Nishizumi High School and the Invasion of the Succubi

[Hood]

Done with the reading, You should make more Sakuya/Lilim scenes

[MonsterGirlLuver]

I would like to firstly apologize to everyone for my negligence of this story! I has been busy at my new job and have had absolutely NO inspiration!

[Kmon13]

No big MGL...

I've had to put thing on hold myself due to my Art Review....

It just means you need to rest your mind and relax for awhile.....

Sooner or later you'll start having insperation to start writing again before you know it...

[MonsterGirlLuver]

Well, I don't have work today...or tomorrow...or the next day. So let's see if I can't get some shit DONE!

[MonsterGirlLuver]

Okay, since I've been very busy as of late, I have not been able to do shit. But here is a little part of my next chapter which will probably be rather long. I hope you like it.

Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 4: Why?

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Hizoku's eyes opened, the dimly lit hallway barely producing enough light for him to see. He saw some figures, the shadows of his friends. Asuna was kneeling over him, crying and screaming. Screaming for him to wake up. He couldn't hear though. Why? He wasn't sure why. His skin felt wet. His back and his arms. He was laying in a pool of his own blood. Of course, that could be an exaggeration.

He saw Riri. She was applying pressure to his wound, trying to stop the bleeding, not even aware she had a healing ability. Sakuya was curled up in the corner, crying of course, since it was kind of her fault. Kei was holding Enishi back who was trying desperately to choke Sakuya for what she did.

What happened to the smiles? There used to be smiles, not tears. Despite the situation, Hizoku did not focus on the pain. He only focused on how to bring back the smiles. In his mind, he came up with a way to bring them back. They wanted him to wake up. So all he had to do was stand. Right?

And that's what he did. Through sheer force of will, he stood up. His vision was blurry, and he felt rather light headed. But he was standing. As he tried to see the smiles, he could not. Mainly because no one was smiling. It was more of shocked horror. What were they all staring at? He finally looked down and saw his wound torn open, even bigger than before. He thought he saw his intestines. But it wasn't long after that he felt all the pain rush to his brain at the same time. The shock alone caused him to faint.
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Hizoku's eyes opened several hours later, perhaps even longer, in the infirmary. There sitting next to him, was the nurse, in the generic hot school nurse pose, with her legs crossed and writing on a paper attached to a clip board. She looked...normal.

She noticed him awaking and said "Oh good. You're finally up. You're girlfriends are in my sister's office, getting chewed out for causing such a ruckus."

"Oh," replied Hizoku. "Well, they're not really my girlfriends."

The Nurse replied with "Well, they're your girlfriends now, after all that they went through for you. You've got 5 beautiful girls after that dick of yours." She Hizoku a flick on the nose. "It must be quite an impressive one."

Hizoku blushed. "T-that's not how things go! O-outer appearances don't matter!"

The Nurse laughed. "Then why did Enishi have you work up all those nicely toned muscles?"

"W-well for people to leave me alone."

"Oh please. If you had known her before, you would've known that she prefers guys with muscles over skinny guys."

Hizoku raised an eyebrow. "How would you know that?"

"She told me so her freshman year. I got a going conversation with her and asked her if there were any guys she liked. She said no and I asked her if there were, what would she prefer. She just blushed and said 'He would have to be both kind and strong, able to stand up for himself and others.' That blush of hers was so cute. God if she were just a couple years older I would've pounced her~." A naughty grin came over the Nurse's face.

Hizoku's mind was filled with naughty images of the Nurse and Enishi making out and doing all kinds of perverted things. He soon felt his member begin to rise, but due to the low amount of blood in his body, the erection only served to cause some light-headedness which caused Hizoku to fall back onto the pillow.

"Oh my~ Such a pervert you are~" said the Nurse. "You shouldn't be thinking such dirty thoughts with such a low amount of blood. Give it time before you start thinking of naughty stuff. But I'll tell ya what, for being such a resilient young man and not giving into the temptations that surrounded you, how about I make an exception, get in that bed with you, and let you use this wonderful chest of mine as a pillow~?"

Hizoku blushed and turned away, quickly but politely refusing. The Nurse giggled and stuck her chest out and began to shake it back and forth. "You're sure you don't want some of this~? Come~ I'll even let you suckle on them~ I'll cradle you in my arms like you were my own son~" Her words caused Hizoku's head to turn toward the nurse. Even he could not pass up a chance like this. And he was tempted to go along with. Being cradled in the arms of this gorgeous woman while suckling upon her nipple like a newborn. He'd be the envy of the entire male student body! It's not like they liked him anyway.

Hizoku quickly shook the thought out of his mind and turned back around on the bed. However, his shoulders were pinned down and the nurse was laying over. Hizoku was about to say something, only to be blocked by the Nurses bosom smothering him. Her hand gently running through his hair. "You may not be a girl, but something about you just seems so...wonderful~"

The first thoughts to run through Hizoku's mind were 'So THIS is what heaven feels like~ It's niiiiice~" However he then remembered his situation. His friends had become Succubi and he needed to go see them. He struggled but was easily pinned by the Nurse once more. He was too weak at the moment to resist.

She pulled her magnificent bosom away from Hizoku's face, much to his sorrow, but she still lay on top of him. She then rolled him on his side and she lay next to him, caressing his cheek and lightly pushing her chest against his. How could he resist such a wondrous temptation? She spoke softly "You just lay back and relax. Let mommy do all the work~" She began to lean in, her full, soft, ruby red lips getting closer and closer to Hizoku's. He didn't fight it. He embraced this wonderful opportunity. Their lips were only an inch away from each other.

[MonsterGirlLuver]

Tell me what you guys think?

[Hood]

I believe that nurse is a lot more than meets the eye. (Why the nurse in my school wasn't like that? )

[axc_o]

I understand your suffering hood, but seems that all the sexy nurses prefer to work on large clinics rather than a humble school *sniff* leaving the ugly ones for the young ones is too cruel, but that's the truth.
even at university now I don't have any sexy nurse, everyone or is a man or is a student T-T

[Hood]

I understand your suffering hood, but seems that all the sexy nurses prefer to work on large clinics rather than a humble school *sniff* leaving the ugly ones for the young ones is too cruel, but that's the truth.
even at university now I don't have any sexy nurse, everyone or is a man or is a student T-T

Yup, that's right.... but let me tell you, even in hospitals, real nurses are not that charming...maybe the "hot mamma" type of nurse, inhabits Beverly Hills only hospitals. Well, no, I actually know a really good looking nurse, but she is a friend and, unfortunately, I have never seen her in her nurse uniform

Back on topic, I think it would have been better to have Enishi actually chocking Sakuya, while the other girls are desperately trying to separate her from Sakuya. But that's just my opinion. Anyhow, good job, man hope to see more soon.

[Kmon13]

I believe that nurse is a lot more than meets the eye. (Why the nurse in my school wasn't like that? )

Damn man I had a nurse like that at High School but she was only into guys in the navy...

The gym teacher... on the other hand was the true sense of the word Amazon!.

Still I make me wonder what's going on in that office between the girls and the principal...

Until then I'll keep my eyes open for the updates.

[MonsterGirlLuver]

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FUCK! I'm going to finish the next chapter if it KILLS ME!! I have to finish at least this chapter and the one in PoaD, HoaA before i go to Basic Training!
I DON'T WANT TO GO TO BASIC TRAINING!!! Why did I choose September!? I should have went with next year in the winter or something!! I could have gone in May and BE DONE WITH IT!! FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK!!!!

[Vendettadabeast]

Finally caught up and read all the chapters (so far). Boy i missed out on a lot, gotta say i still love this story and Sakuya still is my favorite. (There something about lustful evil women, that really gets to me. But i love dominating woman also, that's why Enishi is a close second)

Look forward towards your next update i was truly entertained.

[MonsterGirlLuver]

With every thought, with every idea, with every character, every plot, every story, every finished product, a new world is constructed, a new universe given breath, a body, a mind, a soul. Such is the true power of the human imagination.

[Kmon13]

Indeed MGLover

And what an Imagination you have...

But I got to say I was still impressed with how chapter 4 turned out and can't wait until you start on chapter 5 but I'll wait because I know what it like to have writers block!

It's also one of the reason's I'm watching DVD's right now.

Spoiler: show

(( I've got a hold of the Super Robot Wars OG DVD set and have to watch them with my nephews since he'll be going back to school next week. ))

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[bladenight23]

So is this story dead?

[MonsterGirlLuver]

Possibly. While it has been over a year or two, I hope to one day continue. Hell, I might do that now. NO IDEA! WHO KNOWS!

[13ry4n]

You know, when a guy molests a little girl it's horrible but when a succubus does it it's sexy...?

[MonsterGirlLover]

To anyone who may care, I plan on continuing this! Yay~! I may have to type up the chapter again, or I can try to locate my files on my iPod, but whatever. I need to do something to work my mind around a bit.