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Since my friend's chameleon died, I am currently redrawing the chameleon girl I once draw years ago.

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The chameleon girl has a very "strange" look on her face, but it really suits a chameleon in my opinion. Where is the first manga page from by the way? With the girl getting bullied?
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My friend tried to draw a doujin, about the girl however. with the planned story make him unable to finish the doujin in time so he switches to the shark mermaid story instead
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Rest in peace, Karma the chameleon.
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Greetings
Peacekeeper1894 wrote:Rest in peace, Karma the chameleon.
How did she exactly passed away? Or are you talking about your friend´s real chameleon,
implying that the remake of this monster girl is meant to commemorate the animal´s
departure?

By the way, the chameleon girl looks as if she hadn´t gotten any sleep in a long while.
Was that your intention, or merely wanted to give her a "gloomy" look?

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Subliminal wrote:Greetings
Peacekeeper1894 wrote:Rest in peace, Karma the chameleon.
How did she exactly passed away? Or are you talking about your friend´s real chameleon,
implying that the remake of this monster girl is meant to commemorate the animal´s
departure?

By the way, the chameleon girl looks as if she hadn´t gotten any sleep in a long while.
Was that your intention, or merely wanted to give her a "gloomy" look?

Regards.
Yes, it is my friend's chameleon. It inspire me to draw her like that in the first and it passed away from old age.

Karma have these wrinkle under its eyes while staring blankly and my friend agree that it is quite fit Karma
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It's being awhile... :D
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Greetings
Peacekeeper1894 wrote:It's being awhile... :D
Nice, bright and smooth colouring one ought to say.

Things to highlight are the smooth edges found on the shading which
brings more realism to the image. Interesting details that may go
unnoticed but are worth noting are the drops of water coming down
from different parts of the lizard woman´s body, as well as the nicely
rendered fingernail on her claw´s thumb.

Things to critique: once you zoom in the picture you can notice some
"imperfections" and "jumps" on the edges of the shadings, although
this is due for you not being used to using the mouse, and can simply be
solved with more practice. Also, the hair while not bad gives the
impression to have been left unfinished, but is not necessary a big issue.

The Salamander´s girl eyes should not have such dark scleras (the white
zone of the eyes) even when it is not in contact with the light source.
You may want to colour them with a lighter shade of grey.

Other than that, looking forward to the finished version.

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Noted on the eyes, oh. One thing, There used to be a problem about my monitor's resolution that when myself look at it and see they are normal, however. My friend point it out that I should check my resolution setting at they look too slender and I have to "scratch" the wide of the image to make them look normal and the line look bad.
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Are they taking a bath? From the perspective and the way the legs disappear, it seems so...
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The water on body doesn't make it obvious?
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Um, I didn't see much in the way of water on body, the only places where that might be are the salamander's tail - which looks more like you just didn't finish coloring it - and two spots on the lizardwoman, which are kinda hard to see unless zoomed in (and even then, my first thought was *sweat*) It's a good picture though :)
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Well, given it's still a work in progress...
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I leave the "Work in progress" in the thumbnail caption, where did it gone?!
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Calm down, dearest... must have been just a strange behavior of the forum. Happens...

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...well... thanks for comfirming it as a bath scene. Made the picture a little hotter and fantasizing on my imagination. ♥
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I will make different faces for them to improve your imagination. Some small progress.

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Greetings

Your progress is looking good but let me ask you, what is that white
thing on top of the girl´s head? Is it maybe a dyed flock of hair?

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Oh it just the part that haven't get colored yet, I just reworked the lighting on the lizard girl and fix some part I missed.
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How about an update man, did you finish the Salamander yet? :)
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