PAZ's artwork

[Raet]

It's not about the shape, it's the lighting that you need to fix.

[[BRindustries]]

Interesting tip To make those water drops look even better, put a large, soft lightspot opposite the highlight at the bottom of the waterdrop.

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FTFY.^^

[PAZ]

Well, i already completed it.

[Raet]

She looks good, I like what you did with the water drops, and especially her horns, tail and socks

Here are my criticisms and suggestions.

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Her eyes need more detail. Also, you should start with a less saturated colour and build it up. I made the same mistake up until lake dancer using saturated colours at all times. Coming back to detail, I mean you shade the top of her iris a darker tone, for this one I used purple tones with multiply as the mix type. Using a glow or dodge effect at the bottom part of the iris makes the eye look shinier and thus more appealing.

Her mouth was fine, although the tooth needed to be slightly obscured considering it is a canine. The tooth also needed some shading for lighting.

Her horn closest to us should be seen emerging from her hair, there should also be some hair in front of it. Her ear furthest from us, should be more obscured by her head.

For her midriff, shading the area around her navel gives her body more depth. There should be some shadows visible around her bikini.

As for her leg I mentioned that one before.

I hope this was helpful to you, keep up the great work!

[PAZ]

Thanks for these critics, I will tries fix these next time.

About her eyes(or Eye cause she only use one normally), I was suppose to indicate her eyes is always glowing. I feel that if given her eye more detail. It would mean her eye doesn't glow and only reflect off the lighting.

[Raet]

But you see, the problem is it does not look like it is glowing, it just looks solid. To make it glow you should use a separate layer on low opacity set to glow dodge, glow or dodge. You also need to darken the colour of the sclera(white of her eye) to make the glow stand out more.

something like this

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As you can see I made her eye look more like it is glowing, but kept the detail. Before you add the glow the eyes should always have the necessary details.

Here is a glow tutorial for you

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[PAZ]

^ Well I will see about that.

Anyway, sorry for not posting for awhile. Busy in life and artblock at time, but I finally get the pose out. I know alot of thing need to be fixed but I can't quite get it right.

[PAZ]

[Animajunki123]

Oh, nice. Dragon I take it? not sure what she's doing with her tail, but it looks lewd.

[[BRindustries]]

Dem convenient censors tho.
I personally would've preferred her waist to be a bit shapelier, (it looks a bit flat to me) but very alluring nonetheless. :3