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Casting Grievances (Chapter 6)

Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:59 pm
by Kmon13
A/N: Hello folks Kmon here I figured for the good of all fun I'd enter this 500 member's contest and get a story Idea out of my head.

Casting Grievances:
Ch1. Waking up to new faces.
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Ch2. Tomoe explains it all.
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Ch3. First Week: Monday, Jasmine's First Date.
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Ch 4.First Week: Tuesday Crystal's date at the museum
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Chapter 5: First Week: Wednesday, Sakura/Tomoe, (Sakrua's part of the date)
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Chapter 6: Wednesday into Thursday Morning Tomoe in control
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A/N: Finally, the two-parter is done now it's Sylvia's turn !!!

Re: Casting Grievances (500 member contest entry) Chapter 3

Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 10:45 pm
by Kmon13
Well Chapter 3 is up and four is in the works...

But in the meantime who should our Kmon go out with next.

Choices for First Week (Tuseday's Date)
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Jasmine- Girtablilu ( Monday's date Completed....)

Crystal- Ant Arachne - 1 votes

Sylvie- Arachne-

Sakura/Tomoe- Jorgumo -

Bethany- Ushi- Oni -

Sorry about this but I'm still trying to figure out how to post the voting system so bare with me... :^^;:

Re: Casting Grievances (500 member contest entry) Chapter 3

Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 11:28 pm
by Gamergirl64
This is getting pretty good! I'm liking it, so far.

I think Kmon should date Crystal, next.

Re: Casting Grievances (500 member contest entry) Chapter 3

Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 8:09 pm
by Kmon13
Gamergirl64 wrote:This is getting pretty good! I'm liking it, so far.

I think Kmon should date Crystal, next.
Thank you Gamegirl64 I enjoyed writing it too... I've taken your vote into account an await others to do the same... :^^:

If no one places any other votes Crystal will be next :goodjob:

But I wondering where my character should take her since the Mall may end up being a bad Idea for awhile.... :nerd:

Re: Casting Grievances (500 member contest entry) Chapter 3

Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2012 8:40 pm
by Vendettadabeast
This is funny and entertaining , i also vote for crystal.

Re: Casting Grievances (500 member contest entry) Chapter 3

Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2012 9:43 pm
by Kmon13
Thanks V, I appreciate it. :^^:

Two votes for Crystal already :^^:

Deadline before posting Tusday's date is Wednesday 12:00AM but something tells me to make it special. :perv:

Choices for First Week (Tuseday's Date)
Voting Update!
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Jasmine- Girtablilu ( Monday's date Completed....)

Crystal- Ant Arachne - 2 - votes

Sylvie- Arachne- 0 - votes

Sakura/Tomoe- Jorgumo - 0 - votes

Bethany- Ushi- Oni - 0 - votes

Sorry about this but I'm still trying to figure out how to post the voting system so bare with me... :^^;:

Re: Casting Grievances (500 member contest entry) Chapter 3

Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2012 5:22 am
by BlueSalamander
Ushi oni case I love them so much

Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 4 up)

Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2012 12:42 am
by Kmon13
Ch 4.First Week: Tuesday, Crystal's date at the museum

Two down three dates to go..... :serenade: :blushing: :nosebleed:

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Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 4 up)

Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2012 1:27 am
by Gamergirl64
How about Sakura/Tomoe, next? I would like to see that.

Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 4 up)

Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2012 6:44 am
by Kmon13
Okay that's one vote and I gives me a good idea to use....

any other votes...

Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 4 up)

Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2012 5:17 am
by BlueSalamander
I take he is fuck now whit that hell of a sis

Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 4 up)

Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2012 6:27 am
by Vendettadabeast
Just read the last chap finally,your sister must be a real she-devil,if she gotyou scared to sleep by yourself.

Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 4 up)

Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2012 8:10 am
by Kmon13
Don't worry a detailed back story is being worked on explaining why, but trust me V the girls will want to have a talk about her actions and so will the Lilim who brought them.

Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 4 up)

Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 8:17 pm
by Kmon13
Chapter 5: First Week: Wednesday, Sakura/Tomoe, (Sakrua's part of the date)
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Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 5-1 up)

Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:10 am
by Firehorse32
This is great and funny as hell. Continue! Please.

No pun intended...but he is soooooo screwed. :haha:


How the girls are placing so far (IMO):

Crystal - She's been a sweetheart and seems to be the only one he's actually comfortable sleeping in the same room with so far
Bethany - Surprisingly, given the rape train rep; The homemaker. A man's heart is thru his stomach.
Jasmine - The cool beauty and protector. Kicking ass be it in a restroom or game system.
Sylvie - The naughty nympho. Maybe she'll move up later, but right now...too damn pushy.
Sakura/Tomoe - Sorry, but there aren't enough points she can earn to get off the bottom of this stack. Bondage is bad enough but add in S&M and you have insta-crash-n-burn. (I'm claustrophobic and was abused in my youth...just can't deal with that sort of stuff!)

Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 5-1 up)

Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:45 pm
by Kmon13
Greetings Firehorse32:

Thanks for the comments I'll see what I can do about finishing chapter 5-2 but I've been busy with other projects.... :work:

Monstergirl Apocalypse series, Tales of the Black Rose Inn, a few projects for FanFiction. Net, etc.

I also thank you for the options of the girls I chose for this fic...
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So until then
Cheers
Kmon13

Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 5-1 up)

Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 1:54 am
by Firehorse32
I look forward to it.

Re: Casting Grievances Chapter 6 Tomoe in control

Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2015 1:22 am
by Kmon13
Casting Grievances Chapter 6 Tomoe in control
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Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 5-2 Teaser up)

Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2016 9:09 pm
by Kmon13
Hello folks I'm been a busy camper as of late and just wanted to let you know I'm going to continue my stories soon. I've just dealing with a few things that needed my attention. :^^;:

Thank you for your understanding.

Re: Casting Grievances (Chapter 6 up)

Posted: Sun May 29, 2016 9:20 pm
by Kmon13
A/N: Finally the two-parter of this series with Tomoe and Sakura is officially done now its sexy femme fatale of the group Sylvia's turn !!!

Chapter 7. Thursday Sylvia, It's finally her turn