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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)

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Well, I'm back after while...and I'm continuing this for those still interested. By the way if you want to know why I left for a while...
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Some assholes broke into my house and stole a lot of our stuff, and sincerely, I had no desire to write back then


Now that I finally got a bit of...tranquility, well, here is a bit of what you will see.
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the female physician introduced her right hand inside her lab coat and took out a small, rectangular object which she seemed to be pressing repeatedly with her thumb, then she proceeded to place the strange rectangular “thing” near to her right ear. Dr. Reinhardt just stood there, like waiting for something, when all of a sudden.

“Joshua, honey, it’s me, mommy!” The Lilim became stunned when she heard those words, and not by the fact Jenn was talking with someone through that small and strange device. No, her eyes were wide because she just learned her daughter had a child, and like Levi’s children, said infant was probably human. She kept listening cautiously.

“Oh honey, I’m so sorry but I’ll have to stay at the hospital for a few more hours; yes, an emergency and…hey why don’t’ you come here, would you like to? I’ll send someone to pick you up and then we’ll order your favorite pizza!” Now, this picked the Lilim’s interest, she was about to meet her third “grandchild” the same day she met the other two .
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)

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Great to have you back man,it's been weird without ya around. Glad you're comfortable enough to start writing again,been waiting to see more of this and other stories your on or collabing in. (hint,hint,) ;)

Also
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Sorry to hear you went through that, hopefully you and your fam,can get through it, and I pray whoever did it gets caught nd if gor some reason they don't,trust me they will eventually get what they got coming too them. What goes around comes around at the wrong damn time,they''ll find that out soon enough.
Glad your back homey.
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Damn sorry to heard that cant even be save at your home now, but im glad u ok n back
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Damn sorry to heard that cant even be save at your home now,
but im glad u ok n back
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)

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Thanks for your kind words, guys. By the way, should I add the Levi vs Jenn fight in this next chapter, or should I wait a bit more?
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Surprise us,totally your call man.
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Your call bro i like surprise
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)

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I'll try to post the next chapter this week, though I´m not entirely sure when...anyway, Lotan is going to learn that messing with her grand children's heads might not be such a good idea after all.
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After diving inside Robert's memories, the matron Lilim just kept staring at the space, like in some sort of trance. Worried, one of the Kikimora maids asked

"Mi-misstress, are you alright?"

Lotan blinked a few more times, at the same time she placed both hands at the sides of her head. Then, she simply said

"Uuunnngh...My head is full of fuck..."
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Take you time Hood-man If you got personal business to deal with don't worry we'll still be here. :^^v:
(Yeah I read what happened....) :^^;:
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Yeah, we'll be here,just take your time dog.
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The last drop was reached when one evening, Amy tried to stab her succubus mother with a kitchen knife. Thanks to her keen senses, Leviathan was able to avoid the fatal blow, but what she saw next, froze her blood like anything else before. Standing next to the couch where she was sitting a few moments ago, was Amy; both wrist lacerated and blood flowing wildly from them; the girl was grinning madly. She opened her mouth and with a trembling voice, she said.

“Mommy, let’s go…Let’s be together…forever…” She extended her arm towards her mother, inviting her to come closer to her, as a torrent of warm blood emanated from her lacerated wrists.
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Any good idea that could explain how the hell dinosaurs ended in the MGE's world?
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There was dinosaurs in the MGE world, or is?
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No, there was none, at least not that I know. I want to use them as some sort of urban legend. Something like "And there were some rare breeds of Dragons that were so powerful that not even the Demon Lord couldn't change them" or "When we were ready to take down our prey, from within the trees, a colossal, black sailed beast, appeared and devoured the deer in one bite" And as you are guessing, they will be more bad ass than Dragons. And wouldn't be awesome to see a Minotaur riding a fully armored triceratops.
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Okay here's some off the top of my head thoughts:

Dinosaurs- The Unbreakable Ones

Legends tell of an ancient lizard type of creature that was immune to all corruption. Their intelligence was especially unique, and in its own category. Now don't misunderstand, young ones, this doesn't mean they were "stupid". A dinosaurs sheer will and ferocity was unmatched by any demonic or angelic being. Dinosaurs were born from not a Demon Lord nor a God, but were born out of the pure instincts of creatures that evolved from single celled organisms of a lifeless planet.

Their only purpose in life was to survive, which meant to flee, eat, or be eaten. These most basic instincts made them completely uncorruptable, since they were born without fear, love, or lust, and only knew of self preservation. Dinosaurs were neither good nor evil, they simply existed to exist. History also tells us that dinosaurs evolved into different creatures, which mimicked the forms of demonic, angelic, and human type creatures. These creatures became to be know as the Unbreakable Ones. Unlike the humans or demons which were turned from a previous form into a mamono, the Unbreakable Ones shared no hybridism with any other creature. They were a pure breed of life, and their only purpose of existence was to survive.

Well, maybe something in there can be of use. Good luck. Hopefully I understood what you were looking for there.. :^^;:
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That's great! But i was looking for an idea that could explain how they were transported from Earth to the MG's world or something like that. That would explain the reason why they are not affected by demonic energy. If you allow me to use your idea, that would be great.
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Oh, whoops. Hmm, perhaps you can use a Japanese inspired deity somewhere in the story, since the MGE is so heavily grounded with Japanese myth? Say this deity/God/monster person was Izanagi, whose name means "he who invites", "invited" over the dinosaurs from a parallel world or alternate dimension with his magic to influence the MG world and add in a new faction. The dinosaurs may be unbreakable, but it doesn't mean they couldn't be summoned or banished. ;)

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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)

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Well I had an idea about the Demon Lord or The Order doing something that transported them. But them I came with another idea.

In the land of Zipangu, Empress Tamamo no Mae was invited by by a Ryu priestess in order to meet her western relatives. But as proud as Dragons are, they keep bragging about there was nothing in the universe that could defeat them. Annoyed by the Dragon's rudeness, empress Tamamo made a bet with the western Lizard

"I'll show you creatures capable not only to best you, but also, capable of breaking you!" Said the Inari empress. The Dragon simply laughed while a mischievous smile formed on the face of the fox Empress.

Or something like that. And after that, I can use your idea, which is awesome!
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That sounds like a good idea to me. So she summons her natural predator! I think you've done it then. :mrgreen:
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)

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Well ,yes. my idea is that MGE Tamamo, is the historical Tamamo, and she knows about Earth and can travel between planets as she desire. I mean, in all stories Tamamo is like an Ubber Goddess. I bet she could probably be more powerful than the Demon Lord. In the end, she showed the dragons (and some other people) that she is always right
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