A reason to live (Manticore)

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Re: A reason to live (Manticore)

Post by Wrandral »

I heard good and bad things about Google docs ( lots of guys counting on it only to cry when google docs lost their files ).

Glad to hear you got your drive back though now i wonder if you'll finish your chapter before Lucifeller post chapter 12 of MGS or not ^^
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Re: A reason to live (Manticore)

Post by Feathers »

This story was quite entertaining for me due to the character personality and humor provided in Chapter 1. Yisha proved the most interesting to me because of her unpredictable behavior.
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Post by Hood »

Yisha is the most cunning manticore ever! I was really amazed when she listed all of her allies. Also, the personality of the "hero" it's something I have never seen before.
There are those who would scorn good-natured people. Even if God himself will
not show his face, a heartful person will one day take God's place in
visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
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Re: A reason to live (Manticore)

Post by [BRindustries] »

A tsundere manticore.......now i have seen it all..... :^^;:

Anyway, no matter how much of a bitch she may be, i must commend lady Une's brainwashing skills, this chap was hardwired down to his very core, no simple feat. Yisha's got a lot of work ahead of her to bring him back to normal. (though she's progressing nicely)

Looking forward to the next chapter :^^:
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Re: A reason to live (Manticore)

Post by Firehorse32 »

Additional chapters forthcoming to this nicely done story?
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