The Monster Multiverse

Note this is a teaser of a story Im currently writing, and I wanted to get some help if need.

Is she supposed to be burning down a village and dancing in the glory of her own inferno? Still, I'm wondering as to why she is burning through a forest and even people in the first place. I will find out soon enough eh? This is but a teaser after all!

Is she an MGE dragon or your own OC dragon? Have you decided on a name for her yet?

Also, AWESOME story title! Winged swords are the coolest. I wonder what the meaning behind it is.

Feathers wrote:Is she supposed to be burning down a village and dancing in the glory of her own inferno? Still, I'm wondering as to why she is burning through a forest and even people in the first place. I will find out soon enough eh? This is but a teaser after all!

Is she an MGE dragon or your own OC dragon? Have you decided on a name for her yet?

Also, AWESOME story title! Winged swords are the coolest. I wonder what the meaning behind it is.

hehe thanks Feathers. Yea this is just a teaser of what I've wrote and She'll be an MGE dragon. As for the fire, shes just repelled and invading force that fled into the forest and she figured why not set the forest on fire? Ill have more written soon. But overall what you think about his teaser? Does it have the ability to be a story?

It does to me. You did a good job at filling the reader (me) with a lot of questions. Basically I'm left hanging and am wondering why and what is happening, so if you want my opinion if this was a successful teaser or not? I'd say, "Absolutely".

it's a nice start, but eventually you'll need a global plot.
but I think you already know that so, good luck with the future fanfic!

axc_o wrote:it's a nice start, but eventually you'll need a global plot.
but I think you already know that so, good luck with the future fanfic!

Well I have some ideas of a global plot of sorts... but this quick bit was more of "should I continue this story?" and if so would it fair as a one shot or a continuous. Though, currently im trying new things out in Real Life with the goal of improving my use of time. I should hopefully have this first part finished in a week or two depending on time, and my laziness XD

actually, all that depends on the global plot. You see, if we are talking about the dragoness misventures while trying to survive you might need a continuous fanfic, on the other hand, if you are talking about how the same girl finds her lover and "spend the night" you will be fine with just a oneshot. then again you can also talk about the difficulties of her newed life and get a continuous fanfic.

axc_o wrote:actually, all that depends on the global plot. You see, if we are talking about the dragoness misventures while trying to survive you might need a continuous fanfic, on the other hand, if you are talking about how the same girl finds her lover and "spend the night" you will be fine with just a oneshot. then again you can also talk about the difficulties of her newed life and get a continuous fanfic.

well in this teaser I mention shes already married... plus her subordinates are in fact that. In my mind shes the lord of her own territory and this scene here was her repelling an attack.

Interesting indeed, it does fill my head with questions, like who is she?, who is the enemy that its invading, what more is to come from this character?.

I patiently anticipate the start of this story.

Vendettadabeast wrote:Interesting indeed, it does fill my head with questions, like who is she?, who is the enemy that its invading, what more is to come from this character?.

I patiently anticipate the start of this story.

Thanks Vedettadbeast. The support is much appreciated. I've been doing some thinking for the story and what possible plot I could make for it and I think I might have it. Im thinking of the setting being sometime after the DL started the transformations... maybe a decade or so? But the rest of it im saving until I finish the first part of the story.