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*gasp* VIOLENCE! Against people who deserve it! HUZZAH!!!
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Just a bit of what is going to happen next
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“But…but the baby, what will ha-?” This time, real concern for her neonate child invaded the human mother. The calm and softness that invaded the succubus a few seconds ago vanished as quickly as they came. Leviathan felt how a surge of anger and desperation invaded all her being; her calm eyes ignited like burning coal. In her rage, she violently whipped her free arm backwards, making her nails grow in a single stroke, turning them into five, fearsome 11 inch blades.

“Don’t fuck with me, kid! My patience has a limit! What do you think this is? A game? I’m offering you something that your kind can only achieve in dreams. And now, you are telling me that you are truly worried about the life you and your boytoy were about to finish a few moments ago?” This time, pure fear and horror invaded the poor and defenseless pregnant girl.

“Enough with this farce! Banish into oblivion, slut!”
Remember, Levi is kind with Robert and Amy because they are her children, but that doesn't mean she has to be kind with everybody else
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I give her a my applause for what she did on Robert's behalf....

Let's be honest they deserve no mercy...

Not one bit....

Can't wait to see the updates when it's finished....
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Yeesh ,talk about fearsome,Leviathan has a mean streak on her,can't say that the bastards didnt deserve it though.
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)

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Got again that "few characters" error once more. Anyway here it is, Chapter 10

Chapter 10
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“Let’s make a deal…” the succubus said coldly as her red, blazing eyes stared into the deepest parts of the girl’s soul, or at least, that’s how the poor and terrified teenager felt.

This young mother was unable to answer the frightening being’s request; the succubus began to lose her patience; the now defenseless gal felt how the pressure on her shoulder slowly augmented and only then she was able to release a sound from her mouth, in the form of a sorrowful and pain filled moan.

“I’m asking you; no, I’m ordering you to make a deal with me!” A commanding and bone chilling voice erupted from the demonic temptress mouth. The girl’s jaw was shaking uncontrollably; tears were flowing like a river from her disproportionately open eyes.

“Little girl, my patience is coming to an end; I’m offering you the chance to walk away unharmed” The succubus said menacingly

“Un-un-harmed?” Frightened to death, the young woman babbled nervously.

“You see, I just can take what I want and leave you to die here, in the cold of the night, bleeding to death on the shore of this lonely lake!” Leviathan smiled wickedly, and then she ran her tongue all over her lips.
“A-and what… do you want?” With a titanic effort, the young mother to be, was finally able to produce some words from her mouth.

With a perverse grin, the succubus placed her right index finger over the pregnant and defenseless human female’s womb. The moment the young woman felt the tip of Leviathan’s razor sharp nail on her swollen belly, she couldn’t avoid letting out a small squeal. Thanks to her keen senses, Leviathan heard her petite yelling and put aside her finger, and placing it in front of her prey’s face, she moved it repeatedly from left to right.

“No, no, no my dear; while you do as I say, you’ll be safe; I’m even willing to give you a parting gift” Leviathan said with a malicious grin, and that sole facial expression, sent the shivers through the young woman’s spine.

“Pa-parting…gift? Why would you?” The girl asked with a trembling and fear filled voice.

“Do not misunderstand me, little whore; I’m not doing this for free; let’s just say that I have an offer in mind. If you give me your unborn child, I’ll fix your body in way that it will remain young and in proper condition for an unnatural period of time. You will age slowly, immune to the damage of age and time; you and your next possible descendants will be healthy, beautiful and extremely long lived, also, I shall heal your flesh instantly of any kind of damage you suffer while I make your unborn child mine.” For the first time since her ordeal started, the girl saw a sincere and kind smile on the succubus face, her hard semblance softened, giving her an incredible maternal look.

“But…but the baby, what will ha-?” This time, real concern for her neonate child invaded the human mother. The calm and softness that invaded the succubus a few seconds ago vanished as quickly as they came. Leviathan felt how a surge of anger and desperation filled all her being; her calm eyes ignited like burning coal. In her rage, she violently whipped her free arm backwards, making her nails grow in a single stroke, turning them into five, fearsome 11 inch blades.

“Don’t fuck with me, kid! My patience has a limit! What do you think this is? A game? I’m offering you something that your kind can only achieve in dreams. And now, you are telling me that you are truly worried about the life you and your boytoy were about to finish a few moments ago?” This time, pure fear and horror invaded the poor and defenseless pregnant girl.

“Enough with this farce! Banish into oblivion, slut!” The succubus shouted enraged as she slowly raised her arm, placing her hand and the terrifying blades she grew from her nails above her head and horns. But

“I accept your terms, I accept them, I accept them!” A second before the fatal blow was delivered. The mother to be, cried in desperation, in an attempt to get her life spared. At hearing this, Leviathan grinned once more.

“What’s your name, little whore?” The succubus eerie voice asked.

“E-Emily, Emily Marcus-Valentine” Leviathan smiled wickedly once more.

“Very well, Emilia Marcus Valentine…” In a swift move, the succubus released Emily’s punctured shoulder and placed the same hand that pierced the young girl’s flesh over her mouth, avoiding any kind of sound to escape from her lips.

“Behold now, how I take your unborn child for myself…and suffer!” With that said, Emily felt a soft impact on her belly, the best way she could described it, was as if someone would have slapped her fertile womb. But surprise became terror when the succubus lifted her right hand to Emily’s eye level; the teenager face went pale when she saw the succubus nail-blades coated in blood. When she looked downwards, she witnessed in
horror how her womb opened in half, releasing an impressive stream of blood alongside the baby which seconds ago was inside her, followed by her own intestines.

“But…you promised!” The girl cried in horror as she desperately tried to keep her guts inside her body. With all hope lost, she saw all her blood an internal organs fall on the dirt.

“And I intend to fulfill my part of the bargain but…you deserve to be punished, and feel the same desperation the baby in your womb experimented!” Emily fell backwards, holding her own guts; she began to enter in shock, thanks to blood loss. She clearly noticed how the temperature of her body dropped dangerously; her sight blurred, but strangely, there was no pain, only desperation, the desperation of feeling the cold grasp of death. When she looked upwards to the sky, maybe in a futile attempt to ask for mercy and forgiveness, the last thing she saw was the macabre grin of the succubus, as she held her baby in her arms.

“From now on, this child is my property. If you ever dare to look for me or him, I will show you no mercy. Now, live your life the best you can and try to forget about this incident” Then, everything slowly turned pitch black for Emily.

“Gasp!” Finally, life and air got inside Emily’s body and lungs once more. How much time passed since her baby was taken away from her, she didn’t know. She inspected her body, looking for any sign of harm; there was none, not even a scar was left. Her belly and abdomen were in pristine condition, like that of gymnast. She didn’t even struggle to rise from the cold and sandy ground at the lake shore; even the blood that should be splattered on the ground was gone, and actually, Emily hasn’t feel this good in ages. She felt strong and healthy, like when she was in her prime before she got pregnant.

That was the reason why she couldn’t understand the tears rolling down her pink cheeks. Without noticing, her hands reached and squeezed her abdomen; she then fell on her knees and released a painful and sorrowful heart tearing scream, the scream of somebody whose most prized possession has been taken away. That macabre scream also awakened her male partner. When his ached body allowed him to get up, he came to the side of Emily, trying to control her.

Several blocks away, a dark haired woman wearing a purple coat and shiny high heel boots, came out from a 24 hour drugstore. In her left hand, she was holding a plastic bag filled with at least five bottles of purified water, a small can of formula and of course, a baby bottle. On her right hand, and enveloped in a soft and warm blanket, was a male baby sleeping peacefully while his head rested on the left breast of his “mother”

“I’m glad none of them regained their senses while I emptied their wallets; He, he he, those guys were loaded; even after buying all this, I got enough to pay this month’s rent. Yes!” Thanks to Leviathan’s sudden display of happiness, the baby on her arm woke up, opening his eyes, he met his adoptive succubus mother for the first time.

“Oh! Did I wake you up? Sorry little one. Nice to meet you by the way, baby. It seems we are going to spend quite a bit of time together, so why don’t we think about a good name for a handsome boy like you, huh?” At the sole mention of those words, the baby gurgled as if he was trying to laugh, then the little and defenseless being rested his head once more on the succubus breast, and fell asleep again.

“Let’s go home child!” With a smile imprinted on her face, both mother and child disappeared in the night.

In this imaginary world created by the lilim, time was bendable at her will, so, in the blink of an eye, three years passed. We now see a small Robert, lying on an old couch, playing with a huge, stuffed dinosaur. A younger looking version of Leviathan, was busy washing the dishes in the small sink of a humble apartment; it seemed that Levi had to adjust her appearance a bit to look more like the young mother she desired (and must) interpret.

“Oh Robert, you may be getting big but you’re still no match for Rex, dear!” Levi giggled when she turned her head and witnessed how her adoptive son became trapped under the might of the toy T-Rex. The lilim noticed how small and modest their home looked. The once white paint was falling from the walls of the old apartment, the old and torn apart furniture where her adoptive grandson was playing, and the moisture stains that decorated the majority of the ceiling. She kept watching the scene in silence when suddenly, the doorbell rang.

“A-already?” The disguised succubus said nervously as she looked at her door and then back to her human cargo. Being a mother was a really time consuming activity, Leviathan barely noticed how the hours slipped from her grasp, especially when she was taking care of her human child, preparing his meals, bathing him and cleaning Robert’s little messes.

“Co-coming! O-okay, dear, come to mommy” Leviathan lifted her son with her right arm and took Rex, the stuffed dino, with her free hand. She placed Robert inside a small pen she had prepared with anticipation, filled with cushions and some other stuffed toys. Kindly grabbing her son’s face with her soft hands, the succubus eyes shone in purple, like that time at the lake; little Robert was invaded by a sudden tiredness, his eyes slowly began to close until he soundly fell asleep.

When the succubus was sure her human child was completely knocked out, she headed towards the door. In her way to the entrance, her plain clothes slowly began to dissolve, or better said burn as if they were paper sheets at the mercy of a flame. Then, from the ashes, they reformed once mere into a revealing, black outfit; said outfit consisted in a really short, tight, black and shiny skirt that gives the feeling of being made of soft rubber; the upper part of her new set of clothes consisted only on two pieces of a black, rubbery material, covering only the essential parts of Leviathan’s voluptuous breasts. Her white tennis shoes turned into long and shiny platform boots. Even lipstick appeared over her lips. She finally reached the entrance and turned the door knob.

“Hi there!” Her seductive voice welcomed the stranger, as she opened the door of her humble home.

“Hey baby. Well, is it true? If I give you such quantity, all I want for two hours right? Even the rear entrance?” “A lewd smile and a nod were the answers the rough looking man received. He gave the succubus a perverse grin, as he grabbed her generous and round butt. Levi responded by licking his right check.

Lotan remained in silence and witnessed the scene; her expression became sterner; a red glow appeared inside her eyes, dancing madly, like a wild fire about to burst. Even the third eye on her forehead looked like a piece of incandescent coal when Levi and the guy went inside her bedroom.

Although she felt certain “necessity” to follow her daughter inside and look what she was about to do, instead, she kept looking at her adoptive grandchild, innocently sleeping on the cushions arranged by his mother. The lilim allowed herself a sad and little smile.

Lotan went forward until Levi and her partner left the room.

With a snap of her fingers, the scene changed once more.

2 more years passed in just a second. The scene changed once more and, this time, she saw her daughter performing some sort of acrobatic dance, holding herself from a pole. At the bottom, a considerable crowd composed only by human males, wildly encouraging her daughter to “show more” and at the far left, Robert, now five years old, holding his stuffed dinosaur in his arms, sit at the edge of an old, wooden door, watching his mom from afar.

“Didn’t I tell you, Rex? Mommy can fly!” Little Robert said with enthusiasm as he kept talking with his stuffed toy. Meanwhile, wearing only a provocative micro bikini, the undercover succubus stared back at her human child. She saw the happy and innocent face of her adoptive son, there was no anger, no sadness or no sign of shame, just a child feeling proud because his mother could do some awesome stuff that other people couldn’t.

Robert’s smile grew wider, and of course, Levi noticed this. No matter how erotic or provocative the movements she was performing were, the only thing Robert saw was his mother defying gravity, flying through the air and landing on the stage unharmed, just to perform more amazing acrobatics. In a way, you could say that Leviathan was not performing for the audience; she was performing for her son.

When the music was over, although she was naked, the succubus walked in the direction of her son; she held him tight and rubbed her cheeks with those of her child.

“Did you like it?” The succubus smiled. The little boy nodded and hugged his mother. Unnoticed to them another stripper got close from behind; she tapped Levi’s shoulder, picking her attention.

“The guy on table 6 wants you for a while!” She whispered. The mother, still holding her child in her arms, sighed when she saw Robert’s facial expression.

“Don’t go, I don’t like when they…” The child begged.

“Honey, you know I must, it means a bit more of income. Please, just wait for me here, okay.” The sadness in the succubus voice was evident; she just put Robert down and pointed at small and old wooden chair placed in a corner of the changing room.

Roberts walked in the direction of the chair, but instead of placing his behind on it, he sit on the floor, hugged his huge toy and buried his face in it. Levi just turned around with a lump on her throat and walked towards the stage’s stairs; but before she completely leave, Robert yelled.

“I-I’ll wait for you! I´ll always be waiting for you momma!” Without looking back at her son, she nodded and left. Witnessing the scene, two other women chatted with each other.

“Sigh… This isn’t the right environment for children!” One said irritated.

“But aren’t some of us the same…” The other one answered and next, both of them scanned the room; there were at least another 4 children there beside Robert, two of them were playing with each other, one was talking with his mom and a small girl was sleeping inside an improvised tent.

“I know, if I hire a nanny, I have serious doubts about being able to reach month-end” the other one responded.

Hours later, a lone woman holding a child in her arms, walked through the dark and deserted streets,

“You know, honey…” She whispered at her sleeping child’s ear.

“… your mommy is a coward, because only when you are asleep is the time when I can gather the enough courage to tell you the truth. Because mommy is a liar, all these years I have been deceiving you” She held her son tighter.

“I’m not human, my dear child, that’s why I always take these kind of jobs. Because your mother is a creature that need to feed on the energy of humans, and worst of all, the most efficient way of doing it, is through sex”

“As a succubus, this is something natural for me; as a succubus I never understood why human females were such pricks, I never understood why they had such a negative view about sex sometimes, but you know something honey, tonight, I believe I understood a bit. When I saw your sad, teary eyed face, witnessing your own beloved mother being groped by a total stranger. And worst of all, you witnessed me enjoying it” Tears finally began to flow from her lacrimal glands.

“It is obvious, isn’t it? It´s like those all those tales my mother used to tell me, tales about Order soldiers torturing monster mothers right in front of their children's eyes, or killing human adopted children, husbands and other human relatives and friends, labeling them as traitors, forcing us monsters to watch. I mean, which child would like to see its mother being abused, molested or even tortured?” She stopped her walking and placed her son’s head right next to hers.

“The simple thought of touching you with the same hand that stroke a stranger cock, the thought of preparing your meals with these same hands that received his cum, the thought of kissing you with this same mouth that tasted is semen; such thoughts were unbearable! I just couldn’t stand to touch or kiss your innocent and clean body with these hands and lips” Finally, she fell on her knees and began to sob. With her right hand, she drew strange and arcane symbols in the air with the index finger of her free hand. A purplish and bright portal appeared, illuminating the deserted alley; the succubus got up, and went through it with her son in her arms. The portal re-opened in the small living room of her humble home.

After leaving her stuff and that of her child on the old and ripped couch, she walked in the direction of her bedroom. Finally inside her room, she gently placed Robert on the bed, she sit at her child’s side and began to caress his hair.

“Yes, I think I finally understand a bit, a really small part at least. But you know dear, what scares me the most…what scares me the most is...telling you all this when you are awake! I´m scared of you to know that you never grew inside my infertile womb! I’m scared to tell you the truth about myself! I’m scared of how would you react! I’m afraid of being hated and abandoned if you ever learn this truth…because…you are the best thing that has ever happened to me after I began to live in this strange and grim world! I lost everything and then, you came to me, calling for help! But in the end, I was the one who was desperately looking for succor, and you were the one who granted it to me. I love you and I beg for your forgiveness” She got into bed, holding her child close to her; Levi kept crying until exhaustion finally overcame her.

How many hours she remained knocked out, she never knew, but when she finally woke up, the sun was up in the sky. A quick glance at her alarm clock and she realized it was past noon. She rubbed her swollen eyes and softly shook her son, in an attempt to waking him up.

“Robert, Robert, it is past noon dear; today I´m free so why don’t we do something fun together” But there was no answer.

“Robert!” She worried when her usual active and happy child didn’t react. She kept shaking him without any success. Instinctually, the succubus placed her hand on her son’s forehead. Horror invaded her.

“My-My Dark Goddess! He’s burning!” As fast as she could Leviathan grabbed Robert’s body and held him in her arms. In her desperation, she was about to open a portal to the nearest hospital, but she stopped in time.

“Thi-think like a human, Leviathan!” She told herself. All the childcare manuals the succubus had read and all the classes in the world could have never prepared Levi for this. With her child in her arms, she exited her home. At the corridor of her apartment building, she made sure that nobody was near. When she confirmed that she was completely alone, she jumped down the stair case; a huge pair of black, bat wings exploded from her back and through her blouse, slowing down her fall.

When she finally reached the bottom floor, she ran in the direction of the street as her demonic looking wings retreated inside her body once more and tried to catch a taxi; Robert has become extremely agitated and was breathing heavily. After minutes that felt eternal, she finally found a free taxi. The journey to the hospital felt longer and slower than usual; Leviathan’s clothes were drenched in sweat. When she finally devised the white pearl building at the distance, she almost blew the cabbie’s ear drums with her “Hurry Up!” screams.

Desperate, she passed through the main gates at an amazing speed and began to scream madly.

“Somebody help me! My son! My son is…” Thanks to the commotion she created, she picked the attention of female doctor who was passing by, she was a tall, blonde beauty and her delicate and porcelain like face was decorated by a pair of small glasses. Even with the white lab coat covering her body, you could tell she was as beautiful as Levi. A pair of really well-endowed breasts welcomed the succubus as two delicate hands cut the air, making some gestures in a futile attempt to calm the exalted mother.

The female physician shook her well proportionate butt at the same time she turned and called two interns, who came as fast as the stretcher they were pushing allowed them. Finally, they placed Robert on it and left a terrified and shaking Levi at the care of the doctor who helped her first.

“Ma’am! Ma’am look at me, please! Your child will be fine! I promise! Please, come with me and have a seat” Placing the nervous succubus on a chair and making sure she was not about to faint, the other woman got up and walked in the direction of the nearest coffee machine. She returned with a small cup of cappuccino and placed it between the succubus trembling hands. Levi was still shaking.

“Is-is he going to be alright?” Levi asked at the verge of tears.

“The moment they give me the report, we’ll proceed with the adequate treatment, but right now, they have to stabilize your son”

“Thank you…May I know your name, doctor?” Leviathan asked a bit more calm.

“Doctor Reinhardt, Doctor Jennifer Reinhardt; but you can call me Jenn!” The newcomer said with a warm smile.

Meanwhile and watching from afar, certain lilim whispered with a dry throat.

“Je-Jennevieve!”
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well that a surprise she turning more human to
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Well done indeed. I didn't notice as many small grammatical errors that you usually have. I just saw a misplaced quotation or two. A rather nice chapter and whatnot.
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Wow she dealt with Robert's real parent in a fashion I found acceptable, I also liked how she was able to meet with Jennevieve again even though little robby had to get sick because of it....

I'm just surprised at how Levi see herself as a liar but could understand if she feeling bad about how she came into his life but she did what she felt was right and took him away from an abusive situation ( and it cool how to have a mother who can create a play world for her kid using magic. :hehe: ) and gave him a happy childhood.

Well that it for me I've got some major writing to do now...

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Okay, I'll corrected all the mistakes I could find.

@MonsterGirlLuver I´m glad that you're still around my man. And yes, maybe I'm finally improving a bit, who knows. Glad you liked the changes.

@Kmon Glad you like it, man! Levi feels guilt because she knows her lie can last forever. Being a mother has been a really eye opening experience for her, although she still love to do perverted things (later you'll see a bit of her pervertness [poor Robert and Amy. Probably, this is going to look a bit like NTR but don't worry they'll be fine and this experience is what is going to turn Levi into the super mom we all know and love :evil:) like drink cum, being DP'd and similar stuff, the thing is, sometimes, she thinks that if some other succubus'd do something similar to Robert, she simply couldn't stand it . That's why she has become more considerate and that's the reason why a lot of monster moms ends doing it with their human cargos.
"If someone is going to rape my child, wouldn´t it be better if it would be me, the only being in this world that really loves him/her/them?" Or sometimes, the have thought's similar to this:
"No human whore is going to take away from me the most important thing in my whole life! If he/she/they wants to feel the pleasures of the flesh, no one better than his/her/their own mother to guide him/her/them through this experience!" And for Vampires and Dragons, well, they think a bit like this.
"My superior child deserves a superior pussy! And since I´m the only superior being around here, We shall mate!" @BlueSalamander She is only becoming a better mom ;)
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Yeah both of those make perfect sense.

The Orge/ Amazoness/ Salamander/ one on the top....

and the Succubus/ Vampire/ Dragons /Alp for the second...

as for her being supermon she did a good job by flying him to the nearest Hospital before rushing him to a Emergency Room....

By the way you may want to check the monstergirl quotes when you get a chance.... :hehe:
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Hood wrote:Okay, I'll corrected all the mistakes I could find.

@MonsterGirlLuver I´m glad that you're still around my man. And yes, maybe I'm finally improving a bit, who knows. Glad you liked the changes.

@Kmon Glad you like it, man! Levi feels guilt because she knows her lie can last forever. Being a mother has been a really eye opening experience for her, although she still love to do perverted things (later you'll see a bit of her pervertness [poor Robert and Amy. Probably, this is going to look a bit like NTR but don't worry they'll be fine and this experience is what is going to turn Levi into the super mom we all know and love :evil:) like drink cum, being DP'd and similar stuff, the thing is, sometimes, she thinks that if some other succubus'd do something similar to Robert, she simply couldn't stand it . That's why she has become more considerate and that's the reason why a lot of monster moms ends doing it with their human cargos.
"If someone is going to rape my child, wouldn´t it be better if it would be me, the only being in this world that really loves him/her/them?" Or sometimes, the have thought's similar to this:
"No human whore is going to take away from me the most important thing in my whole life! If he/she/they wants to feel the pleasures of the flesh, no one better than his/her/their own mother to guide him/her/them through this experience!" And for Vampires and Dragons, well, they think a bit like this.
"My superior child deserves a superior pussy! And since I´m the only superior being around here, We shall mate!" @BlueSalamander She is only becoming a better mom ;)
I'm a fan of incest related stories i read them dont meant i go bagging my sister or mom , i like the you can see it from levi point of view of why she in pain/scare to tell him :^^:

and for the record bro :love: VAMPIRE AND DRAGON :love: please make it happen :perv:
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Remember when I told you that their first reunion wont be happy :twisted:
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Utterly defeated, the succubus lied on the dusty ground; her sight completely lost. Looking at her with despise, Jennevieve spoke emotionless, with her hands still inside the pockets of her long coat.

“Now, I’m gonna take that kid away from you…a slut like you it is not fit to be a mother…” Turning her back on the succubus, she began to walk away.

With the last remnants of her strength, she barely lifted her right arm in the direction of Jennevieve, in an desperate effort to stop the Dark Slime.

“Don’t…hurt…my child…” The dying voice of the succubus was lost in the eerie wind.

“Your child…good one sister…But don’t worry, I’ll erase his memories tomorrow morning, that way he won’t suffer. He’ll make a good brother for my Joshua”
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After reading the spoiler....

What did Levi do to make Jenn would go that far to get even with her?

I have to know !!!
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Egad,such a traumatic scene,a fight and breaks out and levi loses,sad and emotional,makes for a great next chapter.
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omg :shock: :what!?: making her fight for her child from family :shock: damn you hood and your epic spoilers i must know what will happen
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Do you really want to know that bad? I could spoil it for you, but...
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mmm i think i wait for the whole charter
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I forgot to mention this, being the less powerful Lilim, Lotan is only capable of producing Bright Green Demon Realms
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.....huh.... Bright green Realms?
I'm lost I thought that was the Pharaoh.
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less concetrated DE produces BGDR
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