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Succubus Nation - Part 34

Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2016 6:30 am
by SIERRA-116
Cross-posting this from MGU since I'm sure you would appreciate a nice (in my opinion) erotica.

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Snared
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The Business of Depravity
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Servitude
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Mutual Desire
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Being Informed
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Bloodletting
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Acquaintances
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Blood Communion
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Things Happen
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The Witchdoctor, Part 1
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The Witchdoctor, Part 2
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Intimate Friendship
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In the Serpent's Grasp, Part 1
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In the Serpent's Grasp, Part 2
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Daggersford Ambush
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A Succubus' Feast
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The Cat's Retribution
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Nature's Embrace, Part 1
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Nature's Embrace, Part 2
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Designated Meal
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Journey to the Succubus Nation
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The Under Realm City
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Devious Streets
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A Slimy Encounter, Part 1
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A Slimy Encounter, Part 2
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The Bar Maiden's Plaything - Part 1
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The Bar Maiden's Plaything - Part 2
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The Noble Succubus, Part 1
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The Noble Succubus, Part 2
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The Silken Parlour, Part 1
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The Silken Parlour, Part 2
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Back to Work
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Aquatic Acquaintance
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Meal for Two
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And now to introduce Side Stories! Whenever I want to take a break from Brack's experiences, I'll probably write up a quick little, separate story to do with Succubi, spanning many eras, depending on what I'm feeling like. The first is about Brack, and has influence on the main story, just not right now.

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Side Story One - The Purge
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Side Story 3 - Adventurer Party Ambush
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Side Story 4 - Stumbling upon Lust
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Side Story 5 - The Farmer's Wife
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Side Story 6 - Alleyway Oral
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Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2016 4:28 pm
by Perentie
And I'll cross-post my review, since this is a site I frequent. :D

Aside from the deadly ending this sex scene has got to be one of my favorite descriptions of monster girl sex, you didn't skimp at all on the exotic nature of it, how she used every part of herself (lips, tongue, tail, wings, hands) to enhance the experience, how her vagina functioned like a mouth etc. So I hold on to hope based on your "not what it seems" note at the end (the note is on the version posted on MGU).

One thing that would make it easier to read though is to put spaces between the paragraphs.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2016 10:40 pm
by SIERRA-116
It'd be nicer though if other people commented. Nothing against you, just something different is always appreciated.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2016 11:04 pm
by Perentie
SIERRA-116 wrote:It'd be nicer though if other people commented. Nothing against you, just something different is always appreciated.
Yup, unfortunately even on the best stories only a small minority of readers will comment.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2016 12:52 am
by SIERRA-116
It seems to me that my lesser stories received more attention back on MGU when I was naive, an amateur, and a little stupid.

I mean, I cringe a little reading my earlier stories. And now, when I believe I've improved substantially, there's fewer viewers.

Maybe it's dropped off a little over time because of what happened with KC.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2016 2:50 am
by Perentie
Well admittedly its not a full story right now so much as a short establishing chase and single sex scene (well done as the sex scene is). It feels more like a prologue than a "part 1." You may get more attention when there is more to respond to.

And also, when you have more of a story to post, you may try the site literotica if you want more exposure. I still get responses to my old stories there, even if most of them consist of "when are you going to write more?" ;)

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2016 6:22 am
by SIERRA-116
I suppose I could.

Problem is, I'm loath to having to re-do or alter all the HTML I have in my stories for a different site.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 1

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2016 1:16 pm
by SIERRA-116
Part 2 is up now.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 2

Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 12:14 am
by Xesh001
Very good so far! I can hardly wait for the next part.

As the saying goes lawyers come from hell, but it looks like bureaucrats do too! :lol:

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 3

Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2016 11:23 pm
by SIERRA-116
No plot this time, just a nice, juicy sex scene.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 5

Posted: Fri May 27, 2016 8:35 am
by SIERRA-116
New part up.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 5

Posted: Fri May 27, 2016 9:49 pm
by Hood
Isn't this one the story
Spoiler: show
about a guy who supposedly died but then, he next awakes alive as the employee of the succubus who banged him?
If it is, try to fix the text a bit, SIERRA. It was interesting but I remember I stopped reading after the second chapter thanks to the wall of text.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 5

Posted: Sat May 28, 2016 5:23 am
by SIERRA-116
Yes it is, but fixing the wall of text isn't easy; the forum editor doesn't like it, and I can't press enter everywhere to break it out without breaking the flow of the writing I had when writing it.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 5

Posted: Sun May 29, 2016 9:05 pm
by Xesh001
Another great chapter!

I eagerly await the next instalment.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 6

Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2016 2:10 pm
by SIERRA-116
Part 6 is up.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 6

Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2016 12:54 am
by Perentie
Nice addition, it does leave me wondering though why Brack hasn't asked anyone about how he ended up at the mansion. Sure he may think any answer he gets is a lie, but some information is better than none right?

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 6

Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2016 4:10 am
by SIERRA-116
They might not really know how he got there, just that he's a new addition.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 6

Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2016 11:37 am
by Perentie
SIERRA-116 wrote:They might not really know how he got there, just that he's a new addition.
Okay, then why not ask the succubus herself as surely she would know given she intentionally selected him and knew where he lived? She doesn't seem to want to hide anything from him.

Re: Succubus Nation - Part 8

Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2016 8:02 am
by SIERRA-116
Got a new part up.

Re: Succubus Nation - Parts 9, 10, 11, 12 and 13.

Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2016 11:25 pm
by SIERRA-116
Been a while since this has been updated, so here is a super post of five whole parts! Enjoy~