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Demon Boy

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Awhile ago, for those of you who remember, I made a fanfic Demon boy, the prequal to the Great Alliance RP. It tells a tale of a boy named Allen, who was a child born by mistake by his human family. Because of his birth, it had caused grief to his parents, and therefore, was thought of nothing as a burden. The origins of the boy and his past will be revealed here.

Demon boy Chapter one

MGE/MGQ/Original Canon mix by Pokemonaces

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In Japan, a lone house with a boy named Alen sleeps, though he has no knowledge of his destiny and responsibilities ahead, he alone is the only one capable of saving a distant world, a sister of the planet Earth…

“Hehe…you hate your parents too huh? Aren’t you happy…I did you a favor…” In a dream like atmosphere, cloudy visions of a lone girl with pure white hair and blood red eyes. Looking hollow and empty: as if she was emotionless. Blood floated and circled around her. She gave a rather unpleasant smile to a boy in the vision. He had black hair and brown eyes, his eyes purely widened with pure shock and fear. Right next to him were the corpses of a woman, her right arm laying about 10 inches away from her right shoulder. It looked as if her right arm exploded. Her left arm stayed on her body, but there were holes everywhere on it. Blood slowly starts to seep out of the arm. Her legs were cut clean, even the bones on her legs cut right off. The woman looked like his mother, her hair was brown, and her eyes were also brown, but empty and soulless, her mouth slightly open with a small line of blood flowing from her lips to her chin. Blood trails on her face with a pained expression. On the other side of the boy was a man. This man was torn right in half from his torso. His internal organs from his stomach to his spleen, blood was scattered everywhere, making a thick pool of blood, his lower half also had showed some torn muscles. The man had black hair and brown eyes, a pure indication that he was the father. His face showed fear, but also extreme pain as his pupils looked straight up his forehead, looking like he felt every painful tear of his body. The last body seemed to be a corpse of a slightly older looking boy. He had brown hair and black eyes. The boys left eye looked like it popped like a balloon as blood splatters are apparent on the left side of his face, his right eye was intact, but bloodshot as it seemed blood had flowed on his eye, signs of pain are apparent from his pained look with empty eyes. Looking at the body more, the boy seemed to be the young boy’s older brother. His body seemed to have shreds everywhere, missing parts of his skin are scattered around the room that they were in. The floor covered in blood, the walls decorated with blood. The young boy was lying on his butt, looking at the girl standing before him. The girl also had trails of water surrounding her “Now…time to pay…” The water shot straight for the boy.

“GAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!” Waking up from a nightmare, Allen hears a distant voice in his room, looking out the window next to him “Huh?” He looks outside to see a girl. She looked like she was 16. She had brown hair with blonde highlights. She was about 6.0 with blue eyes and light tanned skin.

“WAKE UP APRIL! We will be late for school!” She yelled out, waiting patiently for him in front of his door with a school uniform on. He gets up and pops his head out of the window to talk to her

“Yea yea! Come in, the door is open. I’ll make breakfast…” Allen said

“No need April, I brought you some breakfast so we can eat together as friends!” She said as she came in his room

“Damn that bitch…” Allen said to himself as he got out of his bed, shaking his head as he get dressed. Taking out his shirt, he was about 5.6 in height and a healthy weight of 135 pounds, mostly muscle. Sporting 4 abs on his gut, he wears prescription glasses with short, thick sporadic black hair. His skin was light tan, then putting his school uniform on with a simple white shirt with a red tie and blue jeans. Getting out of his room and walking down to his living room, he finds the girl on the dinner table

“About time April…” She said as she seemed to have set the food already “I simply brought some curry rice, made it myself…” She said

“Stop calling me April damnit! It’s Allen!” He said with obvious resent for her.

“But here in Japan, its simply common for friends like us to call each other by there first name.” She said to him

“I don’t Fucking care you annoying bitch! Geez!” Allen said, but then sitting down

“Aww…I love you too…” She said teasingly

“Shut up! Why don’t you bug your boyfriend David!” He said

“But he’s right there…” She pointed behind Allen as a boy, 16 years old and 6.3 in height, stands right behind Allen as his head was right next to the left side of Allen’s face.

“Haaaiii!” A high pitched voice from a distance said

“WAAHH!!!” Allen said as he was surprised and fell on his back “Ouch…” He said

“Hey there Allen…” He said with a normal voice, he was wearing the same attire as Allen. He had brown, curly hair and green eyes

“Hey there David…” Calling out his name with a smile on her face “I was just teasing my little brother…” She giggled

“WHAT! Hell no! I’m older than you and were not related you idiot!” Allen responded

“Ah! But I’m taller…” She said giving a senile smirk

“I hate you…” Allen said as he got up

“I love you-” But her sentence was cut short

“No, I don’t!” Allen quickly responded as he slammed his hand on the table “Anyways…let’s just hurry up and eat before were late…” Saying so, he finishes the food Allyson brought him, David and Allyson also finished their food as Allen locked his house and went off to school. “Hurry up you two!” Allen yelled at the two “Geez…” As he looked at the two of them, they looked back at him

“Hello…” David waved as Allyson giggled along

“Were coming…” She said. A few more minutes passed as they soon see the high school entrance they all attended. There were full bloom cherry blossom trees around the entrance with other students walking past them, some recognized Allen and the others and gave him strange glares. Soon, they passed through the gates of the school and headed inside. Allen ran as fast as he could to his class. He made it in time with Allyson and David making in time. The bell rang as his first period English class started

“Hey Allen…” Sitting next to him was a girl named Sarah. Her hair was short, yet soft and silky with a hazelnut brown color. Her eyes matched her hair color. Her physic was that of an average high school girl with D small sized breasts. A friend of Allen’s, they sit together and hang around the school rooftop during lunch with Allyson and David to relax and eat. “How are you?” She asked Allen as she looked at him

“Oh, hey there Sarah…I’m fine…” He said with a smile as he looked at the teacher. Her name was Kiza Aseno. She is Allen’s English teacher. About the age of 30, she is an accomplished, kind teacher. But she can be strict when needed. Her hair was red with a ponytail. She wore prescription glasses. Her eyes were blue with a normal Caucasian skin color. Her breasts were clearly big at the size of DD medium since they bounce with each step she takes. Often stared at by perverted students, she despises men who stare at her and will have no hesitation of disciplining students who do so

“Okay class, settle down! Today we will learn about the works of Shake-” Allen she went on with the lesson, Allen simply stared at the window at the very left corner of the room, looking at his own faint reflection as the other side of the window showed the track field of the school. He soon fell into a slumber, tired from doing his homework from a previous night…

“Huh…” Allen, drifting into sleep and into a dream, Allen seems to be floating in an empty, black space. There he saw a planet. This planet looked so much like Earth, but unlike Earth, it had only two major Continental land and tiny islands around it “What the…what’s this place…” He wondered as he looked at it more carefully. Then suddenly appearing right in front of him was a woman. She looked like a middle aged woman, but something’s strange about her to him. Her eyes were red, her hair was white, she looked like a Succubus with bat wings, tail, and horns, but they were white. Her clothes seemed very skimpy as her chest had a hole shaped like a heart, there were also heart shaped holes on the clothing on her arms and legs. Her face showed no signs of aging, her beauty only matched those of all other women he had seen combined, compared to her, they were nothing. She smiled at Allen as she soon spoke

“Allen, come home…we miss you…I miss you…” She simply spoke calmly

“Allen, are you talking to me…” Allen responded, confused at the sudden name she called him

“Yes, my dear son Allen, we will meet soon enough…” She said before her body starts to disappear

“WHAT! SON! No…that can’t be!” He then started to chase after her, as if swimming, he tries his best to move closer to her, but alas he simply stays were he is as he watches the mysterious woman fade away “WAAAAAIIIIITTTTT!!!!!!” He cried out before his vision went blurry

*Thwack* Kiza suddenly slammed her hand on Allen’s desk as he woke up

“GUH!” Allen grunted as he looked up at her. Kiza showed a rather displeased face, her right eye darkened from shadows as her left seemed to have glowed bright red, like a star as a rather unpleasant atmosphere surrounds her, feeling as if he were in hell

“Sleeping in my class again Allen…and more annoyingly shouting in your sleep…” an anger vein pops from her left forehead

“Uhhh…” Allen simply stood still, scared as he looks around, seeing Allyson shaking her head in disappointment

“SEE ME AFTER CLASS!” Kiza said as she moved her face close to his, a disturbing smile flashes in her face “If you value your life…” Those words she spoke sent chills down his spine

“YES MISS KIZA!” Allen said as he smiled to her in a panic

*After class…*

“Allen…” Kiza said as if she were irritated “How many times do I have to tell you…get some sleep…” She said with a slight sense of care and worry from her voice

“I know Miss Kiza…but…if I don’t get ahead…I migh-” She then stops him

“No, your already ahead of everyone…you’ve done all the homework for the past two weeks since you asked me…yet you still bother yourself with studying…or is it something else that normal boys like you do?” She asked as she suddenly flashed a rather naughty smile on her face

“What do you mean Miss Kiza…” He asked her

“You don’t know what I mean? You are clueless…” She then walks around the class, staring through the window and at the sunset “Masturbate…”

“WHAT? No!” Allen said denying it, though in truth, he does masturbate at least 2-3 times a day at the very least

“Don’t deny it Allen…and I also noticed that while all your friends have a boyfriend or girlfriend…it must be hard for you to come here…everyday…seeing all these people…” Saying so, she practically got Allen figured out. Envious of those who have someone to love, Allen often gets depressed going to school due to the fact that he is single

“Yea…well…” Allen responded with a strained voice, as if trying to hold some pain in. “It’s just hard trying to find the ideal girl here…a lot of them are spoiled and or unfaithful…” He said with confidence

“Not all the girls in this school are like that you know there are plenty women here that have a pure heart…” She said smiling back at him. Allen simply frowned, looking down as shadow covers his eyes.

“Easy for you to say…you probably have had plenty of men chasing after you miss Kiza…even now.” Kiza blushed from the sudden compliment

“Oh…well…men back at my age…they only cared about my looks.” She said “And even now…sometimes I hate having these looks…all the lewd stares I see from horny men…it’s annoying…and what do you mean I get men all the time, even now?” She grabbed Allen’s head, then stared at him eye to eye, giving him an evil eye on her right while her left glowed red “Are you implying that I’m some sort of whore?”

“NO!!! I’m just saying that even now, you still look beautiful…” Her face suddenly changed as she looked at him with surprise, she let him go

“Beautiful…funny…you’re the first man to say that…all the other men said I was hot or sexy…I hate those words…but beautiful?”

“Sure you are…” Allen said as he placed his right hand on her left shoulder “But more importantly, you’re a fun, but also caring teacher with a mother like personality, I like that…” He said being honest, Kiza kept staring at him, with her surprised, wide open eyes as tears start to come off from her eye. Allen noticed and started to panic

“Oh shit! Sorry, I didn’t mean to-” But then Kiza spoke

“Allen…you said you don’t have a girlfriend right?” She asked at a rather teary like voice

“Yea…you said so yourself remember…” Allen said, confused to as why she asked him a question, she then suddenly tackled him. On top of him, she has a rather happy smile, but not just any smile she gives everyday, but a smile that truly seemed happy, as if a massive weight was removed from her shoulders

“Even though I’m 30 years old…” She questioned him again

“Of course…but why did you tackle me…oh no…It’s my punishment isn’t it!” Imagining the things she would do to punish him, his thoughts were suddenly cut short as Kiza suddenly kissed him on the lips, she let out moans of pleasure and desperately pushing her tongue inside his mouth, licking his own tongue. Surprised by the sudden kiss, Allen could only lay there and blushed bright red, she soon stopped her kiss, pulling away as a trail of saliva breaks and lands around his lips “Uh…” Allen had nothing else to say

“Hehe…thank you so much Allen…I think I can forgive you for your idiotic display of attention in class today regarding your…sleep…and in fact…I may just reward you for being such a grade A student…” Her disposition suddenly changed into a rather lustful one, her eyes showed nothing but pure lust towards him. With her stare and of course the feeling of her on top of him and the kiss she gave him, he got an erection rather quickly, feeling it bump on her crotch, she smiled at him “Oh…your hard already from a simple kiss…tell me…is this the first time you ever done anything naughty with a girl?” She questioned him

“Uh…well you see…” But his sentence was cut short as she pulled his zipper down and pulled his dick, at an expected and healthy length of 6 inches, she gives him a sly smile

“Oh…your dick’s in good size…and its looks full of energy…I wonder what it taste like…” She was marveled by the sight of his erect dick, surprised to find out that he was turned on by her that much made her happy. She grabbed his dick gently as she starts to stroke it gently “There…how’s that feel so far?” She said

“aaahhhh….” Letting out weak moans of pleasure with each stroke, Allen felt excited due to his teacher stroking him, sire he had his thoughts of being teased by her sexually, but he never expected it to happen. “Miss Kiza, stop.” Allen said

“Oh? Why should I? Sounds to me that you enjoy this…” She then starts to lick the tip of his dick “Hmm…delicious…your dick is awfully sweaty…but it has a nice taste to it…” She the moved her tongue to lick the shaft of his dick, moving up from the backside of his dick “Hehe…” his dick starts to twitch from the sensation, the focusing on the tip as she moved the tip of her tongue on his urethra, the sudden stimulation caught Allen off guard as he let out a soft moan

“Miss Kiza…it’s prohibited for student and teacher to have any type of relation-” But she ignored him as she kissed the tip of his dick and sucked on it

“Oh try to relax Allen…no one else is on this school…everyone left, even the Janitors…it’s a Friday after all…and you and I have all night to ourselves…you should be enjoying yourself as well…at least until lunch is over.” ” She said, the placing her breasts between his dick as she presses them together, the warm sensation of her breasts cover’s Allen’s dick “Feels good right? You should be honored, you’re the first guy I’ve ever done naughty stuff with…” She said with a lewd smile

“First…are you telling me that you never done this before? Then how come you knew how to do all these-” She then smiled at him

“Geez…you kids. I pay attention to what’s new, so I watch Hentai and all that stuff to see what the boys of this era are interested in, from tentacle fetish to even guys who love to be tortured sexually. Tell me Allen, are you what they call a Masochist?” She asked

“WHAT! No way! I have no likings for stuff like that…but Tsundere…or assertive chicks…there okay…I also like Yandere chicks…” He smiled for a moment, forgetting his teacher is there with him

“Yandere? That’s strange, if I remember correctly, Yandere is a term for chicks who are mentally insane and will do anything to be with their lover…” She said.

“Exactly, what kind of higher devotion can you get, a girl willing to kill even those dear to her just to be close to the one she loves the most, now that’s what I call pure devotion. The best part is that she will never cheat on you for as long as you stay loyal to her…” He said practically drooling in the thought of being caressed by a knife wielding woman with their empty, creepy gaze.

“You sure are one weird student Allen…I like that…” Kiza said before continuing her sexual assault on him, relentlessly licking the tip of his dick, and his dick squeezed between her breasts. Soon enough, his dick started to throb crazily as if strained, then a clear liquid leaks out of the tip “Oh yummy…I see your leaking…how naughty, this must mean your about to cum right? Here let me handle that suffering penis of yours…” With those words, she sucked on the tip as hard as she could, her lips puckering from the strong suction of her mouth

“Miss Kiza…I’m…cumming!” He yelled out as Allen arched his hips forward, pushing it deeper in her mouth, he came inside her mouth and directly to her throat, she bobs her head away a little so the rest would shoot on her tongue, feeling the sensation of her tongue wrap around the tip ever so gently, as if licking a lollipop. She soon takes her mouth off, coughing a little, but smiling at Allen afterwards

“Allen…stop calling me miss okay? I’m not old…” She said staring at him

“Okay!” Allen said nervously, but Kiza simply hugged him again, laying on top of his as she spreads his shirt open, her bare, hot breasts pressing against his chest, getting an erection not long after getting the blowjob, Kiza felt his rising erect dick and gave a cat like grin

“Oh…you got hard so quickly…does it feel that good?” Suddenly, Allen started to feel as wet, soft flesh rubbing against his dick “You can feel it can you? My pussy is so wet from sucking your naughty penis…” She pulls her panties down slowly as wet liquid seeps out of her pussy, dripping on his cock. She throws the wet panties on Allen’s face “Here…you smell it?”

“Kiza…” He said as she licked it, strangely, it tasted some what sweet to him “Uwahh…the liquid on your pussy, it tastes nice…” He said blushing

“Oh really? That’s good to hear…now lets see how well your big dick fits in me huh?” She said with a smile as she starts to lower herself, the lips of her pussy soon making contact with the tip of his penis, Allen moaned as he felt the lips of her pussy touch the tip of his dick, almost as if it kissed the tip of his dick. She started to sway her hips to loosen herself as she slowly sank her pussy on his dick, pushing the tip inside her “Ahh…just the tip and already it feels good…what about you Allen…” She looked at him, he simply had a face filled with pleasure, his eyes rolled back, and drooling slightly with a red blush “I’ll take it that you feel good too…now then…” She then drops her hips all the way in, managing to fit all of his dick inside her, she lets out a loud moan as she felt his hot dick rub all over the inner walls of her pussy “AAAAAHHHHH!!! My god…this feels so good…” Allen reacted the same way. He then somehow managed to push her to the ground gently, then getting on top of her “Wah…Allen…”

“Sorry Kiza…I want to please you this time, so let me take the lead…” He said as he started to thrust his hips forward, feeling the deep inner walls of her pussy griping his dick tightly. As he thrust his dick inside her, he saw a red liquid spurt out of her pussy, it looked like blood. “Oh shit!” He said in a panic “You’re a virgin?” He asked with a surprised look on his face

“Of course I am what you think I’m a hustler having sex with any man I can find!” She said “This is my first time doing it with anyone. I made sure I was careful while I was masturbating. I wanted to let my first know that I’m an unplucked rose…but then you plucked it, so you better take responsibility…” Smiling at him with a rather love struck stare

“Kiza…” He simply said, but he couldn’t resist the urge anymore, hugging her tightly. He then starts to move his hips slowly and gently, feeling the walls of her pussy rub on his dick with each gentle thrust “Uwaahh…this feels amazing…” He said with a trance like stare, looking at Kiza’s breasts

“Your staring at my chest, oh don’t tell me…” She gives him seductive smile “You want to be buried in these breasts don’t you?” She asked, then pulling Allen’s face on her chest, she puts his head between them, then using her arms to squeeze them together. The sensation of her two soft breasts pressed on his sent shocks of pleasure on his body, his dick getting even harder than it already was “Oh, I felt your dick get harder, if that’s even possible. Young men sure are wild huh?” Tantalized by her breasts, Allen reaches for the left on, using his left hand, he starts to fondle with her breasts, squeezing it gently “Allen…how did you learn how to do these things?” She asked

“Uh…” He stared off somewhere “Lets just say that I had to shoot off some steam after school…and the only way to do that is to watch erotic videos…” He said nervously

“Oh my…you sure do have a dirty mindset Allen…I guess from now on, to prevent you from having the temptation of raping anyone, I’ll have to squeeze you dry everyday…” She said, but then Allen suddenly pinches her left nipple with his fingers. Getting harder from the sensation of his fingers, Kiza let out a loud moan

“Hehe…not bad huh, I always wanted to do this too…” He said as he looked at her right breasts, then putting his mouth on her right nipple as he starts to suck and lick on it. Kiza’s head moved back from him sucking on her breasts

“Allen!!!” Yelling out his name. Enjoying the pleasure she felt, she moved her right hand on his head and pulled it deeper on her breasts “More…” She moaned, at the same time, she noticed that AJ started to thrust his hips faster and deeper inside her. Feeling the friction of his movements made her quiver in ecstasy “Faster…faster damnit!!!” Allen pulls out from the kiss, then pulling himself up on top of her

“Alright, I’ll give it my all!” He said, he then thrust his hips as fast as he could, the sounds of their waist hitting each other let out a lewd, wet notice that echoed throughout the empty hallways, their moans echoing as well. Allen soon enough thrust his hips so deeply inside of her that he felt the wall of her womb “Kiza…I can feel the wall of your womb…” He said, she simply smiled at him as her breasts bounced from the intense movements of her hip hitting against his

“Rape my womb Allen! Cling on to my body! Hold me tight so you can pierce my womb!” She said as if begging for it. He did as she asked as he laid on her holding her as tight as he could as their mouths were close to each other

“Kiza…I want to kiss you…I want to taste that sweet saliva of yours…” She smiled and nodded as they both kissed each other. Thrusting his hips as deep as he could, he felt the tip of his penis slowly piercing her womb. With one final thrust, he managed to push the tip inside, both of them broke their kiss for a second as they let out a moan of pleasure, their backs arching from the sudden stimulation “AAAHHHH!!!! It’s so tight inside you Kiza!” He yelled out, he could feel his penis ready to erupt “I can’t hold it any longer…I’m cumming!” Thrusting one last time, he pushed inside her as deep as he could, his dick twitched frantically before shooting his semen deep inside her, the tip of his dick managed to pierce through the small opening in her womb, flooding it with his semen “Ugh…” Allen gasped loudly, tired from thrusting his hips, his muscles loosened as he laid on top of her, his dick twitching inside her “Kiza…you…your not going to leave me…right…” He asked, Liza placed her hand gently on his cheek, smiling back at him

“Of course…I will never leave you, but you better do the same okay?” Kiza said, placing her right hand on the back of his head “I never thought I’d ever say this to a man…let alone you but…I love yah…” Her words comforted Allen, hearing those words, which he always resented, now sounded different to him. It felt sincere and honest

“I…I love you too…Kiza…” He got off her soon after, pulling his dick out, his semen flowed out of her pussy “I think I came too much huh?” He asked her

“Oh…I think so…but don’t worry…it’s a safe day for me…otherwise I would have never engaged in sex with you…but I would have if the day wasn’t today…” Kiza got up, finding her tissue box “Here…whip yourself clean…we need to clean up the mess we made…” She said, whipping the remaining semen off her pussy with the tissue, Allen did the same on his dick. They then proceeded to clean the semen littered floor they made love on “Alright…well Allen…I expect you to meet me here tomorrow…” Kiza said

“Tomorrow? But there’s no school tomorrow…” He replied to her

“I know…” She said with a blush, then the bell rang, signaling all students to come back inside the class Don’t disappoint me lover boy…” She said as she went back to her desk, then Allyson was the first to come back to class

“Ah…There you are Allen, you missed the entire lunch hour. I guess miss Kiza really tortured you for the 45 minutes we had of lunch huh?” She asked him

“Yea…she sure did…” He replied, going back to his seat. Many other came after. Then the class started again

“Hey Allen…you okay? Miss Kiza didn’t give you anything bad did she?” Sarah asked

“No, she didn’t.” He replied “She just…told me to get some more rest…” He replied with a smile, but then, before he could look back at her, the classroom window broke, an arrow flew straight at Allen. He stopped the arrow just before it could hit him on the head, catching it with his left hand “What the?” He said, but before he could relax, a stream of arrows soon followed, hitting many innocent students “EVERYONE! USE YOUR DESK AS SHIELDS!” Following his advice, the students pulled their desk back against the direction of where the arrows were being shot “Is anyone hurt?” He asked, he then saw Kiza, she was behind her desk, but holding her left arm, he saw an arrow on it “Miss Kiza!” He yelled out of concern. The arrows though soon stopped “Huh?” He looked to where the arrows where being shot at. There were many men on the building next to their class. They seemed to wear ninja like attire, and they all had a symbol on their shirt. In the middle of the men was a man who’s attire was slightly different. It was black white instead of black like the other ninja’s had

“Allen…there is no use hiding…surrender now…” The man yelled out

End of chapter one
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So this is how it all began, huh?

The overall storyline seems pretty good. The only part I didn't seem to care for was the whole "sex with teacher" thing. I guess I'm just not used to 30 year old women getting it on with 16 year old boys. :@_@: But take those kinds of factors away, and it's not as bad. (no, not suggesting that being changed. I'm just speaking my own opinion, here.) Other than that, it's really good. I'll be looking forward to the upcoming chapters. :^^:
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nice start to the reboot my old friend.
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