Praxis: The Tale of The Blue Owl

A story about a boy's adventure across the world.

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Woah! This was an excellent interlude, I liked Nir and Kumi both were very cute and I shall add those two new towns as soon as possible. Just remember Gentle Fire lands is actually Gentle Flame lands.
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Not a bad thing you got going on here kill moves. The emotions this story makes me feel for certain moments and characters is spot on. The next arc looks promising and I guess that female Knight with the fangs is gonna be a major villian in it, hopefully I see more of her and the other new characters.
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The next chapter is up, everybody, where we enter the second arc of four.

No rants this time. Only tears...

P.S. I'm going to rewrite the first arc since there was a lot of holes and mistakes in there. Of course, don't hold your breath for it.
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Ah! I loved this chapter! This was really great Killmoves! You got the character of this mamonme perfect, I loved the ...... on this island, it is quite possible for ruins of that sort to lie hidden in many places across Praxis. I will say Cloy was lucky to have landed on that island because the other islands are home to Al' miraj, blonde warrior bunny girls with a black unicorn horn... And they are far more fierce than an impundulu.

I wonder what is going to happen to them next :hero:
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