Nishizumi High School and the Invasion of the Succubi

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Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 0: Friends part 1
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Hizoku Yomari goes to the Nishizumi High School for Humans. This school is located in the Zipangu region. Though the name may seem discriminative to Mamono, that is actually not true. A law was passed by a previous Demon Lord that there should be separate schools for humans and Mamono so that the education is not interrupted between the two. These schools are for regular subjects such as Social Studies and Mathematics. Then there are schools that promote co-education between the humans and Mamono. These schools teach the two species about each other and how to properly live in peace, allowing a safe environment between the two. Anyway, back to topic.

Hizoku isn't a very great name for a boy, due to what it means. Vulgar, rebel, bandit. Those are not very nice things. However, Hizoku is a very nice person. He likes animals, he enjoys walking on the beach in the sun, he enjoys saying "Hi" to complete strangers as he passes by. But people are afraid of him. Despite his friendly attitude, he's a scary person. Not because of his attitude, but because of his face. He has sharp eyes that seem to be glaring at others constantly. His smile always seems to be insidious and evil. People fear him. That usually depresses him when the hallway seems to clear when he steps out.

He doesn't have many friends. But there are a few who understand and love him. Let us start with his childhood friend, Asuna Yumemiya.
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(Hizoku: Age 5)
Hizoku was being bullied by three older kids. They made fun of him because he was taking care of a baby bunny. They kicked him as he covered the bunny, calling him a sissy and a wuss. He just sat there and took it. He wasn't a fighter. But then something happened. They stopped kicking him when one of the boys was knocked to the ground. A rock hit him in the head. Who threw the rock? A little girl by the name of Asuna. She was crying and infuriated. "PICK ON SOMEONE YOUR OWN SIZE!" she shouted. The boys were mad.

The two remaining boys began to approach her, one was holding the rock she threw. Now she was scared. She was about to run when one of them grabbed her collar and lifted her up. As he pulled back to hit her, Hizoku had grabbed his arm and kept him from swinging. This gave Asuna enough time to kick the boy in the groin, making him fall to his knees. Asuna, now free (and angry) grabbed some dirt and shoved it in his face. Another down. Asuna grabbed the rock and looked at the other kid, who quickly backed away and ran like a coward.

Later, after the other boy his his friend get away, Hizoku and Asuna were playing with the bunny, which was completely unharmed. Hizoku said "Thank you for helping me."

Asuna responded with "Don't worry about it. Guys like them need to be taught a lesson...my names Asuna. What's yours?"

"Um...Hizoku."

"I like that name."

"It's not a good name."

"Hmm? What do you mean?"

"It means rebel."

"So?"

"It's not a nice name."

"Hmm. I know! I'll call you Hizo-chan!"

Hizoku couldn't help but blush. "Um. Okay."

"Hey. Where do you live?"

"Just down the street."

"Wait, the big blue house?"

"Yeah."

"I live just across from that house! Yay!" Asuna then ended up glomping Hizoku.

"Eh!? Hey! Get off!"

"No! I like you!"

"Why? You just met me?"

"Because you're cool!"

Since then, they've been friends. And since that day, Asuna has loved Hizoku with all her heart.
*****

(Present day)
"HIZO-CHAN!!" Asuna shouted as she glomped Hizoku's arm.

"Gah! Asuna! What are you doing!?"

"Hugging you!"

"Why? We just saw each other ten minutes ago."

"But it's fun~!"

Hizoku sighed and pat Asuna on the head. He had to admit it, she was cute. A little childish, but cute.

Asuna, Hizoku's childhood friend, the first one to love him, the first one to truly wish him happiness.
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Sorry about the wait guys. There will be separate parts for each of the girls.

NEXT TIME: Enishi
Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 0: Friends Part 2
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Enishi Isami, a good-natured, selfless fighter of justice. She's captain of the Kendo club and a member of the Disciplinary Committee. She never thinks of herself and always does things for the benefit of others. She carries a wooden katana which she uses to punish "evil-doers," aka delinquents. She is another of Hizoku's friends and his senpai, one year ahead of him.

But she didn't meet him until only recently, only when Hizoku got into his first year of High School. But of course she's not the MOST recent. But she met him in a similar situation that Asuna met Hizoku. At this point in time, she was still a bit of an amateur and wasn't the captain of the Kendo club yet.
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(1 year and 3 months ago)
Hizoku was being harassed (of course) by a group of delinquent gangsters next to the storeroom behind the school. You know the kind. Big hair, wears stupid and sloppy clothing, wears their pants around the middle of their thighs, have big hair, and always think their tougher than everybody else. They found Hizoku as a threat because his looks were intimidating "their" victims. They were mad because people were more afraid of Hizoku's looks than they did the delinquents brute strength.

They shoved Hizoku against the wall, their leader, (the most ridiculous looking of the four) shouted in his face "So! You think you can just waltz in here, thinking you're top dog!?" spewing spit all over Hizoku's face.

"N-no. I'm not. Please. I don't want to fight." Hizoku replied fearfully. He was no fighter. Never was. He just wanted friends.

"Yeah!? Well you've got a fight Mother Fucker!" The thug pulled his fist back and brought it forward. But it was cut off by a swift hit from a wooden katana. As he reeled back in pain, he turned to see who did it. It was one of the members of the Kendo club and member of the disciplinary committee, Enishi Isami. She stood at the ready, wooden blade raised, both hands on the hilt.

She glared at the brutes and said "I won't allow such disgusting trash to continue walking this hall. If you do not wish to be harmed, then run!"

"Grr," grunted one of the thugs. "You think you can take ME!?" He rushed at her with his fist pulled back but immediately fell to the ground when Enishi struck him in the stomach and shoulder. She spun and was able to deflect a sneak attack by one of his subordinates, sending him to the ground as well. She grinned as another went behind her, but as she turned, a shimmer of light caught her eye. The thug was holding a knife, then she made her mistake, she hesitated. He then grabbed her sword and yanked it out of her hands, tossing it to the side.

Immediately she was pinned to the wall, the knife at her throat. "Hehe. Now it's time for a little payback. He then slowly stuck the knife into the part of her shirt between her breasts and cut it so they could see her skin. Turns out she had bandages over her breasts to keep them from getting in the way. Once those were cut, her D-cup breasts bounced out. 

Enishi was trembling. Things weren't looking good. The thug that had yet to receive punishment had then forcefully gripped her right breast, causing Enishi to jump from the pain. Then the leader, having just now recuperated from the hits, pushed his subordinate away. "Back off! She's mine!" He then reached down under her skirt and began to rub her snatch roughly. "Oo~ A virgin. I'm going to enjoy violating you~ Make sure you watch you arrogant punk," this last statement pointed at Hizoku.

Hizoku was scared. He wanted to help but he his legs wouldn't move. Now this girl was going to be raped because of him. No! He had to do something. Anything!

The leader then removed his pants to reveal his erect cock. He then tore off Enishi's skirt and panties and forced her to the ground. All four of the thugs were now focused on her. This might be Hizoku's chance!

Hizoku then regained his strength and rushed at the leader, leaping on his back and grabbing his neck, pulling him away from Enishi.

Now, before we continue, these guys don't have much in the common sense department and lack very much on the intelligence meter. Just thought you should know.

As their leader was pulled away, his subordinates stupidly left Enishi alone, allowing her to quickly regain her composure and rush at her katana. She gripped it and fiercely struck one of the thugs on the top of the head with the blunt side, knocking him out cold. Then the thug with knife turned to see Enishi's blade collide with his teeth, knocking him out cold. She then struck the third thug in his gut with her sword and then kicked him in the chest, knocking him out cold as well.

And to finish it off, out of pure anger, she struck the leader right in his balls, knocking him to the ground and allowing Hizoku to get back on his feet.

Enishi turned away and curled up next to the wall in shame. She was so easily taken advantage of. She would have to train harder and harder to get better. She then felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned quickly out of fear, but saw Hizoku's concerned face. But what she saw first were his glaring eyes. She thought he was going to attack, but after a second look, she could see he was clearly concerned.

"Are you okay?" Hizoku asked.

Enishi silently nodded.

Hizoku then removed his jacket and gave it to her. "Here. Your still trembling. And you must be cold."

Enishi curled up in the jacket and looked away from Hizoku. Her face was beet red. What was with this guy? Why does her heart beat faster when she looks at him?

Little did they know the leader was still awake a d was slowly reaching for the nearby knife, ready to hit them with a sneak attack, only to hear footsteps running towards them. Then, a sharp pain in his balls...again. Asuna had run up and kicked him right in sack shouting "LEAVE HIZO-CHAN ALONE YOU BIG BULLY!" The kick caused the thugs face to slam right back into the concrete and skid a good four feet. Knocking him out cold and causing some serious bleeding.
*****

(30 minutes later, in the infirmary)
Enishi was given a new set of clothes and was sitting on the bed next to Hizoku who was between her and Asuna. The police and paramedics came to take the thugs away. First they would need medical treatment, then it's off to jail.

Enishi was about to say something when Hizoku spoke up. "Thank you for saving me. I'm sorry you had to go through that for me though."

Enishi quickly responded "No! It's okay. I had to do it. They may have injured you. After all, if you hadn't distracted them I would have been...raped."

"But it was my fault you were in that situation, so I'm to blame." He had moved closer to Enishi and grabbed her hand. "So please! Let me make it up to you! I'll do anything. Anything you want!"

Enishi looked at him and quickly moved away. This brought down Hizoku's spirit. "It's my face isn't it?" This confused Enishi. "Everybody's afraid of it. They say I'm scary. That's all they ever see is my face. They never give me a chance to show them ME. But I understand. I'll just leave now."

"N-no! Please wait! I didn't mean it like that. It's just, you were so nice to me. I just didn't know how to react."

Hizoku then looked at her and wanted to smile, but didn't. "Thank you for understanding. Asuna here has been my only real friend for almost all my life. She's always been good to me. Supporting me."

Asuna nodded happily. "Mhm~! Hizo-chan is cool! I really like Hizo-chan because of that!"

Enishi watched Asuna and Hizoku converse and laugh with each other. Subconsciously, her hand slid under Hizoku's. Their skin touched and his felt warm and comforting. She'd never felt this way before. Her heart nearly skipped a beat when she saw her hand under his. But he didn't notice and she decided to leave it there. For once in her life, she felt that "warm and fuzzy" feeling in her heart. She then noticed that he didn't have much muscle on him. She smiled and removed her hand from under his and squeezed hard around his bicep.

"Ow!" shouted Hizoku. He pull his arm away and asked "What was that for?"

"You need some muscle on you. You'll just keep getting bullied if you stay like this. But if you bulk up some, the bullies will steer clear of you for good." She then pulled him onto his feet and said "I'm training you from now on. You're gonna bulk up."

Asuna said "She's right you know? You need some muscle Hizo-chan! Then you'll be even cooler!"

Asuna pulled Hizoku while Enishi pushed a hesitant Hizoku out of the room and to the track field.
*****

(Present day)
Enishi, now captain of the Kendo club, was being hit on by two guys outside her class. "Come on Enishi. Just hang out with for a day. We promise you won't regret it."

"Forget it," said Enishi. "I don't need to hang around guys like you. You probably only picked me because of how I look. You don't care about me at all. You just like to walk around with a cute girl under your arm."

"Hey. Come on that's not nice. Just one little outing with us?"

Then they felt a hand on their shoulders. They turned to see a taller and more muscled Hizoku (since last year that is). "Oi. The lady said 'no.' Now my suggestion to you would be to fuck off before she gets mad."

The guys quickly nodded in agreement. "Yeah!" Said one. "We're gonna go now. So sorry Enishi we won't bother you again!" Then they ran off quickly.

Hizoku chuckled softly. He wasn't as depressed as he used to be. He understood people were afraid of him. But he didn't care anymore. He has friends. Friends who care about him. Sometimes the fear helps get his friends out of sticky situations.

Enishi hit him on the arm. "Ow! What?"

"You seem to be using your fear as an advantage. You should fix that."

"Meh. They were assholes. I know my personality may have changed since we first met. I blame you for bulking me up."

"Hey. It was for a good reason."

"Yeah yeah. Certainly stopped the bullies that's for sure. Heck, I think I scared all the little bastards off. I haven't seen a single kid being bullied."

"Yep. You've done good Yomari-san."

"How many times have I told you to just call me by my first name? We've known each other long enough, Enishi."

Enishi and Hizoku conversed for a while on their way to lunch to meet everyone else.

Enishi: the second girl to fall in love with Hizoku, his "defender," his most loyal companion.
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There we go. Longer than the first chapter.

NEXT TIME: Sakuya
Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 0: Friend Part 3
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(I know the profile for her said that she was a first year, but I'm making her a second year to make more sense as Hizoku's classmate.)

Kei Inui, a tomboy. Another of Hizoku's classmates. She was always good at sports, but was never really good at regular class work. She is the captain of the track team and always seems to act like another guy. But, she is still a girl, and likes the soft fur of animals, always stopping to pet a random cat on the street. She's very sensitive about people finding her manly though.

She met Hizoku in his first year of High School, being one of his classmates. She became one of Asuna's friends and she introduced them. She didn't fear him like the others, but she ended up challenging him...which confused the Hell out of him. Granted, the reason she challenged him was because this was after Hizoku had met Enishi and had started working out. He had already gotten some bulk but not a lot. Kei had seen him out on the field, and despite her seeing him doing pretty well, he was actually not very good at it. For example, while Hizoku was tired, his heart racing, sweating and burning up, he always kept a good pace because he was determined to get better.

Kei saw this and challenged him to a race, which, when coming out of the blue by someone you just met, is very strange. But he was somewhere happy. Why? Because she had it with a smile on her face.

And so they raced. 2 laps around the track. Needless to say, Kei won. Hizoku was just a beginner after all, he ended up half a lap behind her. But, they became close friends after that. She just seemed like a guy to him. They fought every so often, she would hit him on the arm and he would hit her back. They laughed together and everything. Though the hitting didn't help people's image of him, thinking that he just struck a helpless girl. But he didn't care. He had friends now. Good friends. Friends he could count on.

One day, about 2 weeks after they became friends, Hizoku, Asuna, Enishi, and Kei were all standing at a crosswalk. Enishi had to continue down the sidewalk to get to her house and Asuna ended up going to a candy store nearby, leaving Kei and Hizoku alone. They conversed for a bit, talking about their favorite shows and why Kamen Rangers is lame nowadays instead of how it was cool when they were kids.

"The first actual series was way better than that crap they have today." Kei said.

"Definitely," replied Hizoku. Then Hizoku realized something and pulled his bookbag around front of him, digging inside of it. "Oh. I just remembered. Check this out." He then pulled out a strategy guide for the newest game 'Depths of Pandemonium.' "Just got this yesterday!"

"SERIOUSLY! That game's supposed to be extremely difficult...is it?" Kei asked excitedly.

"Yeah, the bosses are-" then he noticed a kitten coming across the street. "Oh look, a kitty."

He heard an adorable squeak escape Kei's lips as her eyes seem to shine with glee. "EE~ It's so cute!" She then ran up to pet it, but she failed to look what was around her. A truck was speeding toward the itersection, about a good 250 feet away. The driver slammed on the brakes, but was going too fast and had too much momentum to stop in time.

Hizoku, being quick to react, rushed forward and grabbed Kei, who had picked up the kitten to pet it, and dived across the road, but his foot ended up getting smacked on the grill of the truck, practically shattering it. He screamed in pain, getting the immediate attention of Enishi, who was just a block away, and Asuna who had come running out of the store.

The driver stopped and began to apologize immediately. He then get Hizoku into the truck and they all got to the hospital.

Hizoku ended up having to get surgery to get the bones in their original places and, thanks to some modern medicine, they were able to fix his foot up, but he needed a thick cast to keep it all in place so it could heal. They had a witch that could Telly heal it, but that would have been expensive.

The truck driver helped pay for the medical bills as an apology, but it's not like it was his fault. Kei, Asuna, and Enishi now sat next to Hizoku on his hospital bed. Kei kept apologizing and apologizing, but Hizoku put a stop to that.

"Please stop that."

Kei, who had tears in her eyes, said "B-but there has to be something I can do to make it up for you."

"Relax, our insurance will cover it. No need to worry."

"Not just that. It's because of me you got hurt. There has to be something." Kei sobbed.

"Okay fine." He then flicked Kei on the nose. "From now on, don't go stopping in the middle of the street like an idiot. Got it, Kei?"

Kei nodded.

"Oh, and work on your observation skills. Your peripheral vision sucks." Hizoku laughed, but Kei's heart, after seeing the cheerful face of the one who saved her, it skipped a beat. She swore that no matter what, she will stick by his side and do whatever she can to make him happy. She knew, that deep down in her heart, she loved him.

Kei Inui, tomboy, Hizoku's "guy" friend. Now a truly devoted friend to her savior.
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Before anyone asks, magic is expensive in this world. Why? Because it works so well, that it people would pay more. It's effective and quick, but you can get the same results with a slow and cheaper process.
 

Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 0: Friends Part 4
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Sakuya Aima, a quiet girl in Hizoku's class. His most recent friend. She always seems a bit isolated from the rest of the class. But despite her solitude, she is a very pretty girl. Nice DD-cup breasts, wears glasses that seem to compliment her looks, and long braided black hair. A very "scholarly" looking girl. Plus she had very good grades. But because of how she is separated from the group AND her good looks along with her grades, she is often bullied by some other girls, jealous of her looks and thinking that Sakuya thought she was too good for everyone else. They would order her around, telling her to buy things with money out of her own pocket, openly taunting her, and forcing her to carry their stuff, making her self-esteem drop drastically.

Hizoku, being the observant one, had taken notice of her being bullied. He wanted to confront them, but he knew that Sakuya will be one of the people who feared him. And he was right. The first day that Hizoku was in that class, she was one of the first people who ended up fearing him. She was going to end up sitting behind him, but she was so afraid that she had requested being moved to a backseat.

But moving to the backseat had hurt Hizoku's feelings as well, thinking that even staring at the back of his head was too horrible to bear. Asuna, being in the seat next to him, gave him comfort. Course, with everyone thinking Hizoku was some kind of delinquent, (not to mention his latest muscle growth) it just made him seem worse with a girl hanging on his arm. Made everyone think she was his "mistress," and along with the fact that he and Enishi had recently become friends last year, made people think he had some kind of harem of delinquent girls and/or slaves. Not to mention him hanging out with Kei a lot. (which is a ridiculous thought of course) But I'm getting off topic. Back to Sakuya.

As what was said before, Hizoku wanted to confront Sakuya's bullies, but since she feared him, she would more than likely think he was making her owe him and make her become another of his mistresses.

Hizoku had tried to get Enishi to help, but she informed him to be himself and prove to her that he is not a delinquent. He would have asked Asuna, but she would probably be too violent and frightened Sakuya. Not to mention she would have said something unnecessary about Hizoku and made it seem like Sakuya should serve him. She always says weird things. Kei said she was busy with Track...which was a terrible excuse since the bullying goes on during the middle of the day too instead of just after school.

Hizoku just sighed and decided it would be best to give a proper warning to the girls and scare them off then get away from Sakuya as soon as possible.

(After School)
The three girls who were bullying Sakuya had her pinned against the wall. One had a pocket knife and the other had a camera. The one pinning her said "I think it's time we put that body of yours to good use. People will pay a lot of money to see nude pics of a high school girl." They laughed evilly as the girl with the knife cut the front of Sakuya's shirt. Sakuya had already begun to cry. Her breasts bounced as her bra was cut as well, freeing her DDs. The girl with the camera had already begun snapping pictures. Just as the first girl was about to rip Sakuya's skirt off, Hizoku spoke from behind.

"You know, I hate people like you." Hizoku said with confidence, hoping to scare them off with a single glance, trying to put on his scarier face.

But instead of a shocked look, the girl turned around with a grin. "Ah~ If it isn't the number 1 delinquent Hizoku. Please, if I was scared of you, I wouldn't be pushing this stupid girl around. I know about your pacifism." Hizoku's eyes widened in surprise. But then his focus was broken when her fist collided with his face. He didn't fall down, but it did kinda hurt. He didn't move from his spot though. "What's the matter. The number 1 delinquent can't fight back?" she said mockingly and continued to hit him.

Hizoku just took it. He had had worse bullying than this bitch, and he never really fought back because his life was never threatened. Only a few times did he step in because someone else was in trouble.

After a while the girl stopped hitting Hizoku, a big bruise was now on the side of his face, swelling up a bit. She then took the knife from the other girl and pointed it at him. "Now remove your clothes and violate Sakuya."

Hizoku was shocked at this command. "W-what?"

"You heard me asshole. People will like it more if someone is fucking her. Now strip down and fuck her."

One of the other girls spoke up "But his face is badly bruised now. It won't look good."

"We'll just put a mosaic on it when we edit the pictures." said the first girl. She brought the knife closer to Hizoku's chest. "Do it you coward. Take off your clothes and fu-UGH!" Hizoku had had enough. His blood was boiling. His brain told him to hit her. But he didn't. He grabbed her wrist and twisted her arm behind her. She dropped the knife onto the ground, landing flat on it's side. Hizoku stepped on it and shoved the girl forward, her head smacking into the wall. But before he could do that, the girl with the camera snapped a picture.

"Ha! We have a picture of you committing violence against a girl. What can you do now?" said the girl.

Hizoku just reach forward and grabbed the camera. He brought it up and slammed it into the ground, stomping on it once it hit. It was digital, so no film. "That's what. Now get the Hell out of her before I lose my temper any further and do something irrational."

The girl he grabbed before charged at him, ready to hit him in the face. He grabbed her fist and squeezed. "Just because I'm a pacifist, doesn't mean I won't step in when someone else is getting hurt. It also means I won't hesitate to defend myself if my life is in danger. Now kindly FUCK OFF!" He tossed her into one of the other girls and they all ran off.

Hizoku's heart was pounding. He had never had the urge to beat someone like that. She had told him to rape Sakuya. His head was pounding. His swollen cheek was throbbing. He looked down at Sakuya, who was shaking with fear. Hizoku then fainted, falling over and hitting his head on the cold hard ground.
*****

(About one hour later)
Hizoku's eyes opened. Kei's voice called out "Hey! He's coming to!" She was sitting on a chair next to the bed. He was in the infirmary.

Hizoku grabbed his head and said "Uhh, what happened?"

"You passed out," said Enishi as she walked toward the bed, Asuna right behind her.

"And why about Sakuya?"

Asuna responded "She went home after telling us about what happened."

Kei hit Hizoku in the arm and said "She talked about how you came to save her, Mr. Knight-in-Shining-Armor."

Asuna giggled and said "We were able to bring down the swelling on your cheek. Some teeth are a little loose, but nothing a trip to the dentist can't fix."

Hizoku said "Oh goody. I hate the dentists." He then fell back on the pillow. "Did she really say 'Knight in Shining Armor?'"

"Nah." Kei said. "But she spoke with a certain admiration in her quiet voice."

"Really?"

"NOPE! She was frightened of you! Shaking the whole time!" She would have continued, but Enishi smacked her on the back of the head.

"Enough." Enishi commanded. "Sorry Hizoku. That was a lie. She did speak with a sort of admiration. But she did say you were kind of scary at first. But she realized that you had helped her out of the kindness of your heart. She said she will thank you properly tomorrow."

"She shouldn't push herself. If she doesn't feel comfortable around me than she shouldn't be around me."

"A little for that isn't it Hizo-chan?" Asuna said. "She already left. And the only way to tell her that is to be around her. So you're out of luck."

"Well, can't you guys-"

All: "NO!"

Hizoku's head drooped. "Okay." He stood up and said "Alright. Let's go home. I'll talk to her tomorrow."
*****

(The next day: Lunch)
Hizoku, Asuna, Kei, and Enishi were eating up on the roof. They were having friendly conversations when the rooftop door creaked open. There stood Sakuya, her face beet red and her body shaking a bit. Hizoku was facing away from the door and stayed that way, hopefully trying to make her more comfortable. Asuna waved at her and shouted "Sakuya~!"

Sakuya slowly made her way over to them. When she got a certain distance Asuna rugged over and hugged her. She was then practically dragged closer to the group. Asuna pushed her forward at Hizoku, who continued to look away.

Sakuya spoke quietly and said "T-thank you for...h-helping me yesterday."

Hizoku replied with "Don't mention it. If you don't feel comfortable around me, then there's no need to come say 'thanks.' I know you're scared. A lot of people are. And it's all because of this face. I did what I had to do. Those girls won't bother you anymore. But if they do, you have to stand up for yourself. Your quiet nature is what caused it. No offense. But if you were to speak up a bit, you could make some friends. You're a very pretty girl, and I'm sure you would be very popular if you just give it a shot."

"W-well. Actually, I was just wondering if...if I could eat with you?"

Hizoku's head perked up, like a cat who just heard the sound of a cat food can being opened. He turned to her and asked "Why?"

As it turns out, Sakuya wasn't shaking or blushing out of nervousness. She actually thought he was cool and was nervous to talk to him. Her heart was pounding, her chest hurt just to look at him. Her body was burning up. "Well... I just thought that, well, you were pretty cool yesterday. You're not a bad person. I was hoping that...maybe we could be friends?"

Hizoku's heart practically melted. His mind was in sheer bliss that someone actually said that to him. Granted he knew that Asuna, Kei, and Enishi were his friends, but those words that Sakuya spoke really touched his heart. Plus, as an added bonus, she looked absolutely adorable! Hizoku quickly shook his head back into reality and scooted closer to Asuna. "Yeah. Of course you can."

Sakuya Aima: Hizoku's newest companion, His quiet love, the big-chested-glasses girl need for every harem.
*****

(present day)
Hizoku, Asuna, Kei, Enishi, and Sakuya were all heading to Hizoku's house to study. But when they get there, in the living room, there stood both Hizoku's mother and father...kissing (very passionately I might add). "Mom!? You're back!?" Hizoku shouted in surprise. See, his mom had divorced his father and moved to a different country and taken his sister with her. "What the fuck!?"

She stopped kissing his father and looked at Hizoku with joy. She quickly rushed at him and gave him a big warm hug, yanking him into her bosom and swinging him around with ungodly motherly strength.  "Oh my son~! I missed my little boy~!" She pulled the befuddled Hizoku out of her chest and squeezed his cheeks and said "You've gotten so big~! So manly! Oh! And you've brought friends? Oh wow~ You've got yourself your own little harem don't you?" Hizoku just blushed along with Enishi and Sakuya. Asuna and Kei just laughed. Asuna was more of girlish giggle and Kei just gave a hearty laugh.

Hizoku said "It's not a harem. They're my friends." But she wasn't listening to him and bad begun hugging Asuna.

"Oh Asuna~! You've become a lovely young woman! Take good care of my son~!"

Asuna nodded happily. "Yes ma'm! Will do!"

And just before she could hug everyone else, Hizoku shouted "Mom! Why are you here?"

"Oh!" his mother responded. "I know me and your father divorced. But after a while of being away, I realized that I was much happier with him. So I've came back and we've decided to get remarried!" There was a small applause from the four girls behind Hizoku. His mother bowed a bit. "But for now your father and I are going to go on a luxury cruise together so we can spend quality time with each other!" She twirled around with glee as she said this. "So I'll be looking to YOU my son to take care of your sister!"

"WHAT?" Hizoku said as his little sister, Riri stepped out from the kitchen, eating a sandwich. Since Hizoku hadn't seen his little sister in such a long time, he rushed forward to hug her, only to fall over when she stepped away from him, making him fall on his face. "Aww~."

Riri stepped toward the group of girls. She looked up at Sakuya...well, at her tits. She seemed to be a bit jealous of them, as she grimaced at them, making Sakuya nervous.

Hizoku's mother and father then rushed past them quickly, carrying their luggage. "WellitwassonicetoseeyouagainbutwedontwanttobelateBYEEEEE~!" And they drove off, leaving everyone behind in an awkward silence.
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Sorry about the long wait. Distractions distractions.

Next Chapter: My Strange Little Sister, Riri
Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 0 Part 5: My Strange Little Sister, Riri
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So there they sat. In the living room. Asuna, Kei, Enishi, Sakuya, and the main character himself, Hizoku. There they all sat, confused and awkward, all looking at Riri, Hizoku's little sister, whom Hizoku now has to live with...alone...with a girl that used to be attached to her older brother. Now, she is a silent and cold girl in her first year of high school.

...Silence. Hizoku was about to say something but was cut off by Riri. "Well big brother. It appears that we will be going to the same school. Try not to embarrass me."

Hizoku was a tad annoyed by this remark, but he pushed it to the side and stood up. "I don't see you in almost 8 years and I don't even get a hug. What's with that?"

"Hmph." she replied. "That's such a childish thing. I've grown into a mature young woman that has no need for such informal affections."

".....Small sister speak big words. Make brain go duuuh." Hizoku retorted, making Asuna and Kei laugh. Enishi just sat quietly as Sakuya giggled a bit.

Asuna stood up and said "Oh come on Riri. He's your brother. He hasn't seen you in so long and this is what you do? You've changed, but not in a good way. Besides, you're probably going to need help getting used to things. Not to mention if you don't want to be embarrassed, then that's gonna be kind of hard when you have to walk home with him. People are gonna start thinking he's added you to his 'harem.'"

Riri said "Then I'll just walk home a different way."

"I don't think that's a good idea. A girl your size, walking around by herself? You'll be easy prey to those perverts out there. You're gonna need your 'scary' big brother around." This made Kei give a loud "Ha!"

Riri gave a "Hmph," sound and replied with "I've grown far more intelligent than my former childish self. I've skipped 3 grades and am now going into High School as a genius prodigy. I don't NEED him around. I can take care of myself just fine."

Enishi stood up "Then at least let me take you home. I can't let anybody walk around on their own without protection from lechers."

"Please," Riri said. "If I didn't need my big brother's help, what makes you think I need you? It'll just make me look weaker with a sword toting samurai girl walking with me like some body guard."

Enishi blushed at Riri's words out of some humiliation. She wasn't a "samurai girl." Was she?Hizoku stood up and said "No Riri. I'm not letting you walk around on your own. You are to walk home with me and the others. As your bug brother...'bug brother?' Bleh. Words! Why u no work right?" This made the group laugh a bit. "Anyway, as your BIG brother, I won't let you walk around unprotected. Now C'MERE!" He then reached forward with both arms and lifted Riri up and pulled her into a hug. She just sort of dangled in his arms.

After 10 seconds, Riri said "Are you going to put me down?"

"Not until you hug me back."

Riri sighed and put her arms around to his back, blushing a little. Asuna, also quite the observant one, noticed her face and grinned. Hizoku put her down and said "There. Now was that so hard?"

Riri looked away from him and said "Maybe."

"Ha! Well go unpack your stuff. If you need help just ask. We need to study. If you're hungry then tell me what you need. I'm making hash browns and eggs for supper."

As Hizoku headed to the kitchen and put on an apron, Riri chuckled and said "You. Making food? Unbelievable."

Hizoku pointed at her and said "Hey!....Shut up," and went back to prep work on the cooking. "And make sure tomorrow that you meet us out at the front of the school after the day is over!" he shouted from the kitchen.

"Yeah yeah." Riri replied.
*****

(The next day: After School)
Hizoku and the others were heading to the front gate. When they reached there they didn't see Riri. She was probably still getting accustomed to the school, so they waited. 5 minutes passed. Still no Riri. Hizoku frowned. "Dammit. She ran off without us."

"Maybe she went home with friends?" Kei said.

"No. She's not one to make friends so easily. She seems much colder now than what she used to be. I better go look for her. I think I know where she's going." Before anyone could object Hizoku ran off down a street. The others decided to split up and look down other streets.
*****

Riri was walking down a secluded street. Nobody was around and it seemed pretty run-down. She couldn't hold back her trembling. She knew this was a different route home, but it was so much nicer back when she was a kid. "Crap. Maybe I should go back. No! If I go back like a scared little girl he'll never let me live it down. I'll just have to endure." But as she said this, she heard some rustling down a filthy alley. Immediately Riri had second thoughts and began to turn back, but then she felt someone grab her and a wet rag was put over her mouth. She knew immediately what the substance was.

Chloroform.
*****

Riri woke up cold, and heard a heavy breathing. Her eyes slowly opened to a filthy and deranged looking man on top of her. She about to scream when his hand clasped down on her mouth. A knife was pointed at her. Be spoke in a scraggly voice "You wanna live right?" She nodded. "Then do as I say and shut the Hell up. It's about time you woke up though. I wanted to see the look on your face when I did this!"

The man then gripped Riri's shirt and tore it off in one foul swoop. He then began to grope and massage Riri's flat chest. "So cute. It's not often I get someone as small as you. Not a lot of girls walk these street because it's so dangerous. So I should really thank you for being so stupid."

Riri was about to say something when the handle of the knife hit her on the side of the face, making her yelp in pain, forcing tears from her eyes. "That's it~ Cry! Your sorrow just makes me want to fuck you more~!" He then reached down and ripped off her panties, revealing her small virgin pussy. "Ah~ I'm going to enjoy taking away your innocence, and perhaps after I'm done, I think I'll keep you. You'll be own little pet."

The man was practically drooling and slobbering at the thought. Before Riri could try yell out of fear, he hit her in the gut and knocked the wind out of her. But she let out a weak cough before she was silenced. This cough reached the ears of a very concerned big brother.

And just the man raised the knife again to hit her, Hizoku stepped behind him, startling the man and making him jump to his feet and back off. Immediately Riri jumped on her feet and dove into her big brothers embrace, crying and sobbing.

Hizoku held her close before pushing her behind him, shielding her from the crazed man. He then saw the man charge him, Hizoku reacted the only way he knew, by being the shield. He ran forward, reaching for his shoulders to pin him down. Too bad he forgot about the knife for that instant, only to remember as it was driven into his gut. The pain made him react immediately as Hizoku pushed the man away, but leaving the knife jammed in him.

He looked down at the knife. This was the knife this crazed man was threatening his little sister with. But for the second time in his life, an insane amount of hatred flowed into his mind. The pain didn't matter anymore. What did matter, was getting this bastard to stop polluting the world with his presence. He quickly removed the knife and as the man rushed again, Hizoku subconsciously defended himself and drove the knife into the man's chest and into his heart, killing him. As the man fell down, Hizoku then looked at the bloody knife in his hand.

He then realized what he did. He just killed a person. A living human being. He never had the thought to kill someone. His hands began to shake. He trembled and dropped the knife, the clanging of it hitting the ground rang in his ears loudly, echoing. He looked down at his stab wound, and a that pain caught up with him. He fell to his knees and looked back at his frightened little sister. She was trembling with fear and cold. Before Hizoku did anything else, he needed to comfort her. His hands moved on their own and removed his jacket, which was open so it avoided the stab, and gave it to her. She just looked scared and confused at it. And that's when Hizoku's vision blurred and he fainted, his head slamming into the ground.

Darkness.
*****

(5 hours later: Hospital)
Hizoku awoke to a sharp pain in his stomach and his friends sitting next to his hospital bed. And in the middle of them sat a crying Riri. She was wearing his coat. Hizoku then spoke in a slow voice "How...how long..has it...b-been?"

Asuna answered "5 hours. They had to preform surgery and apply some heavy sedatives and antibiotics."

"Why?"

"That knife was very dirty and slightly rusted. Very bad."

Hizoku nodded and then looked down at Riri. "Riri?"

She jumped at the sound of his voice. "Y-yes?"

Hizoku pointed at her and said in a rather commanding voice "Don't EVER walk down that road again! And don't EVER walk around by yourself!"

Riri cringed at his yelling. "I'm sorry. I'm sorry big brother! I just wanted to show I could be independent. I wanted to seem mature to you. I didn't mean for this to happen." She continued to sob.

Hizoku looked up at the others and said "What about the criminal?"

"Dead," spoke Enishi. "It was almost instantly. You did what you had to. He was scum of the planet and did not deserve to live. Something tells me that Riri was not his first victim."

Hizoku knew he did what he had to, but he still felt wrong for taking a life. Bur he knew he would have to let it go. He then looked back to Riri and said "Don't ever make me worry again Riri."

"I'm sorry big brother," Riri said. "I just wanted to show that I'd grown."

She then felt his hand on her head. "Don't be so quick to grow up. Enjoy your time as a kid. You'll never get anymore chances like it." Riri nodded. "Now tell me. Who has the best brother in the world?" Immediately she blushes and looked away. "Come on. Who has the best brother ever?"

"M-me."

"That's right. You have the BEST brother in the world. And don't worry. No matter what, I'll always be there for you."

Riri Yomari: Hizoku's little sister. Has a brother complex since she was little. Hizoku's future "cuddle buddy"
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There we go. Sorry it took so long. Next chapter should be the beginning of the "Succubus Invasion"
Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 1 PART 1: For the Person I Love
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The weekend. Everyone is at home. Stuck with homework. Even Hizoku, who has to stay home for his wound to heal, but his friends brought his homework to him. Now, currently, all of their parents had all gone away on a luxury cruise, which is where Hizoku's parents got the idea. Despite their suspicions, the group decided not to fight it since there was nothing they could do.

Asuna, being smart, finished her homework early. This left her with more time to think. What does she think about? What she always thinks about. Hizoku. Her true love. The one she hopes to spend the rest of her life with. She gripped her crotch with lust and rubbed it as thoughts of her beloved rushed through her mind. But then, something popped in her head she never really thought about. He friends, Enishi, Riri, Sakuya, and Kei. All of them in love with Hizoku. She was observant. She saw the look on their faces when Hizoku compliments them or laughs with them. They're the same as her.

So what happens to them if she gets Hizoku. Heartbroken. To have the man you love taken away by one of your friends. A dreadful feeling. So what could she do? She didn't want that to happen to them. She loved her friends.

She thought long and hard about what to do. Was Hizoku even aware of their love? Did he know their feelings? No. He sees them as friends. True friends. But what could be done so that everyone is happy.

After a good hour of thought, a thought crossed her mind. A very "naughty" thought. They could all have him. Each one would express their love to him. There's no way he would be able to choose. He would not want to hurt them and if they all agreed to love him together, then everything works out perfectly. Then Hizoku would be considered the luckiest man in the world. But how would she do it? Their personalities wouldn't allow it.

She played each situation in her head, as if it was a dating sim.

Enishi and Riri are tsun type people, so they would just deny it. Kei is too much of a "loyal" friend to do it, as she takes the friendship seriously and would feel like it would impact their friendship if she confessed. Sakuya...well she would just sit there and blush and probably faint.

Asuna sighed. All their personalities conflict with their feelings. Not to mention Hizoku wouldn't be too keen on his little sister being in love with him. She needed some way to get them all on the same page.

"But how~!" Asuna whined out as she flailed on her bed like a crying baby. A voice then echoed through her mind.

"I think I know a way~" said a seductive and feminine voice. The kind of voice that could bring a man to his knees just from hearing it say his name. A voice commonly found with succubus, or in this case, a Lilim.

Asuna's room became shrouded in darkness. She then fell from the spot where her bed used to be and fell on an invisible floor. She was now in a pocket dimension. From the shadows stepped a woman with ample breasts, a slender waistline and a wonderfully round ass. Her redeeming feature was her red, practically glowing hair. Her other features were her pure white horns, white tail and pure white wings. Her eyes glowed with emerald, as did her emerald green dress. Her ruby red lips pursed when she saw Asuna. She practically slid towards her.

The Lilim then sat down right next to her and put her arm around her shoulder. She pointed up and Asuna followed her finger to see a rather large and bright full moon. "So," said the woman. "I heard you are having 'guy problems' and I figured that I can help you out."

"And why should I trust you?" asked a suspicious Asuna.

"Well, I'm a Lilim. It's not like we Lilim have bad intentions. Well...actually I'm not TECHNICALLY a Lilim, what with me not being the daughter of the Demon Lord, but I'm around the same power range. But anyway, guy trouble. Now, YOU are in the middle of a love circle and you don't want anyone to be hurt. But none of them will open up and tell their feelings to the same guy. But I think I can help."

"Oh yeah. And how?"

"Well, if they were to become Succubus, don't you think they would be a bit more honest with their feelings?"

"What!? I-I wouldn't do that to them! I can't force them to become Succubi!"

"Who said it would be forced?" She then took Asuna's chin in her hand. "Just ask them, 'How far will you go for the one you love?' "

Asuna's eyes met the Lilim's and her mind was filled with images of Hizoku's smiling face. All of them, living happily together. Everyone smiling. His happiness. Their happiness. And she knew the answer to the question. She answered with a truly sincere and soft voice, "For his happiness, I would go to the ends of the world and beyond."

"That's what I thought. Now, will you welcome this transformation, and work towards his happiness with all your power?"

"Yes. Anything for the happiness of my love."

"Then let us begin."

And so, the Lilim took Asuna into what felt like an eternity of pleasure, pouring demonic energy into her as the transformation took place.
*****

When the transformation was done, Asuna, in her new form, stood in front of the Lilim, smiling. The room now had returned to normal. "How do you feel?" asked the Lilim.

Asuna smiled and said "Good~." She looked over her new body. First thing she noticed, her breasts. They had grown a cup size larger. She knew what Hizoku liked. Small enough to remain nice and perky, but big enough to bury your face into. She walked to her mirror and smiled at her figure. She had gained some curve to her body and ran her hand down her smooth thighs. She turned around to look at her small, yet still somewhat plump buttocks. Her tail swayed back and forth. She had grown wings that extended out to her elbows when fully outstretched.

"Those will grow as you get older." the Lilim said.

Asuna then reached up to touch her horns, which curved around the sides of her skull. They weren't big, but they made it around half the circumference of her head. She noticed some extra marks on her arms as well. Like some kind of tattoo design. "What are these?" asked Asuna.

"Those are symbols that represent your power. Since those go around your arms, so you have enhanced strength."

"Wow~" Asuna said joyfully.

"What will you do now?"

"Hizo-chan won't be at school for another few days so his wound can heal. He has stitches but he doesn't want to excerpt himself and they open again. This will give me enough time to change Enishi and the others."

"Don't worry about Sakuya. I'll get her. That should make things move faster."

"Thank you. Now, if you'll excuse me." Asuna began walking towards her desk and pulled out a notebook and a pen.

Curious, the Lilim asked "What are you doing?"

Asuna turned toward the Lilim and said with a smile of pure bliss and cheer "I have to make plans for our big wedding~~~~! I have to make sure EVERYTHING is planned out so that our happiness is assured!" Her eyes seemed to gleam and shine with absolute joy. "Oh God! I want to see him now! But I can't do that because it will ruin the surprise!" she then quickly turned back to her paper and enthusiastically began writing. The Lilim just giggled. That's when it hit Asuna. She turned to the Lilim and asked "By the way, you wouldn't happen to know how each of our parents got to go on a month long luxury cruise do you?"

"Oh. Right, that was me. Sorry."

"No need to apologize, this just gives more room for us and Hizoku! EE~~~~!" Asuna squealed at the thought of being alone with just the whole group.

The Lilim smiled and disappeared.
*****

(Later that night: Sakuya's house)
Sakuya was laying face down on the bed, mumbling to herself. She too was thinking of Hizoku. How would she tell him her feelings? Would he accept a shy girl like her? Did she have a chance with him since she wasn't with him as long as the others? These questions just made her all flustered as her face got redder and redder, her heart beating faster. She was too timid to hold a good conversation with him. She was weak compared to the others. What could she do? Thats when the voice said to her as well "What would you do?"

The voice frightened Sakuya. Yet something made her feel warm inside, calming her. "W-wha...what do you mean?"

"Oh you know," the beautiful voice replied. "How far will you go to be with the one you loved."

"I...I'll do anything to be with him. Despite his looks, he's very smart, he's funny, and even with his scary looks, he's very handsome." Talking about her loved one made her head feel all fuzzy. Her face becoming red once more.

Her room soon began to morph into the same place that Asuna's did. A place completely covered in shadows with a large moon shining down but not shining light on anything. Fear quickly grew within Sakuya's timid soul and she curled into a ball and shutting her eyes. Then, a soft hand reached out and touched her shoulder. Almost immediately her heart became warm and comforted. She turned to see the beautiful visage of the Lilim that visited Asuna.

The Lilim spoke "Do not be afraid my child. I am here to help you." When Sakuya's eyes met the Lilim's, she was filled with adoration. She envied yet adored the Succubus race for their assertive attitude and bold behavior. She longed to be like them. Able to be strong and be seen as a desirable woman.

"W-why? How?" Sakuya asked, her face reddening.

"You've wanted to become stronger, correct?" said the Lilim.

Sakuya nodded slightly.

"Good. I know how to help you become stronger, but you must tell me, what do you think of your friends?"

"W-what!?"

"Your friends. The others who love the one that you love."

Sakuya blushed deeply. Her mind wasn't at ease. She thought of them as friends, yes. But she also thought of them as obstacles. They much closer than she was to Hizoku. Always staying close to him. She barely ever actually got to sit next to him during lunch. But one of them she seemed to have a rivalry with. Asuna. Always clinging to him. Always saying "HIZO-CHAN!" like she was an excited child. Always making him smile. She was everything Sakuya wanted to be. She just looked down and didn't say a word.

The Lilim lifted Sakuya's chin and said "The question now is, how far will you go for the one you love."

Images filled Sakuya's mind. Just her and Hizoku, smiling. Their wedding day. The cold winter nights spent cuddling together under the sheets. His happiness. Her happiness. "To the end of the world and beyond."

"That's what I like to hear. Now, will you welcome this transformation?"

"Yes. Yes I will."

"Then let us begin."

And so, the Lilim took her. And Sakuya's night of bliss began, starting her transformation.
*****

Sakuya stood proudly in front of the Lilim, her new body filling her with pride as she looked down at her increased bust size and height. Her chest seemed to have grown by three cup sizes. And as she gazed upon them, she noticed some markings circling around them and up to her nipples. "What are these tattoos?"

"Symbols of your power. Since they are upon your chest, that means you are more fluent when it comes to seduction."

"Ah~ Should go nicely with my plans."

The Lilim said "Now. What will you do?"

Sakuya smiled. "Now, when I return to school, all the girls will become Succubi, the men into my slaves. I will become Queen of the school. I will never be ridiculed again. And when all these Succubi try to lay their horny grasps on my Hizoku, he will run, as is his personality. And when he does, he will come across me in my ultimate beauty. He will become entranced by me, and I will welcome him into my loving embrace. And he will forever be mine, and mine alone. But for now, I wish for you to take me again my Mistress."

The Lilim's lips seemed to twitch with a smile at that last remark. "Why's that?"

"Because, if not for you, I would not be this way. You are my Mistress. Your embrace was nothing like I've ever felt. Will you take me into your embrace once more?"

The Lilim, feeling in the mood once more, placed her warm hand upon Sakuya's cheek and said "Very well. Once more." And so, their lips touched, the Lilim's ruby red lips touching and sucking on Sakuya's new succulent lips. Their breasts rubbed against each other and only made their bodies hotter. The Lilim rubbed the base of Sakuya's tail, causing a shocked moan to escape her mouth. Their lips broke apart after their tongues locked together. The Lilim went down and began sucking on Sakuya's nipple, forcing a deep red blush to come over her face.

As the Lilim sucked on the nipple, milk began to pour out. The Lilim gratefully swallowed the delicious liquid as she released the teat. "You're lactating."

"Yes," said Sakuya. "When the time comes, for every meal, as I gulp down my Love's delicious liquid, so shall he gulp down mine. Perhaps I could even get him to call me "Mommy." Mm~ just thinking about his face looking up at mine gets me going even more. But for now, my body is yours."

The Lilim smiled and continued drinking Sakuya's delicious milk. Their love-making went on through the night. Hours of blissful caressing and kissing.
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Okay. So that's it for part 1. I really hope I did a decent job with the yuri scene at the end.

My apologies for the wait. I hope it was worth it.
Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 1 PART 2: For the Person I Love
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Enishi was patrolling the hallway, minding her own business. She knew that Hizoku wouldn't be back for another week, but why hadn't she seen Asuna around today. She almost never missed school. The others were worried a tad bit as well. Enishi sighed. "But, knowing her, it probably has something to do with Hizoku."

"You're partially right," said Asuna's voice from the side. Enishi was then pulled into a nearby room. The room being a storage closet. And even though she felt the hand of the person who did it, when the door closed, she could not see the person. But Asuna's voice echoed within the small room with a sort of whiny tone. "Enishi~ Admit it~ You like Hizo-chan just as much as I do~"

"Asuna!?" Enishi looked around cautiously. "I don't know what your trying to pull but it's not funny!" She tried to open the door but found it jammed. "Hey! What the-?" She was then pulled back by a pair of arms which spun her around and pushed herto the ground. But Enishi looked and saw Asuna, or at least who she assumed was Asuna by the face, laying on top of her. She then watched as the room turned into an empty void. "Oh God. What's happening?"

"You never answered the question~" whined Asuna.

"What's happened to you Asuna?"

"Why do always avoid the question. Come on~ Admit it. You like Hizo-chan too don't you?"

Enishi blushed. She struggled to stand up but found herself pinned. "W-what are you saying?"

"Just answer it already."

"W-well I suppose I do. But, I thought he liked you."

"No you silly. He's too dense to know my feelings just from experience. He probably thinks I'm just childish. That's why I'm asking you? You like him right?"

"Yes. I do. But I could never tell him." Enishi looked away in embarrassment.

"Why not? I'm sure he would except you?" Asuna smiled at her.

"That's not important! What IS important is what happened to you!"

"Me? I've just taken my first step to Hizo-chan's happiness." Asuna leaned in closer to Asuna. "But are YOU willing to take the next step."

"W-what do you mean?"

"You don't get it do you?"

"Get what?" Enishi asked.

"How do you think the others feel about Hizo-chan?"

"Well. Sakuya is a bit timid around him because of his looks, but I think she accepts him as a friend. Kei seems pretty loyal since he saved her."

"And Riri?"

"Well, she's his sister."

"Wrong! Well, yeah you're right about the sister part, but there's more to it than that! Sakuya loves Hizo-chan as well, but she's already taken the next step like me."

"What?"

"Yep. It's true. And the other two, they love Hizo-chan just as much." Asuna gave a bit of a smart-ass smile.

"Kei I can understand, but Riri?"

"Brother complex. She's just tsun tsun like you."

"Ohh. Ew."

"You'll get over it." Asuna gave a toothy grin. "So tell me, will you take the next step?"

"But for what?"

"For Hizo-chan's happiness. All five of us most bring our beloved happiness and joy. So in order to do that, we must all give him our love. Will you do that?"

Enishi's mind hazed. She felt strange. Her thoughts ran wild of Hizoku. His smiling face. He deserved happiness with what he's been through. The mocking bullies of his childhood. The glaring eyes of the ignorant classmates. The way they avoided him out of fear. He didn't deserve any of that. She would become his guardian. She will protect him from those eyes. No one shall harm her beloved. "Yes. I will take the next step."

"Good~ Then let us begin." Asuna bent down and their lips connected. Demonic energy flowed between them. The transformation ritual had begun.
*****

(Gymnasium storage room)
Two students were going at it like rabbits. One had horns and a tail, the girl, and the other, the boy, was on top, ravishing her like an animal. Both moaned and shouted in sheer pleasure. In the corner sat Sakuya, smiling and chuckling. "Soon, the entire school shall erupt into a massive orgy. And I will be sitting upon the throne as the queen of this school! And you, my beloved Hizoku, shall be my king!"
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Hopefully I did the conversation between Asuna and Enishi right. I hope you guys enjoy this chapter, despite it being a little short (I think). But hopefully I'll be able to get the next one soon. Which one do you guys want next? Riri or Kei?
Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 1 PART 3: For the Person I Love
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Enishi stood in front of an amazed Asuna. Enishi's hair, once black, now had a Silver-ish pink to it. Her former b-cup breasts grew to that of a D-cup. Her hips swayed from side to side as she looked down at Asuna. Runes were now formed on her back and up her spine. Asuna spoke first. "So how does it feel?"

Enishi grinned and replied "Good~"

Asuna smiled at her and said "Now, what do you want to do?"

"I want Hizoku. Now."

"Not yet Enishi." Asuna said as she held up her hands in protest. "We have to get Kei and Riri first. Then we will all surprise him!" Asuna cheered in a happy-go-lucky tone.

"Hmm. All of us?" Enishi asked.

"Yeah! Why ask?"

"I'm not sure Sakuya will have the same thoughts."

"What makes you say that?"

"I feel different than I did before. My emotions are flipped. Before, I fought for others, not myself, righteous but restricted. But now, I feel released. I feel as if I could do anything. And right now I want to go and conquer Hizoku's body. I want to make him mine. And I shall. And you won't stop me."

As Enishi tried to pass Asuna, she pushed Enishi back into the wall with a good amount of force, and a face that was not natural to Asuna's usual happy-go-lucky attitude. Enishi even ended up falling onto a bucket that was sitting on the floor. "No! Hizoku is injured and must stay in bed. I will not allow you to try and ravish him in his current condition. I don't care how you feel at this moment. We became this way for HIS happiness and I will assure it stays that way. You swore to be his protector, and I will make sure you keep that promise."

Enishi grinned. Asuna's strength was admirable and respectable. "Very well then. Have it your way. But once he's better, I can't be held accountable for my actions."

"Good." Asuna replied. "Now tell me, what's this about Sakuya having different thoughts?"

"Well, remember how I said my emotions had flipped?"

"Yes," said Asuna.

"Well, it did that for me, then there's a good chance it did so for Sakuya as well. We never gave her many chances to get that close to Hizoku, so she may feel as if we were obstacles."

"What makes you figure that?"

"A woman's heart is a frail thing. Emotions are bound to be mixed together when they shouldn't be."

"Hm. You're right. We may need to watch out for her." Asuna said, scratching her chin.

"You let me handle that, you take care of Kei and Riri."

"Deal."

"Good. Now...help me get my butt out of this bucket."
*****
(1 hour later)
Kei was jogging out on the track for her lunch break. She felt that it wouldn't be the same at the lunch table without Hizoku. It hadn't been for a while now. Hizoku was usually the life of the party along with Asuna. They usually even made little skits together, acting out scenes they saw on tv then over-dramatizing them for comedic reasons. She then thought back to the day when he was in the hospital for saving her, then to the day he saved Riri. She sighed deeply and sat down for a break.

How would she do it? How could she ever pay Hizoku back for his kindness. She then plopped down on the grass and closed her eyes for a good solid minute of thinking. When she opened them, it was pith black. Was it night time? Did she somehow fall asleep on the field and no one woke her up? No. That would be retarded. It was just a minute. Why was it so dark. That's when she noticed there were no lights.

She quickly sat up and looked at her surroundings. Emptiness. Darkness. An endless void. "Oh God," she muttered. She stood up and shouted "HELLO!?" Nothing. Not even an echo. Where was she?

"You're in the void," spoke a voice from behind her. Kei quickly spun around to see Asuna.

"A-Asuna? Is that you?" She hardly recognized her, what with the new look after all.

"Yep, it's me. You like the new look?" Asuna did a little spin to show off her body to Kei.

Kei, instead of being shocked, said "Hmm. It actually suits you pretty well."

"Really!?" Asuna shouted joyfully.

"Yeah. Hizoku's bound to love this outfit.

"Yay! I...wait, outfit?"

"Yeah. You really pull of the cute yet sexy succubus look. You're like an Alice, but slightly taller and bigger breasts. Very convincing pads too. You and Hizoku finally gonna do it?"

"What!? This isn't an outfit. And these certainly are not pads."

"Oh please. You can't fool me. I bet those horns, wings and tail are fake too. You can get this stuff at any store that sells lingerie."

Asuna, aggravated at this statement, then began to strip in front of Kei, who, intrigued, humored Asuna. Soon, Asuna stood naked in front of a surprised Kei, who looked at the horns, the wings, and the tail with amazement. "So...they're not fake?" asked Kei.

"Nope. Totally real. I'm a succubus now."

Immediately, Kei did a 180 and sprinted away from Asuna. She tried to leave, but there was no exit. She just kept running until she bumped into Asuna. Kei fell to the ground, but Asuna continued to stand. But soon, Asuna kneeled down on top of Kei and leaned down so she was laying on top of her. She interlocked their hands and fingers.

"Why?" asked Kei.

"Why?" replied Asuna. "Why did I become a succubus? Because, it was the best way for Hizoku's guaranteed happiness. Sakuya is one as well, along with Enishi. And soon Riri will be as well. But before her, you must also become one."

"But...but why?"

"Because. Your personality conflicts with your love. You long for Hizoku's embrace. You wish for him to hold you in his arms and kiss you. You long to sleep within the same bed as him. To hold his hand. Do you not?"

"I...I do. I want all those things. But, just look at me. I'm so tomboyish. No guy would ever love me as a woman. I can only support Hizoku. I owe him my life. And I will stand by his side for eternity and further." Tears began to form in her eyes. "And I will always remember the day he saved my life. The day I found my true love. I will forever treasure his friendship. And I could never risk it. I could never do that. It is just something I have to deal with." Then, Asuna's cheek rested upon Kei's shoulder.

"It's okay my friend. He will surely accept your feelings. He cares so much about each of us. But I'm sure he's afraid to admit it."

"E-even so, I'm not sure I can become a succubus. What if he doesn't like it?"

"Oh come on, he may be different then most people, but he's still a guy. And what guy doesn't want a harem of beautiful succubi lusting after his body?"

Kei blushed and looked away for a moment, picturing it in her head. Everyone, together, laughing, smiling, happy. Hizoku, pulling her into a kiss and holding her tight. Her mind grew fuzzy and her body became warm. Her heart wavering and pulsing, knowing that she will spend the rest of her life with this man. The man she loved. Her true beloved. She looked up at Asuna and said "For him. For my beloved Hizoku. I will become his. I will give the rest of my life to him. To him, my beloved, my savior."

Asuna smiled and leaned closer, placing her lips next to her ear. "Good. Now, let us begin~"

And so, they held each other tightly as their bodies merged, Kei's transformation began.
*****

Remember the three girl bullies picking on Sakuya. Well, they were currently being chased by a pack of girl-hungry boy slaves and servant succubi of Sakuya's. They ran and ran from the ravenous group of hungry mind-slaves. They turned a corner and quickly lost them by jumping into a classroom. They sighed in relief as the group ran pass the classroom. But little did they know that Sakuya was waiting for them. They stared at the powerful Succubus standing before them.

"You three, I've been expecting you." They trembled in fear as Sakuya loomed over them. "You don't recognize me do you?" No response from the girls. Just fearful silence. "DO YOU!?"

Finally a response came from one of their lips "N-no! We don't!"

"I was the one you three so picked on! I was your toy! While I should be angry and force you on your knees and beg for mercy, I am instead grateful to you."

"W-what?" asked the one in the middle.

"Thanks to you three and your bullying. I met the man I will make my king. Thanks to you, I became part of this life and gained this power, so I will reward you."

"You mean, you're gonna let us go?" asked the one on the left hopefully.

"Pfft. No." As Sakuya said that mocking remark, the door swung open and there stood the group of mind-slaves that were chasing them. Before they could react, the girls were grabbed and restrained by some of the group, others groped and squeezed at their bodies, forcing moans and squeals out of their mouths. The cocks of the many males in the group pressed against their asses, the lips of the lesser succubi pressed against their bare skin. "Now," spoke Sakuya. "Before I decide to let my slaves have their way with you, I will give you a choice, allow me to reward you by letting you become my personal slaves along with the cock-hungry bitches of my future king, only being allowed to even so much of touch him when I approve of it, or become the new fuck buddies for this group of sex-crazed slaves. Your choice."

Almost instantly, the girls spoke out "Please don't let them rape us! We'll become your servants, just don't let them rape us!"

Sakuya smiled at their tear drenched faces. These women who seemed so strong before were now crying their eyes out and begging for mercy. And she will deliver. Sakuya held out her hands and a wave her demonic essence washed over them. Entering their bodies and their minds.
*****
(several minutes later)
The newly transformed slaves of Sakuya were now rewarded with a taste of their mistresses skin. Two of them licked at her feet. The other was rewarded with the privilege of sucking on Sakuya's fingers. They had never been happier, and Sakuya was one step closer to her ultimate goal.
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I am terribly sorry to the few readers I have. Was not very motivated recently so did not write as much as I wanted to. So the time it took me to write this may have hindered the quality. I'm not sure if I did the scene with Kei right or not. I hope I did, but that's up to you to decide. Thank you for reading.
Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 1 PART 4: For the Person I Love
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Kei was sleeping soundly after her transformation took place. She had become what appeared to be a mix of a werewolf and a succubus put together. Instead of the usual horns, they were now in the shape of pointed dog ears. Her hair had turned from her usually black hair to a grey color. Even her wings were different. Instead of being up on her back, they were now on the bottom of her back and was covered in grey fur. Her bust increased (as usual) by one cup, from B to C cup.

While snoozing, she had curled up in a little ball and her leg twitched slightly. Asuna looked down at her and smiled. She looked like a sleepy puppy. She grabbed Kei's shoulder and shook her awake.

As Kei awoke, she gave out a yawn, showing her canines that were now much sharper than usual. "Oh. Asuna. I had a wonderful dream about Hizoku. We were curled up together under a blanket by a fireplace. He pet my head and held me so close to him. It felt so wonderful."

"I'm sure it did. Now come on, I got to go find Riri."

"Actually, I think she left school earlier today."

"What? Why?"

"She told me about it this morning. She was worried that her 'idiot brother' would over work himself when he wasn't fully healed."

"Aw great. Now I gotta all the way back home too. You should go too. You already missed 3rd period and part of 4th."

"Oh," Kei responded. "That makes sense. Alright. I'll head home then."
*****
(Hizoku's house)
Riri was cooking back home. She confined her brother to the couch. He called out to her "Hey! I'm not sick. The stitches will hold it closed. You didn't HAVE to come home early." As he tried to get up, he felt a tinge of pain in his gut and plopped back down. "Ugh!"

"See!?" shouted Riri from the kitchen as she heard his grunt. "If not for me, you wouldn't be able to cook yourself a decent meal." But then she remembered the very reason he was like this. It was because of her. She sighed and continued cooking, trying not to think about it.

"Hey Riri?" Hizoku called out.

Riri hesitated before responding "Yes?"

"Remember the old days? When you and me played all the time. You weren't as cold as you are now."

"Cold?"

"Yeah. You seem kinda...distant. We were so close when we were younger. I thought that after all this time you would be happy to see me. We used to walk down the street, you would hold onto my hand because you were scared. But I never thought you would avoid me so much the first time I see you in so long."

"Well...it's nothing personal." Riri said. She wanted to tell the truth, but she couldn't. "Now try to sit up. Your food's ready."

Riri brought the food over to the coffee table in front of Hizoku. He sat up slowly and looked at the food. Riri had made lasagna. His favorite. He smiled up at Riri and said "I'm not entirely sure what made you act so cold to me, but I can't help but think it's my fault. And now you have to skip school to take care of me. I feel kind of helpless right now."

Those words pierced Riri's heart. Instead of blaming her for the position he's in, he's blaming himself. Her own feelings made her separate from him and got herself in trouble. He had to come save her. Be got hurt because of her. He had to kill someone because of her. She tried to stop him from continuing, but she couldn't speak up. Hizoku blamed himself for what's happened.

"I'm sorry Riri. I'm sorry I couldn't be a better brother."

Immediately the tears burst from her eyes. Riri turned from her brother and ran up the stairs, slamming the door to her room. Hizoku didn't understand. He apologized and she started crying. It was her feelings that caused this. Her disgusting feelings. She couldn't hold back for much longer. Her heart ached after seeing Hizoku like that. She was at first confused about her feelings, but now she absolutely knew what these feelings were. She at first thought it was natural. But now, she was certain. She fell in love with her own brother.
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Sorry for the shortness. But Riri's turn will be next chapter. And I know I don't show much confidence in my own work at times. But I think it's natural when someone does something like this. Whether it be a book, a fanfic, or a comic. I think it's just natural.
Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 1 PART 5: For the Person I Love
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Hizoku, feeling guilty for making Riri cry, had limped his way up to her room, knocking on the door. "Riri? Sis?" He opened the door only to have a pillow thrown at him and hitting him in the face. He reeled back a bit, but tossed the pillow aside. He stepped inside Riri's room and said "Sis?" He saw a little mound under the blankets. She had bundled herself in there.

"Please just leave!" Riri shouted from under the covers.

"Why? What did I do wrong? I'm sorry." Hizoku replied. He stepped forward a little bit more.

"No. No it's not you. It's me. You did nothing wrong. I'm the one to blame." Riri shook under the covers, trying to keep herself from reaching out and grabbing her brother. She knew that if she did, she'd never want to let go.

Hizoku tried to reach out and pull the covers away, but Riri scooted away from him. "Please Riri. Tell me what happened."

"It's because of me you're like this!" Riri shouted. "It's because of my stubbornness. It's because of my stupidity that you got hurt. You are innocent." She buried her face into her blanket, however, she did not anticipate Hizoku's reply.

"Riri?" Hizoku stood by the bed, refusing to move. "Whenever I saw you, being attacked by that man. I didn't know what to do at first. If I try to move, he might hurt you. I lucked out. He was frightened and got away from you. But when he came at me with the knife, I felt an adrenaline throughout my body. I wanted to subdue him and take him to the authorities. But...he got me instead. I only felt the pain for an instance, but after that...I don't know what happened to me. I blanked out. The last thing I saw was the man falling and the knife in my hand. I suddenly felt all that pain in one instant. I was confused. I was scared. I was horrified at what I did. All I could do was try to help you. That's all I wanted to do," Hizoku fell to his knees and began crying. "But...I am constantly reminded that no matter what...I can never erase such a traumatizing memory from your mind. And for that, I am sorry."

That tore it. Riri could not contain herself anymore. She dove from the covers and embraced her brother, who gladly hugged her back. "Never blame yourself for this Hizoku. What happened was all because of me. You are my hero. And I'm glad to have a big brother such as you."

They cried together. Hizoku held his little sister in his arms and cried. Riri's arms were wrapped around his neck. However, neither of them could figure out what happened next. Riri finally realized what she was doing. Subconsciously, she had kissed Hizoku...on the lips. She opened her eyes to see his shocked eyes looking at her.

Immediately she broke the kiss, her face beat red, she pushed Hizoku out of the way and ran down the stairs and out the front door.

Dumbfounded, but still aware, Hizoku's big brother instincts kicked in and he tried to chase after Riri, however he only made it to the railing at the top of the stairs when the pain from the wound had come again. He fell to the ground, cringing in pain. "R-Riri. Please...come back."

It was too late. Riri was now halfway down the road. She ran and ran and ran. Running away from her brother. Away from the man she now realized she loved. Away from the person who had saved her life, and was only rewarded with confusion.
*****

Several minutes later, Riri now sat on a swing set in the park she and Hizoku used to play at. The swing set from before was replaced by a newer one. The kind with the play area attached to it. All she did was think. Remembering the old days, when she and Hizoku would build sand castles.

However, her thought process was interrupted by two shadows looming over her. She looked up to see two men, grinning down at her, hoods covering most of their faces. "What's wrong little girl?" The one on the right asked. "Somebody hurt your feelings?" Riri didn't respond. She felt like scum of the planet. However, her eyesight was soon darkened as a blindfold was put over her eyes and was gagged with a washcloth. She kicked and struggled but was restricted by two of the men while a third held her arms up, carrying her into the bushes. She was thrown to the ground and immediately tied up, her hands and feet restricted completely. She heard the click of a butterfly knife being opened and felt her clothes being cut and torn off. She stopped resisting. She felt that she deserved this. She fell in love with her brother, kissed him, then left him in pain, in a mass of confusion and possibly sorrow, believing that he is at fault. Granted, Riri's mind was not in a good state at this point, but at this point she was in a state of self-loathing and other similar emotions. She thought she needed to be punished. And this time, big brother won't save her. No one will.

She felt their hands rub her, touch her, feel her. Her skin crawled at their touch. Soon, one of them flipped her on her back and pulled her ass into the air. She felt something warn press against her ass. Then, she heard them speak.

"What, going for that hole first?"

"Yeah. I love the tightness of the ass, plus with a small body like hers, it's bound to be tighter than that skank you were dating."

"Shut it! Just hurry up, I want my turn."

"No promises."

She then felt the tip press harder, then she felt it all.

After that, nothing but pain. Just muffled cries, tears, and pain.
******

Asuna had just reached The Yomari household and peeped in through Riri's window. Wait, it was empty. Plus the door was open. Riri always kept the door closed. That's when she heard a series of crashes and a loud thud. She raced down to the front door and retracted her wings. She went in the front door and saw Hizoku curled up in pain on the floor in front of the stairs

Hizoku was confused. Why? Why did his entire body hurt? His mind, his muscles, his heart. It wasn't even his scar that hurt, it was perfectly fine. But his body was shutting down and malfunctioning. Why? What was wrong with him?

Asuna practically dove to his side. She checked around him, no blood, no signs of a struggle, just, him. "Hizo-chan!"

"A-Asuna?" Hizoku let out. His vision was blurry. He could barely see. "Please...go find Riri. Tell her Big B-Brother is sorry. C-check the park. Please bring her back."

Asuna knew Hizoku was in pain, but she could not ignore his request. He was stubborn like that. So she ran out the front door and flew towards the park.
*****

Riri's eyes were dry, she could not cry anymore. Her formerly virgin anus was now stained with the cum of a man she did not know. She was shivering, frightened , and in pain. She soon heard the laughter of the men around her as another object was placed at her most sacred place. She wanted to come home and be strong, independent, and respected.  But now, she was alone, scared, and violated. Just another victim in a cruel world.

That's when she heard an explosion nearby. The screams of the men rang in her ears as they ran away. Screams of pain were heard. Loud thuds replaced the screams, afterwards came loud panting. She heard the steps of her savior draw closer. Her binds were cut and the gag removed. Her savior removed the blindfold to reveal the tear drenched face of Asuna, at least, who she assumed to be Asuna, since the tears dried around Riri's eyes blurred her vision. She looked up at her and buried her face into her bosom, crying out "I'm sorry~! I'm so sorry~! Please~" she pleaded with Asuna. "Please~ Make the pain to away...make it go away." Her voice gradually got quieter and quieter. Riri eventually passed out in Asuna's embrace. Asuna did the only thing she knew how to help at that point. She concentrated everything she had on her energy output and covered Riri in it. She would make the pain go away. She will bring joy back to Riri. She would make things better.
*****

Asuna had brought Riri back to her home, seeing that Hizoku had made his way over to the couch and passed out on it. She sighed at the sight and brough Riri over. She lifted Hizoku onto the couch and put a cover over him. She then took the sleeping Riri into the bathroom and washed her clean with a washcloth, getting anything left on her off. She then took her back into the room with Hizoku. She lifted the cover up and slipped Riri in with him.

Almost immediately, they had wrapped themselves in each others arms. Asuna felt a little jealous of her. Wrapped up in his arms, cuddling under a blanket. "Haa~" Asuna sighed. But then she remembered why it was like this. She then had the downtrodden look on her face and knew that if she had been a little faster, she could've saved her. She knew that the transformation wouldn't take place till tomorrow. So she smiled down at them, gave a small bow, and left. Leaving the two cuddle buddies together.
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Okay, my attempt at making a serious chapter. Not my usual floppy woppy good times, but an attempt at most. Not sure if you guys will like it though. Hopefully I did better than I thought I would. BUT, I assure you, I will get back to the floppy woppiness soon...if I can make the next chapter soon enough.
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Re: Nishizumi High School and the Invasion of the Succubi

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Finally this story returns !

I've been wanting to see the rest of this tale being told...

But one thing bothers me when is Sakuya going to start going after Hizoku ?
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*evil laughter* Soon~
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Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 2: A Not so Pleasant Surprise
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Hizoku awoke on the couch, alone, not remembering much about yesterday. He heard the sounds of clattering pans and other related kitchen noises. He sat up and looked towards the kitchen window to see a pair of blond pigtails bobbing up and down in front of the stove, the pig tails held together by a pair of horns. He stared for a second and thought 'Who the fuck is in my kitchen?'

He attempted to get up to get a better look, but the person moved off to the side behind the wall. He quickly went to the entrance of the kitchen, only to see that no one was there. He shook his head and went back to laying on the couch, only to be alerted several seconds later by a high pitched "GOOD MORNING~~!"

Sitting straight up, Hizoku was now facing the face of who he first believed to be his sister, except her hair was blond and she had horns...oh, and she was flying too. Yep, tiny yet adorable wings kept her suspended in the air. "........Good night dream person." and with that Hizoku laid back down and put the cover over his head.

He was awakened by the girl shaking him and saying "I'm not a dream person! You're a mean big brother!"

Hizoku sat up and stared disbelieving at this floating little girl. "Listen you. My sister does not have blond hair, horns, nor does she float. Despite your face and body shape being similar...no, exactly like her's, you're nothing alike...other than those two key factors. So one of two conclusions comes to mind. One, I'm insane and you're a hallucination. Or two, I'm still dreaming. How do you respond to that?"

The floating girl responded with a pouty face and began to repeatedly poke Hizoku's belly button. "Poke~"

"Stop that!" said Hizoku as he pushed the prodding finger away, only to be repeatedly poked even more."

"Poke poke poke poke poke poke poke poke."

Hizoku was now being poked everywhere. His face, his arms, his legs, his chest...you get the picture. He tried to block the pokes, but she was too quick. "Stop!"

"Not until you say I'm real! Poke poke poke poke poke poke poke!"

"GAH! Okay fine you're real!"

"Yay~!" The floating girl did a loop-de-loop above Hizoku in a burst of joy.

"Yeah yeah. Now, do you mind telling me who you are?"

"Riri! I'm your sister! Remember?"

"Like I said, my sister doesn't-AGH!" He was prodded on the forehead my Riri's finger.

"I am Riri!"

"Okay. Prove it."

"Fine!" She pointed to the white fuzzy bunny in the cage at the end of the room. "Her name is Snowball!"

"Big whoop. Not convincing."

"When we were little, we would take baths together."

"So do a lot of siblings."

"You still like the classic Kamen Rangers."

"The classics were badass. Everyone knows that."

"Our parents are nut cases."

"....Still not good enough."

"You're a pacifist yet in a fit of rage you killed a man to protect me."

"........" That just made Hizoku depressed.

"Sorry. Um, your favorite food is Lasagna?"

"Lasagna kicks ass. Not good enough."

"You had an impressive collection of Holstaurus, Orc, Ogre, and Amazoness porn in your room but mom made you throw it all out."

".........Okay you got me...WAIT! Why do you know that?"

"Mom told me."

"Grr."

"And if that isn't enough, you had a crush on your baby sitter, a Holstaurus named Holly."

"Alright! I get it! Why do you know these things!?"

"Asuna told me."

Hizoku just mumbled to himself as he got up and walked towards the kitchen. "Why are you like this?"

"Like what?" Riri asked as she flew towards him.

"This!" Hizoku pointed at Riri and then began pointing at her extra parts. "This, this, this and THIS!" he said as he pointed at her horns, her wings, her tail, and then he flailed around the air she was floating in.

"Oh...I don't know. I just remember Asuna bringing me home. I think I fell asleep in the park."

"You fell asleep in the park? That's a bit dangerous don't you think?"

"I-I don't know. I don't remember..." Then, in her mind, her memories from last night flashed in front of her. All of it in an instant. She gripped her head and cried out in pain. She tried to repress the memories, but she was soon comforted in Hizoku's arms, somehow easing her pain.

"Riri...what happened?" the concerned big brother asked.

"I-I don't know. Just please, hold me, and don't let go."

Hizoku nodded and held his little sister to his chest. She felt at ease there, in his embrace. She smiled as the horrible memories faded away, forgotten. She smiled.

Then the timer went off on the oven, reminding Riri that breakfast was done.
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A tad short, but all I could come up with at the moment. Wanted to get something out before I ended up passed out from this head-cold. God being sick sucks. But hey! I got a chapter out so that's good. :D
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Ch. 3

Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 3 PART 1: Another Day in the Life of a Protagonist
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The timer on the oven going off had ruined the mood for Riri. With a pouty face she separated herself from Hizoku and said "I'll get it." Hizoku grinned and sat down to wait for breakfast. French toast. One of Hizoku's favorites.

"Nummy~" said Hizoku as the food was placed in front of him. Three bread slices with butter, peanut butter, and syrup on top. He proceeded to cut it up and scarf it down. Riri simply watched in silence with a warm smile on her face. After he was done eating, he rubbed his stomach and said "Thank you very much Riri. It was delicious." Riri smiled in response and sat down in Hizoku's lap. He pat her on the head, glad to see his sister was smiling again, despite being a succubus. But when he looked down at her as he pat her head, her face was flushed and he could hear a soft moaning coming from her mouth. It was as if, patting her on the head gave her some kind of sexual pleasure, so when it began to felt awkward, he removed his hand. However, Riri soon looked up at him with some kind of perverted grin and with a fully flushed face and said "Pat my head some more~"

This caused Hizoku to quickly stand up, causing Riri to roll over onto the floor with a THUD. Hizoku looked down at his sister, about to apologize, but Riri slowly got up on all fours, panting heavily. Her face was flushed red and she looked up at Hizoku with the same perverse grin.

She giggled and said "Come on big brother~ Pat my head again. Please~?"

He began to back away but she crawled after him. Hizoku ended up tripping over a table leg and falling onto his back. Soon, Riri was on top of him, her hand had slipped inside his shirt. Hizoku was shocked, he couldn't move. Her hand trailed across his toned chest. She laid her head on his chest and moaned. "Mm~ Brother has gotten much stronger since we were kids. I like the feel of your muscles~"

Soon, Riri was now licking his neck, sucking on the side of it and letting out soft moans. However, Hizoku's brotherly instincts would not let these incestuous acts continue. "Get offa me you nutcase!" He quickly rolled over and pushed Riri off of him, but he pushed too hard and she ended up hitting her head on the bottom of the stairs.

"Oh SHIT!" Hizoku shouted as he rushed to Riri's aid. "You okay?"

Riri slowly got up, rubbing the back of her head. "Ow~ Yeah. I'm okay. But...why am I over here?"

"...Well. You had gone a little weird and well...it's best if you don't know."

"Oh...okay." Riri said, drooping her head a little. "Oh. Wait...what about your injury?" she asked as her head perked up a little.

"Hm? Wait, you're right. Come to think of it, it hasn't hurt all morning." He lifted his shirt and saw that the wound was healed, leaving an obvious scar. The stitches were gone, and it was fully healed. No pain. No stress. He smiled excitedly "YES! Finally! I don't have to be confined to the couch! I can finally get out of the house!" He bounced around the living room with joy, only to feel a sharp tinge of pain in his gut. He quickly stopped and gripped his stomach. "Ooo~ Okay. Note to self: scar can be torn if put through a lot of stress. I just have to keep calm and not get too excited."

Riri hugged him and said "So we can go to school together tomorrow?"

"Yes!" Hizoku quickly replied. But then realized something. "Wait. Won't there be a problem if you show up like this?"

Riri look up at him and shrugged. "Maybe."

Hizoku rubber his chin. "Hm. We'll have to explain it to the principal. I'm sure she'll understand."

"You're just coming up with an excuse to stare at her boobs are you?" Riri asked suspiciously.

"What!? No! Those days are over! I swear!"

Okay, an explanation is in order. The Principal of the school is a 30-year-old BABE. Her looks rival that of a succubus, despite her being human. She has the curves and the bosom of a goddess, however she is very reserved and modest. She wears long skirts and keeps her suit closed. However this does not stop some of the male students from staring. She DOES however have a twin sister who works as the school Nurse. She is kind of the opposite of her sister. She likes to tease the horny young students. Her cleavage is always out and the stares never cease. However, she is actually a lesbian, so there is no hope for the male population of ever getting into this beauty's bosom.

Back to the topic at hand.
*****
(The next morning)
Hizoku had made his way to the school, happy as can be. He told Riri to stay hidden until he had deemed it safe for her. As he walked to the school, he passed several students, although he was being avoided, things seemed pretty normal. That was until Hizoku actually entered the school grounds. He felt something come over him as he entered, like he stepped through a dense fog or some kind of spider web. He looked around and noticed not all the sunlight was entering. It was kind of dark out and there were black clouds rolling over the school grounds. He stepped back a little, only to pass through the fog once more. He gazed in amazement as the school grounds turned from a hazy dark area, back into a regular, light filled center for educational purposes. It didn't make sense. The students that entered seemed to go about their regular daily routine. But when he was inside the barrier, there was no one.

Hizoku pandered it in his mind. This had to be some kind of illusion. But whatever it was, he needed to find out, no matter how stupid of an idea that was. He stepped forward and entered the clouded area. He was not aware of the "dangers" he would soon face.
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I apologize it took so long. It was originally going to be longer, but had to split it up into parts. Hope y'all enjoyed it.
Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 3 PART 2: Another Day in the Life of a Protagonist
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As he walked to the front door of the school, Hizoku saw no one. No people walking to the school, even though he saw them enter the school grounds. The strange haze that covered the school disturbed him, yet he pressed on, his curiosity overcoming his common sense. But when he pushed open the front door, the sight he saw shocked him. All over the locker area, people were having sex. Not just students, teachers too. They were people he recognized. While the male students stayed the same as they were before, despite the crazy looks on their faces, all of the girls had grown horns and a tail. Some of them even had grown larger breasts and softer asses. It was quite the spectacle. The lights were out, yet some how the area was still dimly lit. Like what you see in a mildly thick fog...just, darker.

While this would deter any normal person, Hizoku felt the urge to press on past them. He stepped carefully around the groups of fuck-happy students, trying his best not to disturb them, however, little did he know that the moment he turned his back to them, the students and other mind-slaves had begun to stand up and follow after Hizoku. Once he got past them, he felt hot breath on his neck. He stiffed up and turned around slowly. There standing behind him stood the entire group of sex-crazed savages, all staring intently at him.

It was silent for a moment, but soon they all reached out to grab him. At this moment, it looked like a scene from a horror movie he saw a long time ago. It was a zombie movie which had frightened him at the time. A horde of zombies had reached out and grabbed hold of the main character and dragged him into the group to be torn apart just before the credits began to roll. On cue, Hizoku screamed from terror and ran for his life.

He stepped on many a couple as he ran. Each pair of fuck-buddies getting up and chasing after him. He ran and ran, not even noticing the sharp pain in his stomach. As he was chased, he saw in front of him standing a beautiful woman...with the distinct features of a succubus of course. She had bright teal colored hair and an ungodly bust size. She was tall and stood with a sort of elegance. She saw Hizoku and smiled, extending her arms outward and saying "Come my love! Embrace me and we will be together forever!"

Of course, these words did not reach Hizoku, instead, he ran right past her, screaming like a madman. This disappointed Sakuya (obviously) who, though aggravated, knew that he would not recognize her. She sighed and stopped the horny horde in its tracks with a wave of her hand. They stopped and stared as Hizoku vanished into the dark hallway. She smiled and slowly made her way in his direction. With no direct orders, the mob continued their group fuck session.
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(elsewhere)
After 5 minutes of fear-filled running, Hizoku found a slightly opened door which he immediately dashed into and closed the door behind him and locked it.

Panting loudly, he suddenly realized the pain and gripped his side. He sat down and rest a moment, the pain soon went away thankfully. That's when he heard the moans. He was in a small hallway with a door at the end. The door had a sign that said in bold caps "PRINCIPAL" on it. He cautiously stepped forward and opened the door.

The sight he saw shocked him once again. There, on the principal's desk, lay the Principal and the Nurse getting freaky with each other. They were making out, groping each other, and grinding their hips together. Needless to say, this aroused the hormonal teenager. However, he was soon noticed. Both the women looked up to see the young man standing at the door. They grinned as they slowly stood up. Hizoku backed up to the door, but of course it was locked. He panicked, tried to push open the door, completely forgetting that it was opened by pulling...and that it was also locked. He reached to unlock it, only for one of their hands to take its place atop his. The mere touch of her hand froze him in place. He slowly looked at them, standing right in front of him, completely naked. Their breasts pressed against the silent Hizoku, who did everything could to resist the charming aura around them. His heart beat increased and it didn't help that they began breathing onto his neck.

Then, before they could go any further, a loud crash was heard as the door shatters behind them. Hizoku falls back and the two succubi land on top of him. He looks up to see the panties of a rather tall, sword wielding succubus with silverish-pink hair. She then pulled her purple glowing sword back and brought it down. 'This is how I'm going to die,' thought Hizoku, however, the sword passed right through the three of them, not causing a cut. "Huh?" Hizoku then realized he couldn't move, and the Principal and Nurse weren't moving either. The succubus then picked them up and tossed them back into the room. She then looked down at Hizoku with a devilish grin.

"Hello Hizoku. Strange to see you here," the succubus said.

"Uhh...who are you?" Hizoku asked, not really being able to do much of anything else.

She raised an eyebrow and said "I can't believe you don't recognize me. Oh well, I suppose you wouldn't. I do look quite different than before. I am Enishi. The 'samurai girl' that had to save you from bullies?" She then smirked at Hizoku.

"Ah! Enishi!? You're....a....succubus."

"Yep. Asuna transformed me. She'll be wanting to see you." Asuna then lifted Hizoku over her shoulder. She then pat his ass slightly. "Ya know? I never noticed this before but you have a nice ass." She then begins carrying him down the hallway.

"GYAH! Stop that! Anyway what are you talking about? Asuna transformed you?"

"Yep. Along with Kei and from what I heard Riri as well."

"And no one told me about this because!?"

"We...well, SHE wanted to surprise you. I just wanted to take you for myself. However Asuna proved her strength and beat me with one push. So I respected her wishes...course, I plan on having plenty of fun later~" she spoke in a lewd tone during the last sentence as a little bit of drool dripped down her chin.

"AH! THIS ISN'T LIKE YOU!"

"I know~ It's wonderful to feel myself let go like this. Like I've been released from the burden of my last body~ Mm~ It's taking all my strength to not drag you in one of these rooms and have my fun with you~"

"GOOD LORD! LET ME GO!"

"No can do. If I just leave you here then those crazed mind-slaves of Sakuya's will just take you away."

"Wait...Sakuya is a succubus too?" Hizoku questions.

"Yep. But Asuna didn't change her. She said that the Lilim that changed her had changed Sakuya. Which leads me to believe that Sakuya is as powerful as Asuna."

"But...why?"

Enishi stopped as he asked this. "Because...I cannot explain."

But then from behind them came a demanding and posh voice. "Where do you think you are going with my king?"

Enishi turns and see Sakuya standing with a group of crazed students. She grinned evilly as they stood there, staring each other down. "What did you say?" Enishi asked, her eyes seeming to have an angry flare to them.

"I said," Sakuya spoke as her nails extended into claws. "Where are you going with my King?"
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SUCH A LONG FUCKING TIME! I'm sorry you all had to wait so long. :( I hope it was worth it. Sorry for the abrupt ending. Had to be able to post it sooner or later.

Nishizumi High School CHAPTER 3 PART 3: Another Day in the life of a Protagonist
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Chaos. The best word to describe what was going on. Hizoku was cowering in a nearby classroom onlooking the fight going on between Sakuya and Enishi. Sakuya used her mind-slaves as meat shields for Enishi's blade. Luckily, no blood was spilt due to Enishi's blade only paralyzing and not harming.

Stuff was flung everywhere. Books, shoes, even a freshly used condom splat against the window that separated and protected Hizoku, causing sperm to burst out and drip down the glass. "Eww," whined Hizoku. "Wait, where did this condom come from. I highly doubt any of the mind-slaves out there were using any. Thats just weird."

Hizoku had regained some control in his body, which allowed him to hide in the classroom as Sakuya and Enishi fought.

Sakuya constantly blocked and dodged Enishi's attacks, however, when Sakuya went to strike at Enishi, she would dodge as well, each one being equal in skill, however, if not for Sakuya's meat shields, this would have been over with already. Sakuya matches Enishi in speed but not in skill. Enishi has a longer reach than her. However, Sakuya had magic which she had not used yet. However, this story is not about fighting. That is why we must skip to the next bit.

Sakuya soon pulled back and held out her palm and a blast of energy fired forward. Enishi could not dodge, as it would possibly destroy a large portion of the school if she did not take most of the blast. Sakuya knew this and used this knowledge against her. Enishi, bracing herself for the blast, did not expect what happened next.

The blast did not hit Enishi, but in front her stood Asuna, using a magic shield to absorb the attack. Sakuya, enraged to see her rival standing before her, began firing blasts of energy at her. However, Asuna was stronger when it came to magic, and she took each blast without even flinching. The Lilim taught her how to control it of course. Sakuya, in her anger, used up most of her energy and began to flee. Asuna chased after her along with Enishi.

Feeling safe at last, Hizoku stood up, having regained his body movement. Then, he felt something like his butt. "AH!" He jumped and spun around to see two dog-like ears in front of him. He looked down to see a werewolf-like girl sniffing him up and down. It was Kei. She looked up at him and smiled that toothy smile he knew so well.

"FOUND YOU~!" she cried out as she leapt on top of Hizoku and began licking his face as her tail wagged.

"KEI!? Is that you?"

"Yep! Happy to see me?"

"I guess so."

"YAY! But no time for snuggles! We must hurry!" She then picked Hizoku in her arms, with amazing strength, princess style (which was extremely embarrassing for Hizoku to say the least) and Kei began to chase after Asuna and the others. But she soon realized that it would be faster if she was on all fours. She then put Hizoku on her back and ran on her hands and feet like a wolf.

Hizoku, completely baffled by the current situation, continued asking himself questions. "Why would they become succubi?" "What was the point?" "Was Asuna the one who turned Riri into one last night?" "Now that I think about it, Riri is probably still waiting for me! FUCK!" This sudden realization and near panic was soon put to rest as Riri came flying next to them.

Hizoku stared blankly at Riri as she waved and said "Hi!" before snuggling up to Hizoku. However, a sudden stop caused Hizoku to slip out of her arms and flip over Kei and land on his ass.

"OW! Be a little gentler." However, as he looked back at them, he noticed they were looking at something else. He looked in the direction they were looking and saw that Asuna and Enishi had cornered Sakuya. Her minions were paralyzed on the floor. Sakuya was weak now. He rage earlier caused her to use up almost all of her energy. Not to mention she used even more energy this past few days or so just to spread her influence around the school. Hizoku saw Asuna and Enishi standing over her in triumph.

Asuna spoke in an angry tone. "You corrupted the entire school and planned to take Hizoku for yourself. This wasn't how it was supposed to happen!"

Sakuya grinned. "WRONG! He is MINE! After all, 'All is fair in Love and War,' right?"

Asuna was practically steaming. "NO!" she shouted, causing a shockwave to pulse through the school. "We were all supposed to be happy. TOGETHER! We would ALL give our love to him! It was the best outcome! But YOU had to ruin it! With your selfish desires!"

Asuna's hair had now began to sort of flow about, it's color changing to a dark red color. "But now," she said. "I can't let you go. You planned to steal our happiness for your own. Instead of sharing, you wished to steal. I can't let this go unpunished!" Asuna held out a hand as wind formed in her palm in the shape of a ball. "You've brought this upon yourself. You were our friend, and you tried to harm us. I'm sorry, Sakuya." And just before she shot this ball of wind at Sakuya, Hizoku, acting on pure instinct to protect his friend, leapt in between the two, taking the blast of wind straight to his gut. Pain shot through his body. The blast was not meant to cause any true harm. It was merely concussive force. However, it was enough to open the scar on his stomach.

As Hizoku fell, he recalled what he saw just before he leapt in the way. He saw Sakuya's face from before, as she was being bullied by those girls. He saw tears in Sakuya's face. He did not hear the words of "love" coming from Asuna's mouth. He only heard words of hatred. He only saw his friends turn against each other. And he knew he was the cause of it all. He decided to step in. To protect the friendship he held so dearly. He knew he had to do something. Throughout his life, he acted as a shield. And that's all he was good at. So that's what he did. He became the shield once more.
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I was going to make this longer, but it should be fine as it is. Hope y'all enjoyed it!
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Sorry for the abrupt ending. Had to be able to post it sooner or later.
No problem MonsterGirlLuver It a shame he didn't get any play from the Principal and Nurse. I was kinda expecting him to have some fun but that atmosphere would've been ruined... :nerd:

Still I've enjoyed the update. :love: :haha:
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Hm. I'm trying to decide what to do with my next chapter. Should I have Hizoku be injured once more and have the conflict resolved that way, or have some big inspiring speech? Need feedback if you wish to see the next chapter. If I don't get some feedback, I'll just flip a coin and you'll have to deal with the outcome.

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My bad...and don't worry, you are loved :love:
I prefeer injury and conflict, but that's me.
But please, refresh my memory a little...you haven't introduced the katana wielding chick, right?
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ENISHI! She's been introduced! She was the first of his friends he saw in the school, well, first one he saw and actually introduced herself.
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Eeerhh..as a succubus, I mean. Or shall I call her Berith?
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She's already been introduced as a succubus.
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MonsterGirlLuver wrote:She's already been introduced as a succubus.
Then, I seriously believe that I missed something... :?
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Are you talking about when Hizoku meets her at school when she's a succubus, or when she is turned into a succubus? She's the one who saves him from the horny principal and nurse. You could just re-read the story. If I've left out a part then tell me.
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Story has been updated!
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Is no one reading it? :crying:
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Same here I just didn't want to be the first one to post anything.... :crying:

So far I liked how the fight started between Enishi and Sakuya before Asuna's save and Kei's arrival. :nerd:

Still it surprised me that Hizoku would throw himself into the blast meant for Sakuya. :^^;:

It only leave me wondering about the aftermath. :^^:
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Hmm, its a rather nice read, here are my thoughts...

1.A word popped in my head when I read what Hizoku did, the word being "Aegis".(Meaning nothing more than a shield.)

2.I kinda want to hit that darn Lilim upside the head for screwing things up...:sigh:
Then again, the story might've been boring otherwise.
Kmon13 wrote:Still it surprised me that Hizoku would throw himself into the blast meant for Sakuya.
It sure as heck didnt surprise me, I was almost expecting something like this to happen, actually.
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I'm re-reading it, cause I don't remember Enishi/Berith in the story :| , so don't worry, man.
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You re read it yet?
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