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I feel some Aegis/Aigis vibes here.
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Oh WOW! She's lovely. Wow, very nice..KC outdid himself. I love her overall design- especially the metallic skirt and body type. She remind me a bit of Aigis (P3). I'd like one of a pure freshly installed form with a custom OS, and treat her well. :mrgreen:

She'd make a fine addition to The EYE's army.
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I feel some Aegis/Aigis vibes here.
It would be weird as hell if you weren't able to feel them.

Considering that quite a huge chunk of DQ's monster bestiary was used as a basis for this setting, Final Fantasy was also used as recurrent "inspiration" as well (including "Dragon Zombie" more than incorrect name... which it's been a regular in FF's bestiary since 1992) and Lenneth's long lost cousin, who betrayed Lord Odin in order to join the eventual de facto loser known as "Chief God" (Among other things of course), it was something bound to happen.

Visually wise it's actually quite a neat design, but this setting has taught me time and again that a pretty cover is nowhere near enough to make an interesting book...
Hopefully this one will get some decent background to justify its surprisingly high popularity (as compared with most recent entries it already has a solid advantage in terms of fanart).
And Kaijin you are the "Perentie" of this place, IMO.
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She has magic bullets.
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Ladies and Gentlemen, the rapebot.
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We refuse to follow your lead, and accept your orders.

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The Profile is up on the other MG site if ya'll wanted to give it a peek.

I'll say this though, she's... hum... she offers a bit in the way of history, but she's rather sweet as well. Course thats my opinion.
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Well, she certainly makes for a good substitute for now for a mecha junkie like myself
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Oh A lovely Automaton girl. I'm pleasantly surprised. Being the Doll lover I am I quite like the idea of the mechanical dolls. I guess it helps that I like girls like KOS-MOS of Xenosaga and Vante of Queen's Blade: Rebellion. Still, wonderful job KC <3
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Since this one happens to have been translated aswell... I guess that it's fair to give my two cents already.

Her looks are cleary based on those of Aigis/Aegis, but her background makes her more similar to Huitzil/Phobos from the Vampire series and her personality seems heavily inspired on that of that of Dragon Ball's Number 8 (or as Americans know him for reasons way beyond my grasp "Eighter") AND Dragon Ball Z's Number 16.

I can't help but saying that I'm slightly disappointed on how this one turned out though, I expected this one to be emotionless (it's a golem...even if it's a mechanical one to begin with), but other than its "emergency mode" rape mode on-off switch and its weakness to electricity (which once again should be expected to begin with)... it's a really bland entry (once again IMHO).

Visually wise as I already mentioned it looks really nice and all, but in the end (to me at the very least that is) is just another pretty cover with no near enough content to fully complement it (it feels almost as if he poured all the effort into the Gremlin's).
And Kaijin you are the "Perentie" of this place, IMO.
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It's a golem with a registration process and a weakness to electricity, though it would also appear that these ones can't be modified to the same extent that the original golem is, and are all stoic in disposition.

Ehh... I was not expecting anything so I can't say I'm disappointed, though the ancient civilization seems rather intriguing (as much as all ultramodern dead civilizations are, at least.) Could have been done better and maybe thrown a complex somewhere, a callout to the whole being a death machine in the past thing. But the calm android take on things is... Alright.
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