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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 09 Posted)
*gasp* VIOLENCE! Against people who deserve it! HUZZAH!!!
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 09 Posted)
Just a bit of what is going to happen next
Remember, Levi is kind with Robert and Amy because they are her children, but that doesn't mean she has to be kind with everybody else
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 09 Posted)
I give her a my applause for what she did on Robert's behalf....
Let's be honest they deserve no mercy...
Not one bit....
Can't wait to see the updates when it's finished....
Let's be honest they deserve no mercy...
Not one bit....
Can't wait to see the updates when it's finished....
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 09 Posted)
Yeesh ,talk about fearsome,Leviathan has a mean streak on her,can't say that the bastards didnt deserve it though.
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We refuse to follow your lead, and accept your orders.
Nor will we obey your rules, and do things your way.
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We refuse to follow your lead, and accept your orders.
Nor will we obey your rules, and do things your way.
We we will fight for our cause, and die for it with no regrets.
REBEL
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
Got again that "few characters" error once more. Anyway here it is, Chapter 10
Chapter 10
Chapter 10
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
well that a surprise she turning more human to
Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
Well done indeed. I didn't notice as many small grammatical errors that you usually have. I just saw a misplaced quotation or two. A rather nice chapter and whatnot.
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
Wow she dealt with Robert's real parent in a fashion I found acceptable, I also liked how she was able to meet with Jennevieve again even though little robby had to get sick because of it....
I'm just surprised at how Levi see herself as a liar but could understand if she feeling bad about how she came into his life but she did what she felt was right and took him away from an abusive situation ( and it cool how to have a mother who can create a play world for her kid using magic. ) and gave him a happy childhood.
Well that it for me I've got some major writing to do now...
cheers
I'm just surprised at how Levi see herself as a liar but could understand if she feeling bad about how she came into his life but she did what she felt was right and took him away from an abusive situation ( and it cool how to have a mother who can create a play world for her kid using magic. ) and gave him a happy childhood.
Well that it for me I've got some major writing to do now...
cheers
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Okay, I'll corrected all the mistakes I could find.
@MonsterGirlLuver I´m glad that you're still around my man. And yes, maybe I'm finally improving a bit, who knows. Glad you liked the changes.
@Kmon Glad you like it, man! Levi feels guilt because she knows her lie can last forever. Being a mother has been a really eye opening experience for her, although she still love to do perverted things (later you'll see a bit of her pervertness [poor Robert and Amy. Probably, this is going to look a bit like NTR but don't worry they'll be fine and this experience is what is going to turn Levi into the super mom we all know and love ) like drink cum, being DP'd and similar stuff, the thing is, sometimes, she thinks that if some other succubus'd do something similar to Robert, she simply couldn't stand it . That's why she has become more considerate and that's the reason why a lot of monster moms ends doing it with their human cargos.
"If someone is going to rape my child, wouldn´t it be better if it would be me, the only being in this world that really loves him/her/them?" Or sometimes, the have thought's similar to this:
"No human whore is going to take away from me the most important thing in my whole life! If he/she/they wants to feel the pleasures of the flesh, no one better than his/her/their own mother to guide him/her/them through this experience!" And for Vampires and Dragons, well, they think a bit like this.
"My superior child deserves a superior pussy! And since I´m the only superior being around here, We shall mate!" @BlueSalamander She is only becoming a better mom
@MonsterGirlLuver I´m glad that you're still around my man. And yes, maybe I'm finally improving a bit, who knows. Glad you liked the changes.
@Kmon Glad you like it, man! Levi feels guilt because she knows her lie can last forever. Being a mother has been a really eye opening experience for her, although she still love to do perverted things (later you'll see a bit of her pervertness [poor Robert and Amy. Probably, this is going to look a bit like NTR but don't worry they'll be fine and this experience is what is going to turn Levi into the super mom we all know and love ) like drink cum, being DP'd and similar stuff, the thing is, sometimes, she thinks that if some other succubus'd do something similar to Robert, she simply couldn't stand it . That's why she has become more considerate and that's the reason why a lot of monster moms ends doing it with their human cargos.
"If someone is going to rape my child, wouldn´t it be better if it would be me, the only being in this world that really loves him/her/them?" Or sometimes, the have thought's similar to this:
"No human whore is going to take away from me the most important thing in my whole life! If he/she/they wants to feel the pleasures of the flesh, no one better than his/her/their own mother to guide him/her/them through this experience!" And for Vampires and Dragons, well, they think a bit like this.
"My superior child deserves a superior pussy! And since I´m the only superior being around here, We shall mate!" @BlueSalamander She is only becoming a better mom
There are those who would scorn good-natured people. Even if God himself will
not show his face, a heartful person will one day take God's place in
visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
not show his face, a heartful person will one day take God's place in
visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
Yeah both of those make perfect sense.
The Orge/ Amazoness/ Salamander/ one on the top....
and the Succubus/ Vampire/ Dragons /Alp for the second...
as for her being supermon she did a good job by flying him to the nearest Hospital before rushing him to a Emergency Room....
By the way you may want to check the monstergirl quotes when you get a chance....
The Orge/ Amazoness/ Salamander/ one on the top....
and the Succubus/ Vampire/ Dragons /Alp for the second...
as for her being supermon she did a good job by flying him to the nearest Hospital before rushing him to a Emergency Room....
By the way you may want to check the monstergirl quotes when you get a chance....
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
I'm a fan of incest related stories i read them dont meant i go bagging my sister or mom , i like the you can see it from levi point of view of why she in pain/scare to tell himHood wrote:Okay, I'll corrected all the mistakes I could find.
@MonsterGirlLuver I´m glad that you're still around my man. And yes, maybe I'm finally improving a bit, who knows. Glad you liked the changes.
@Kmon Glad you like it, man! Levi feels guilt because she knows her lie can last forever. Being a mother has been a really eye opening experience for her, although she still love to do perverted things (later you'll see a bit of her pervertness [poor Robert and Amy. Probably, this is going to look a bit like NTR but don't worry they'll be fine and this experience is what is going to turn Levi into the super mom we all know and love ) like drink cum, being DP'd and similar stuff, the thing is, sometimes, she thinks that if some other succubus'd do something similar to Robert, she simply couldn't stand it . That's why she has become more considerate and that's the reason why a lot of monster moms ends doing it with their human cargos.
"If someone is going to rape my child, wouldn´t it be better if it would be me, the only being in this world that really loves him/her/them?" Or sometimes, the have thought's similar to this:
"No human whore is going to take away from me the most important thing in my whole life! If he/she/they wants to feel the pleasures of the flesh, no one better than his/her/their own mother to guide him/her/them through this experience!" And for Vampires and Dragons, well, they think a bit like this.
"My superior child deserves a superior pussy! And since I´m the only superior being around here, We shall mate!" @BlueSalamander She is only becoming a better mom
and for the record bro VAMPIRE AND DRAGON please make it happen
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
Remember when I told you that their first reunion wont be happy
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
After reading the spoiler....
What did Levi do to make Jenn would go that far to get even with her?
I have to know !!!
What did Levi do to make Jenn would go that far to get even with her?
I have to know !!!
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
Egad,such a traumatic scene,a fight and breaks out and levi loses,sad and emotional,makes for a great next chapter.
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We we will fight for our cause, and die for it with no regrets.
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We refuse to follow your lead, and accept your orders.
Nor will we obey your rules, and do things your way.
We we will fight for our cause, and die for it with no regrets.
REBEL
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
omg making her fight for her child from family damn you hood and your epic spoilers i must know what will happen
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Do you really want to know that bad? I could spoil it for you, but...
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visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
not show his face, a heartful person will one day take God's place in
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mmm i think i wait for the whole charter
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Re: Walking Among Us (Chapter 10 Posted)
I forgot to mention this, being the less powerful Lilim, Lotan is only capable of producing Bright Green Demon Realms
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.....huh.... Bright green Realms?
I'm lost I thought that was the Pharaoh.
I'm lost I thought that was the Pharaoh.
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less concetrated DE produces BGDR
There are those who would scorn good-natured people. Even if God himself will
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visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"
not show his face, a heartful person will one day take God's place in
visiting Judgement upon them. This is what is known as "Divine Retribution"