To the World of MGE

Shuu's adventures in the world of Monster Girls

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Ok I was just wondering. I wanted to make sure that people saw her character that way.

EDIT - Shuu is still in danger in Chapter 19.
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I thought that love had given up on me...but while I was here, I found that love had different shapes and was in different places. I experienced so many types of love. After traveling this world, I can say this for certain: I love monster girls! --Shuu from To the World of MGE
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Oh crap Erika saved Shuu, fed him, got the guy drunk and raped him... :nerd:

And after everything is done she want him to take responsibly.... :crying:

That guy doesn't get a break... :crying: :wall:

If I remember correctly Centaurs have a tendency not to take rejection very well and use arrows to do their talking for them... he should run! :hate:
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I wonder who else will seek him out for companionship while he runs for his life....
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A witch/Baphomet who need a big brother for their Sabbath...

A Traveling Vampire noble who's traveling the land seeking out a lover/ servant of her own...

A Hobgoblin who wouldn't mind Shuu handling her goods

Or a Dark Priest who Erika finds that feels Shuu's holy waters should be for her drinking only...
Still it was good to see... keep it up...
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Thanks. Yup Centaurs don't take too well to rejection.

Finally, I get to give you something you don't expect. Chapter 20 is up now. I apologize if it leaves a bittersweet taste. I felt a little bad with the way I ended this chapter (I don't actually like what Shuu did, but I guess it was necessary). Hopefully, I can write a happier chapter for the next one.
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I thought that love had given up on me...but while I was here, I found that love had different shapes and was in different places. I experienced so many types of love. After traveling this world, I can say this for certain: I love monster girls! --Shuu from To the World of MGE
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Well I didn't like how Shuu left Erika either...
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But she wasn't putting emotional effort in keeping him either...
Now Re and Ru on the other hand...
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... one word comes to mind

Damn!
Still I figured Elizabeth could make the effort in making an honest man out of him...(providing her rivals don't first)
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However the only one with true claim to him first is... really the person who met him first.

Personally a certain Lilim need to step up her game or she may end up having to go to see her mother throne room like her sister Ilivana did to settle all agreements regarding Shuu. (see my blog for details)
However I'm very surprised that Shuu not a Incubus yet with the way he's going around...
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But I'm not rushing the work of a good writer's storyline so keep it up...
PS. the Anime clip you saw earlier
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it's from an Anime translated "Princess Jellyfish" (The guy works for his in the Diet building and the woman trying to blackmail him.
Still it a good update despite the dude running out on two monster women. (But in his defence if the other found him leaving wouldn't go so smoothly with the Erika as it did with Re and Ru. :wall:

I hope to see more soon when you get the chance. :nosebleed: :love:
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Glad you enjoyed the updates. The next chapter is up so you can take a look at that. This time he wasn't a jerk like he was last chapter...then again, I still feel sorry for Ru and Re.

In writing this story so far, I can safely say this: damn...I love all these girls. Shuu you lucky bastard!
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Indeed he is DS indeed he is...

Still I waiting to see what comes next.
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Well, hopefully I can pump out the next chapter soon then.
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I thought that love had given up on me...but while I was here, I found that love had different shapes and was in different places. I experienced so many types of love. After traveling this world, I can say this for certain: I love monster girls! --Shuu from To the World of MGE
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What you did with Ru and Re was harsh, man... :crying:
Why couldn't they go with him and the girls!!!
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:wall: I feel so bad for them too. There's a reason why they couldn't go with him, but I guess that might have to wait until later.
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it's interesting to see someone chose such a rare order to present the MGE. the alraune>>honeybee/hornet was predictable, but inserting a mantis really caught me off guard (oh boy, shanata is such a lovable character!) and it's prizeable what you did to free Shuu from the dark elf.
by the way, I'm impressed how well you thought the main characters name and background to macht future events instead of matching these latest to Shuu. WELL DONE!
but,
what you did to Ru AND SPECIALLY to Re
*gives a clean tantō*
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Thanks for the compliments.

I'm SO SORRY, Ru and Re! I know I'm an ass for making you go through that!
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So now a sexy bunny has joined the group... cool... :nosebleed: :love:

I also found it quite funny in how the Mantis keeps outdoing both Lizardman and Salamander when they argue.... :shock:

So now horny Werebunny has hopped into the group and want to have his kids... :^^;:

Still I wonder how the group got Shuu's clothing back and how long it will take the centaur to hunt him down. :nerd:


Until then still watching....
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dragonstryke58 wrote:Thanks for the compliments.

I'm SO SORRY, Ru and Re! I know I'm an ass for making you go through that!
It's ok my friend, there is nothing to be sorry about. I know it's hard, but as the writer you are responsible of the story you make and just painting everything pink wont improve neither the story plot nor your skill and prestigie as writer.
Be hard with the punishments and trials, be generous with the rewards and happy moments, pour your heart into your stories and you will see as they answer your feelings.

The way of the writer is like the way of the kami, both will eventually have to choose the best for the whole over the best for the ones.
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Yes, man...It's just...I have a soft spot for slime babies...but hey, its your story, do what you believe is right.

*A few hours later, Shuu suddenly noticed a gloomy and omnious, scary hooded figure out of the corner of his eye, following his group*
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Hehe...but it seems no one noticed the special thing I have in store for Ru and Re. :perv:
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dragonstryke58 wrote:Hehe...but it seems no one noticed the special thing I have in store for Ru and Re. :perv:
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I hooooopeeeee....soooooo....
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seeing how you had already matched Shuu for situations like the battle with the shinobi I can expect you already have a event you wanted to write and needed ru and re to be roaming free, but close to Shuu.
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you see, this new about having something planned for the slimes and since you never said that Ru and Re didn't followed Shuu makes me bet for you writing a chapter were Shuu is in probles and they rescue him OR you simply dye them red and send them in his way again :D
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awesome story but damn baster having a hell of a time even more now that he a father and god know is the others girls a preg *shanana *:crying:

and damn not fair :wall: poor re and ru dude :wall:
and now a wererabby that want his kids :@_@: :tantrum: :nono: shuu is beyond fuck
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Thanks. Well, I plan on somehow making it up to Ru and Re...though there will probably be a few more chapters before then.

Wow...I guess everyone loves Ru and Re...I guess it's because Re is so cute!
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I thought that love had given up on me...but while I was here, I found that love had different shapes and was in different places. I experienced so many types of love. After traveling this world, I can say this for certain: I love monster girls! --Shuu from To the World of MGE
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that and a slime baby to cute to not love i just hope it all work out for all of them
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