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Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2012 11:33 pm
by Gamergirl64
Glad you're enjoying the story, so far. :) I hope you guys continue to enjoy reading. Anyways...

Chapter 5 is up!

Happy reading! :)

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2012 3:28 am
by Link_Bakeneko
the mamono are known as youkai in Zipangu huh, I wonder why? lol

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2012 4:46 pm
by Vendettadabeast
So we're gonna meet the resident peacekeeper huh, ths i can't wait to see lol

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2012 10:37 pm
by Gamergirl64
Yup. TMM's own second in command and head policemen is making an appearance. :D I've been planning on adding him in ever since the beginning, and now he finally gets to show up. :^^:

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 11:15 pm
by Gamergirl64
(Sorry for double posting)

Sorry for the really slow updates. I've had some trouble with things that kept me from working on the story. I will try to post the chapters faster, next time.

Chapter 6 is up!

Happy reading! :)

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2012 4:33 am
by Hood
Pierce da Cop, huh? And also, peace keeper in the Demon Realm...makes me wonder if he had to control certain princess in the past? :mrgreen:

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2012 2:00 am
by Vendettadabeast
Hood wrote:Pierce da Cop, huh? And also, peace keeper in the Demon Realm...makes me wonder if he had to control certain princess in the past? :mrgreen:
C'mon hood we all no no one can control her, if anyting she controls you. :haha:

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2012 5:45 am
by Hood
Vendettadabeast wrote:C'mon hood we all no no one can control her, if anyting she controls you. :haha:
Actually, I'm the one pulling the strings :twisted:

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 2:20 am
by Gamergirl64
I'm really, really sorry about this one taking so long. I was so busy because of Holidays, and other stuff. I will try my best to post them sooner.

Chapter 7 is up!

Happy reading! :)

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 9:15 pm
by Vendettadabeast
It would make more sense for her to travel with pierce anyway, since he knows his way to te demon realm,so the two musketeer's head out tomorrow,this is gonna be one hell of adventure.

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 9:23 pm
by Gamergirl64
I don't want to spoil anything, but he's not the only one. ;)

Bah!! Stupid writers block just takes me right away. :Wall: This better not take me so long to finish a chapter, again.

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:03 pm
by Gamergirl64
Ok, now I have a question for you people. As you would have read in Hannah and the Demon Boy, and a tiny bit has been mentioned in this story as well, Hannah's mother is dead, and there is no knowledge of where her father could be, right now. Her father is another character I came up with, and he has a story all his own of how him and Hannah's mother became lovers, and how they ended up in a forest all by theirselves. The story also covers the reason why he left Hannah after her mother died.

So, I'm curious... Sometime in te furture, like maybe somewhere on the downhill side of this story's completion, or after the story is finished, do you guys think I should post a seperate story regarding her father? Or possibly more than one stories, regarding him, like I'm doing here? (Hannah and the Demon Boy is one story, Journey to the Demon Realm is another story, and I might make more stories in this series after that)

I'm most likely gonna put it in a seperate thread, mostly to avoid too much confusion. While the two would be related, it necessarily isn't a part of Hannah's series. The stories regarding her father, and the stories regarding Hannah, are more of a franchise. Like how there's multiple series of video games in the Mario franchise.

Please tell me your thoughts on that, regarding if I should go for it or not, or if I should do it while I'm still working on this story, or not.

In other words, I'm FINALLY done with another chapter. Since my vacation is close to being over, I'll have more to do, and when I have more to do, ideas come to mind a lot quicker, which means less time for the chapters to be made. Anyways...

Chapter 8 is up!

Happy reading! :)

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 3:54 am
by Vendettadabeast
So there are other male monsters and that messenger bird is one, an interesting detail.

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:58 am
by Gamergirl64
It's a really rare sight, but it happens.

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 9:11 pm
by Gamergirl64
As much as I hate double posting, I guess I don't have much of a choice.

I'm glad I was able to finish up this next chapter.

Chapter 9 is up!

Happy reading! :)

Do not read this spoiler until you have read the chapter:
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It looks like Pierce might be hiding some knowledge about Hannah's father. That reaction of his can't possibly mean he only heard the name "once or twice." If they met in the past, what do you think happened, between the two? Were they friends, enemies, used to be friends but somthing happened? Please put your answer in a spoier, and keep in mind that I will not tell you whether you are correct, or not, because I don't want to spoil it for you.

Thank you! :)

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 4:37 am
by Vendettadabeast
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Yeah,the way pierce answered is definitely a tell sign that he has some type of history with her father and it can't be all good.

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 4:41 am
by musical74
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I think there's definitely some history between Pierce and Hannah's father, and based on the comment it sounds like there was bad blood between them

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Fri Mar 29, 2013 1:42 am
by Gamergirl64
You guys waited a long time, and possibly forgot all about this story, but it's here! It's finally here!

Chapter 10 is up!

Thank you for waiting.
Happy reading! :)

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 2:32 pm
by Vendettadabeast
So something important has come up that requires feathers to talk to pierce in private,it has to be on the order or the war.

Re: Journey to the demon Realm

Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 3:24 pm
by musical74
Maybe the secret meeting has to do with a secret finding, and he doesn't want everyone who's greedy listening in!