "part 1." You may get more attention when there is more to respond to.

And also, when you have more of a story to post, you may try the site literotica if you want more exposure. I still get responses to my old stories there, even if most of them consist of "when are you going to write more?" ;)
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

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I suppose I could.

Problem is, I'm loath to having to re-do or alter all the HTML I have in my stories for a different site.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

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Part 2 is up now.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 2

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Very good so far! I can hardly wait for the next part.

As the saying goes lawyers come from hell, but it looks like bureaucrats do too! :lol:
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 3

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No plot this time, just a nice, juicy sex scene.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 5

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New part up.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 5

Post by Hood »

Isn't this one the story
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about a guy who supposedly died but then, he next awakes alive as the employee of the succubus who banged him?
If it is, try to fix the text a bit, SIERRA. It was interesting but I remember I stopped reading after the second chapter thanks to the wall of text.
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 5

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Yes it is, but fixing the wall of text isn't easy; the forum editor doesn't like it, and I can't press enter everywhere to break it out without breaking the flow of the writing I had when writing it.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 5

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Another great chapter!

I eagerly await the next instalment.
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 6

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Part 6 is up.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 6

Post by Perentie »

Nice addition, it does leave me wondering though why Brack hasn't asked anyone about how he ended up at the mansion. Sure he may think any answer he gets is a lie, but some information is better than none right?
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 6

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They might not really know how he got there, just that he's a new addition.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 6

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SIERRA-116 wrote:They might not really know how he got there, just that he's a new addition.
Okay, then why not ask the succubus herself as surely she would know given she intentionally selected him and knew where he lived? She doesn't seem to want to hide anything from him.
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 8

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Got a new part up.
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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Re: Succubus Nation - Parts 9, 10, 11, 12 and 13.

Post by SIERRA-116 »

Been a while since this has been updated, so here is a super post of five whole parts! Enjoy~
To find him, you must forget the stories...

Forget the legends...

You have to do more than walk in his footsteps...

For he is more than the sum of his actions...

I tell you this, not because I trust you...

But because all our lives are at stake...

Because the seeds of our future... are sown in his past...
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