One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

[Hood]

Man, I can't wait for the next chapter. An you know what would be cool (Okay, I'm not anyone to tell you how or what to writte in your story but...) to see a female monster like a another Succubus or female Dullahan taking care of a human child after she killed the child's mother. When she finds the baby after decimating the child's parents, she feel some remorese about what she did and decides to take care of the infant. These events of course, would lift any doubt remaining inside Lucas head and would give Lilith renewed strength and hope to continue her quest, proving that this is, indeed, the right pat, and monster and humans can coexist and help each other. (There, I finally let it out)

And...I'd really love to see a match between Amaranta/Mist and Grimlock Obviously, Grimlock would kick their scaly asses but...(Yes!!! I've been playing Fall of Cybertron!!! Gotta problem with that?)

[Hood]

Is this story...dead?

[Shadow of Legend]

Is this story...dead?

Nope, I just haven't been able to write in it for a while. I'll get back to it soon, I just have to decide on a few things first.

[Hood]

Okay, glad to hear that man

[Shadow of Legend]

Chapter 167 up! Our heroes are making a little progress.


The reason for being so late and stuff? More like "reasons". Real life shit, college work that I had to try and catch up on, lots of stress brought about by my Dad's shitty job, and chaos in general all contributed, as did a bit of a "funk" I went through in which my creativity went AWOL on me, but I think I'm fine now.

Man, I can't wait for the next chapter. An you know what would be cool (Okay, I'm not anyone to tell you how or what to writte in your story but...) to see a female monster like a another Succubus or female Dullahan taking care of a human child after she killed the child's mother. When she finds the baby after decimating the child's parents, she feel some remorese about what she did and decides to take care of the infant. These events of course, would lift any doubt remaining inside Lucas head and would give Lilith renewed strength and hope to continue her quest, proving that this is, indeed, the right pat, and monster and humans can coexist and help each other. (There, I finally let it out)

And...I'd really love to see a match between Amaranta/Mist and Grimlock Obviously, Grimlock would kick their scaly asses but...(Yes!!! I've been playing Fall of Cybertron!!! Gotta problem with that?)

Now that I've posted the next chapter, I can actually reply to this. That wouldn't work at this point in the story, demonic energy and its current properties being partially why. See, the Succubi and Dullahan (I don't know the proper plural for Dullahan, so I'm using this for now) live in the Demon Realm, and humans don't trust them. At all. Because of this, they can't "break away" and go live in humans lands because either humans would gang up on them and kill them or the Demon Lord would hunt them down with a bullshit accusation of insubordination or betrayal, and kill them for shits and giggles. As for demonic energy, it'd most likely warp the child into a "feral" cannibal, and the heartbroken Succubus/Dullahan would have to end the kid. In the rare event that the kid doesn't fall victim to that, then if it's male, there would likely be some straight shota stuff happening due to him becoming an Incubus and lusting after his hot foster mother. If it's female, then after becoming a Succubus, the kid would crave sex and spirit energy, and that'd lead to her foster mother having to help her get with guys in order to feed, unless the foster mother stocks up on enough Demon Realm fruit.

Lucas and Lilith, upon hearing about it, would be saddened if the Succubus/Dullahan had to kill the kid, or uncomfortable/disturbed if the kid turned, especially if no stocking up on Demon Realm fruit was involved.

It may be possible for something to happen like a human family adopting a Lizardman or Salamander, but it'd be very unlikely and the kid would have problems growing up, partly due to his or her human parents not knowing the best way to take care of him or her. The other way around, Lizardmen or Salamanders adopting a human kid, wouldn't work too well due to then being unfamiliar with raising humans.


After Lilith takes over, however, such a thing could easily happen, with a monster of almost any kind killing the kid's parents in self-defense, then "adopting" the kid and raising it herself. A kindhearted human raising an orphaned monster girl would also be very possible.


EDIT: I'm not all that familiar with Transformers, but I'd like to believe that if Zeraine and/or any kids they might have had by then were in danger, Amarantha would win because of mate protection desires and Mama Bear stuff. Same thing with Mist; if her kids were in danger, she'd go Mama Bear, kick major ass, and win. If both of them were together and both went Mama Bear, woe be unto the fool who made it happen.

[Hood]

Man, I love when you give this complete explanations!!! And that makes sense, I totally forgot about the "bad" Demonic Energy in this period of time. I thought it could be possible, since Lilith's friend was on the beach and she said once that she(on some other succubi) wasn't cruel with her human slaves, also Levi the female Dullahan seemd to be quite centered and not that "crazy and murderous" thanks to the influence of demonic energy.

In the rare event that the kid doesn't fall victim to that, then if it's male, there would likely be some straight shota stuff happening due to him becoming an Incubus and lusting after his hot foster mother.

Well...Actually I...don't see anything wrong with this.

And about Transformers...

Spoiler: show

[youtube]i5vK8CCBUKc[/youtube]Well, if we consider that a normal human being would be like the size of a barbie doll (or even smaller) compared to Shockwave, I believe that Grimlcok could easily triplicate or even cuadruplicate Amarantás size and could easily duplicate Mist's size

Anyway, thanks a lot for the new chapter, man.