ShadowTengu wrote:Ha! I could never forget a "Gonna kill you" look like that! XD And is the Doujin any good? :3
He requested me not to leak it, but I can tell you the story.
The sharkmaid saved a man who decide to drown himself in the sea, as he come to. He was surprised at the sharkmaid, as he never seen monster girl before. She forbid him to suicide in this area because the fishes will eat the body and she could eat up eating the fishes that ate him body.
Afterward, she goes back to the sea to look for food for the starving man and he reminded why he decide to suicide because he felt so useless. He yelled and surprised the sharkmaid, who then punch him in the head afterward. He explained why he suicide as the sharkmaid asked.
So, she cheer him up and sent him out. Before the man leave, he ask her. "Can I come back to visit you?" She smiles and say "Make sure you bring some fish next time.
Okay, I am too sleepy to think about the grammar. Also, Dream Demon have a vow for not drawing R-18.
Imagine yourself as a mermaid or merman, minding your own business in the sea. Suddenly a fish web comes down and wrap around you, pulling you out of your home sea. And then get tied up for being a non-human.
Well now, that's amazing. I love her expression! She looks angry, but she's also blushing a bit; does that means she's a tsundere? Man, if only I could read that manga....
Also, you did great with the shading. I really like the glistening effect on her skin.
I like where this is going! Though she seems to have a bit too much jaw there. See if erasing a bit of that chin/neck line will make it look better!... Hmm...
That's pretty much my input so far. But if you give this as much care as you did Dream's sharkgirl I think it'll be amazing!
