One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Reads Chapter 152 :shock: Lilith needs to teach Lucas Heretic too.
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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For those that only read this fic on this site, I thought I should post this here, too. It's an explanation of why what happened in chapter 152 happened, so read the chapter first, then read what's in the spoiler.
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When she heard that Hilda was bound and being whipped by Victoria, she got horny and her lust started slowly building. Sol's description of it only added to that lust. Her imagining the scene did, as well. When she heard that Hilda was enjoying it, and Sol's description of how her pants were wet from her vaginal juices, as well as his mentioning that he had seen her orgasm at least twice, Lilith hit the point where she couldn't wait. She had to have Lucas right then, and she wanted to see what it's like to be spanked because she thought she'd like it (and she was right), so she took care of everything via his help as you saw/read. ...And as you saw, as is befitting of a Succubus, she is very naughty.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Chapter 153 up! More plot, but something's happening...
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Chapter 154 is finally up! I finally managed to write it despite everything that's going on right now. You see, right now my Dad is trying to recover from a severe bronchial infection while looking for a different job because the people he works for right now are largely responsible for the sinus infection that became said bronchial infection. Also, they're pretty damn disorganized, and are a pain in the ass to work for.

Anyway, with that going on, and me having to help him with various things, as well as trying to squeeze in my college work somewhere, further chapters will be few and far in between for a while. Things need to calm down and slow down before I can get back to a decent pace at writing this story.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Thanks for the new chapter, man! and don't worry, after the storm comes the calm, everything will be alright, I assure you 8-)
There are those who would scorn good-natured people. Even if God himself will
not show his face, a heartful person will one day take God's place in
visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Chapter 155 up!


I saw the opportunity to write this, so I did. Things are still hectic and chaotic, so... Anyway, I need to eventually write up the info for my custom setting, but I'll need time and the opportunity for that. Hmm...
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Opportunity knocked, so here's chapter 156!


I can't think of anything to say that's relevant and non-spoiling, so...
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Demonic Energy at that time was, indeed, a really bad shit :^^;:
There are those who would scorn good-natured people. Even if God himself will
not show his face, a heartful person will one day take God's place in
visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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I'm still not exactly "back" yet, but I managed to write Chapter 157. IRL stuff is still happening, but things are looking up. One example is that test they do to determine whether or not you have cancer or whether it's coming back or not. In my Dad's most recent test, the number was lower than last time, so HELL FUCKING YEAH, HE STILL CURB-STOMPED CANCER! Unfortunately, other things are still happening, such as him spitting up mucus with blood in it, and the doctors are dragging their asses as far as giving us answers or info on what's up with that, so basically, shit ain't done yet. I hope this long absence hasn't made anyone lose interest...
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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New Chapter!!! Is it Christmas already???
By the way, I deman more pholymorph experiments!!! :mrgreen: (I really wanted to see that librarian turned into a succubus :crying: )

P.S. Glad to hear the (almost) good news about your dad
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visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Even though i already commented on MGU, but i'll comment on here too, good update.

Also it's good to hear about your dad and his testing, hope things get a actually better.
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We refuse to follow your lead, and accept your orders.

Nor will we obey your rules, and do things your way.

We we will fight for our cause, and die for it with no regrets.

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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Vendettadabeast wrote:Even though i already commented on MGU, but i'll comment on here too, good update.

Also it's good to hear about your dad and his testing, hope things get a actually better.

Thanks. I feel I should copy/paste my response to here, too, so that any and all TMM-only readers will know the situation as well.



He had, fought, and so far successfully beat cancer of both the colon and esophagus. The test confirmed that, fortunately, it's not coming back. So that makes it soon to be 5 years that he's been cancer-free. The current problem is, long story short, a sinus infection he got while following the orders of his first mentor at his new job, said mentor being a fucking idiot. The sinus infection developed into a bronchial infection and was trying to develop into pneumonia when we were finally able to start treatment. He's gotten somewhat better since then, but it's not over yet.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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I'm Glad your dad was able to beat cancer so did my mom. They caught hers at an early stage. But on anther note I've found out that the name
Lilith came from Jewish Mythology. She came from a class of female demons. Who knew that the Demon Lord was Jewish. Took me by surprise.

Hope your dad pulls through I'm praying that my mom continues to do so.
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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revanwolff wrote:I'm Glad your dad was able to beat cancer so did my mom. They caught hers at an early stage. But on anther note I've found out that the name
Lilith came from Jewish Mythology. She came from a class of female demons. Who knew that the Demon Lord was Jewish. Took me by surprise.

Hope your dad pulls through I'm praying that my mom continues to do so.

I heard that the name Lilith came from "Lilitu" or something like that from ancient Mesopotamian mythology.


Anyway, thanks. My Dad managed to get over his sinus infection and went back to work, though his employer is once again proving to be a massive clusterfuck...



I'll resume my fic as soon as I can, just so everyone knows. I'm not abandoning it, ever.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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My fic has awoken from its coma and is no longer on life support! Chapter 158 has been written and is up! I'm tired right now, so I don't have much to say other than we're getting some more plot and The Arch-Mage, Master Crowley, makes his first appearance, and he looks like this:
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From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Just a heads-up, I just now started writing the world/settings info for the world in which this fic actually takes place. Topic is here.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Chapter 159 up! No comments from me for fear of spoilers.

To let everyone know, I'll be alternating between one chapter in this fic and some amount of my settings info until I get the settings info completed.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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This Fic is the only one I think that when finished should be the best erotic/action novel ever written, well that just me Good Luck and may the Force be with you.
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Re: One Take on the New Demon Lord's Rise to Power

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Chapter 160 up! Shit's gettin' real now.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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Chapter 161 up!

This chapter was delayed by my decision to alternate between one chapter and one piece of my settings info at a time as I write them, as well as my Dad's much-needed vacation from his really shitty job.
From the hate-scorched sky!
With righteous anger in our hearts!
We draw forth the sword that smites evil!
Thou art the innocent blade----Demonbane!

Lemuria Impact:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KtkCGQ9aTIc

Lemuria Impact translation:
"In this World of Light, there is no place for you of the Darkness!
Thirst not! Hunger not! Return to the Void!
Lemuria Impact!"

"Sublimate!"
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